Caitlyn13Cutie

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My name is Caitlyn and I turn 16 on October 20, 1995. I'm a Sophomore, or at least will be if this Summer ever ends. The truth is, I want to grow up. I want to find out where life will take me because,at this point, I'm tired of guessing. Pediatric Surgeon, Army Trauma Surgeon, Defense Attorney, Actress: I want to be them all. But people are quick to tell me I can't. Honestly though, I don't care. It's my life. Everyday people put me down and tell me the things that are wrong for me. Everyone says that their family is their biggest supporters, the ones who love them unconditionally and are there through anything. I don't have a family like that. Everyone in my family is quick to tell me I'm fat or that the activities I'm in are just "not going to get you anywhere in life." I don't care. I am who I am and I fought hard to get to the place I am now. I have great friends. I love God: that's all there is too it. I love to write and read and Cheerleading and Softball are my sports. I have always wanted to play lacrosse. I really hope that one day my story will be a published novel. Everyone has told me it could be, but people don't realize how much of a long shot that is, even for an adult, much less a 15 year old girl who can't even subjugate the verbs of the present participle correctly. (hah) I feel like the odds are always stacked against me and that I'm a little sea turtle tryign to make it to shore in a thunder storm. Maybe I'll never get there, but I'll always try. I wish I could go to therapy because I need to just talk to someone and I never feel like I can trust anyone. It's not that my friends have done anything to lose my trust, I'm just super paranoid and can't get over the fact that people tend to screw you over.  I have so many hopes and dreams but I just don't know how to put them all together. I'm steadily figuring out that everything does happen for a reason and that every reason is to make me stronger. :)

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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #3166633
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I want as story review. I don't know if you could actually read it though. Not sure how many chapters, but theres a lot.
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #3221195
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Comment and fave <3
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #3145537
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I can help. I had a MacBook and then went to PC and the transition is difficult but I could help you figure it out. :)
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #3150737
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This never works for me :/
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #3078794
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I really like this story. Great idea and everything. The only thing I don't understand is the Cancer thing. No one can just know she has cancer. it would take tests. not just a loss in balance to know.
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #3081296
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It's not getting boring. The key to writing a good story is sticking to it through the boring parts. Make it interesting. It's your story.
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #3075453
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I'd like one. My story is called "Of Two Minds"
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #3038107
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This is good. Don't try and make it go by fast, because it's the little things, the details, that make the story great.
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #3031633
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My best friend moved at the end of 7th grade. We had been fighting with our other friends at the time and so when she left I had no one. She moved hours away and I never see her. She talks to the friends we had been fighting with now instead of me. The point it, it sucks when people move. But it's up to you to keep up the connection through whatever means you can. use phone, email, even facebook. talk all the time because you'll regret it if you don't.
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #3029212
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I know how you feel. I had a best friend for 7 years and one day she decided that I wasn't a good enough friend and then she dropped me. I had no friends for months until I decided that i needed to stop feeling sorry for myself and find people who could be there for me through anything. Keep looking up. Everything has a weird way of working itself out.
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #3024972
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This is really good. It has a really good take on teen love and it's a little romantic even. Good job :)
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #3005530
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This makes me really proud of you. You seem to have grown so much. Short Stories are wonderful, but I know you can do so much more. Keep on writing. For reference, my story on word is 150 pages. So it's long but that's just because I'm too dumb to find it in me to end it just yet. But keep writing, even if it's only for yourself. Keep writing. As a writer, I know that its always going to make you happy no matter what.
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #2994195
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Wow. I was off for like 24 hours and I come back to this? It really make me think though. Why am I writing? You may be 13 and young but it takes someone that young and humble to write a good story. Mine stories aren't good, they are just me being me. It makes me feel complete to write. You leaving is an eye opener. There's more to life than Witty? Hell yeah. I'm just sad it took someone so much younger than me to say something to make me realize that. I guess I need to reevaluate my life and see if Witty is right for me as well. Your stories were better than mine and you got more readers because you deserved it. I don't have the fan base you do because I don't deserve it. If you can't write on Witty anymore and you were better than me, why should I get to write?
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #2987528
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I have to admit, this story is really. Good. If you develop the character more (such as telling the readers more about their lives) it would be even better.
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #2898941
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My friends facebook name is "No Body" so it's
: No body likes this :)
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #2988147
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This is really good! I love the idea and the direction you are going with it. One suggestion: it would be really cool if there were more developing for the characters. I want to know all about the main character and Kade and Walker.
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #2977130
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OMG write more right now :)
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #2918970
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I love it! OMG thank you so much. I was reading it and was like what? and then i got it. It's perfect
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #2915862
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Sometimes
You have to lose
To know why it is you want to win
cworley95@aol.com
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Caitlyn13Cutie 1 decade ago on quote #2442602
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I actually do this... like a lot. No really. Mostly in my 1st and 6th hour. Everyday.
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