http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/2610360 Please Check out this quote, give me a fave or comment to my questions.
It will mean soo much to me and i will love you forever. i really need my witty sisters right now ):
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Read the first part! I like it how she's out of college but when you're writing don't be like "this happened, then this happened, and then this happened." Give detail. When I read the first part I felt like I was racing through it. Slow down and don't be afraid to just talk. But I like the idea, and I'm interested in seeing what happens. Keep WRITITING!!! Here if you want tips or just to talk (: Thank you for reading LIAN
Hey, you asked my to check out your story, so I did, and it was cute, so far. :] For you, in constructive critizism, I think you might want to work on your creative writing voice, but the plot sounds really good and intense. :D
I think. . .CONTINUE IT! :)
Hi! You favorited my quote about my brother being bullied. Thank you for favoriting, it really does mean a lot♥
But there's this girl, xlaurennnxo23, who made a really mean comment on my quote and it broke my heart.
I was wondering if you could leave her a comment saying that you believe my quote. Hopefully if enough people do that then she might believe.
Please do it, but if you don't I understand.
Thank you(:
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[deleted]1 decade ago
I knowww. It's the prologue right now. I don't know how to explain what a prologue is... its like something that's going to happen later in the book but i cant give away names so it might be confusing. I'm adding more right now. gimme a sec. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING!!!!!!!!
It will mean soo much to me and i will love you forever. i really need my witty sisters right now ):
I think. . .CONTINUE IT! :)
But there's this girl, xlaurennnxo23, who made a really mean comment on my quote and it broke my heart.
I was wondering if you could leave her a comment saying that you believe my quote. Hopefully if enough people do that then she might believe.
Please do it, but if you don't I understand.
Thank you(: