u should name it "You Kill Me (In A Good Way)"
"Heaven Again"
"Saving Grace"
"Beautiful Turbulence"
r "Take Off Your Colours"
"Blue Eyes Don't Lie"
"When We Were Younger"
"Into Your Arms"
"Saving Grace:
"Waiting For My Sun To Shine"
sorry i'm just spitting out song titles i think would fit and this sounds like a really good story omg start it soon please
so i ended up using unspoken destiny. for 2 reasons 1. being i didn't get a notification telling my you'd commented, and i didn't check until today and 2nd because literally the day i posted this quote i was super excited to post it..so i rushed and did it..lol but i like your titles and i think i'll use them as chapter names if thats alright!! anywho here's what i have posted so far
http://onedirectionfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=76325
its only 2 chapter but i have like 8 more written already so i'll update it soon..tell me what you think!!
Lol!! -- here's what i have for it so far ( i have WAYYYY more chapters written than two, but so far i only posted those , tell me what you think so far) http://onedirectionfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=76325
Pretty good! Just a few tips though (since I read, like a lot of books/fan-fics/stories on here) One, when you have a character that is British, Irish, ect ect, when spelling 'mom' spell 'mum', it makes it more realistic. Second, is the writing is a bit sloppy. Erm, what I mean is, the format, makes the words sorta . . . blend together? I'm not sure of the word I'm looking for . . . And third, because there always has to be a third.
Thanks!! haha..i was going to change the format after this..but i didnt because..i dunno..i'm lazy i guess...haha...and i had to pull myself away from twitter to write it...lol....and third..it just wouldn't be right with out a third..lol
I'll be his second sibling! I'm Mallory and I'm sixteen. I have brown hair and blue eyes. I'm really funny, and sweet, and caring as well. I have a bubbly personality, and I would love if you put me in your story!(:
ok so I kind of felt bad since you were the second comment and i didn't want to leave you out so i added you as harry's sister..since appearently THAT was the only open part..but what ever..lol
Hi my name is Crystal and i am average height with long blonde hair and green eyes i would like to be considered for the part of liams second sibling i love to play soccer and volleyball and i have been talk im really sassy :) thanks for your consideration you need to know anything else gimme a comment
My name is Jasey and I'd be cool with getting any one of these parts. I'm 18 and I have blonde hair and hazel eyes, I'm VERY outgoing and I love meeting new people. I like to cheer, dance and act in my free time, fun. Okay. (:
My names Angel(: I would like to get um Zayn's best friend.I have long black hair with dark brown eyes I'm bubbly and smart but I'm kind of shy. I hope I get picked!!!
omg something like this happened to me!
i had this dream with my crush in it and i was cold but he wouldn't give me his sweatshirt -_- so then i went up and got my own sweatshirt to wear lol
but i woke up with the same sweatshirt i had in my dream on...
i wasn't wearing a sweatshirt when i went to bed..
i'm positive about that..
it was freaky haha!
It is scientifically proven that dream's are related to life in some way, so if you have a dream and something happens something like that will happen in real life. It's freaky, but it's true.
can i be either zayns girlfirned , or niall best friend ? my names brenna i funny i eat a lot :) i have blue eyes JUST LIKE NIALLS :) and blonde hair im shy and smart and i careeee more about people then myself and im a great singer :)
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"Heaven Again"
"Saving Grace"
"Beautiful Turbulence"
r "Take Off Your Colours"
"Blue Eyes Don't Lie"
"When We Were Younger"
"Into Your Arms"
"Saving Grace:
"Waiting For My Sun To Shine"
sorry i'm just spitting out song titles i think would fit and this sounds like a really good story omg start it soon please
http://onedirectionfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=76325
its only 2 chapter but i have like 8 more written already so i'll update it soon..tell me what you think!!
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i had this dream with my crush in it and i was cold but he wouldn't give me his sweatshirt -_- so then i went up and got my own sweatshirt to wear lol
but i woke up with the same sweatshirt i had in my dream on...
i wasn't wearing a sweatshirt when i went to bed..
i'm positive about that..
it was freaky haha!