Hmmm, well, you always have to start a new paragraph when a different person starts speaking or time passes by. Add lots of commas!!!! it flows sooo much more smoothly cause you don't have to constantly stop. th. sentence. lol ummm I don't know what else I can give you pointers on! If you need help or opinions or anything all ya gotta do is ask!! :) and by the way it means a lot that you liked mine!! :D
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