CuddlePanda

Red String of Fate

Introduction

“W-wait! Jimmy!" Rachel stretched out her arm and reached for his back,
but she tripped on her own shoelace. Rachel looked up and watched
Jimmy run away. He turned back and gave her a breathtaking smile
and shouted, "I'll be back! Don't wait for me!"
Rachel stared at his slowly disappearing figure and whispered, "Jimmy."
~
Jimmy Kudo is a detective. They call him the "Savior of the Police Force," because 
he solved the most puzzling cases. His father was a famous mystery novelist and his mother
was a beautiful retired actress. His parents were out of the country due to his dad's work,
and Jimmy lived alone in a mansion. Next to his mansion lived his good friend, Professor Agasa.
Also living with the professor was a quiet mysterious girl named Vi Graythorn.
And of course, his childhood friend (and girlfriend?) is Rachel Moore.
Her dad, Richard Moore, is a detective as well, and has his own detective agency,
but he is not that great of a detective as Jimmy. 
Just now, Jimmy and Rachel were on a date to an amusement park called Tropical Land.
A murder case occurred on a roller-coaster and Jimmy solved it with ease. 
~
Rachel closed her eyes and balled her hands into fists.
She thought angrily, 'When I see that punk again, I will kill him!'
(Do not take Rachel's threats lightly, she is a karate champion...
She could kill you if she wants. But she's a nice girl! c:)
* Moore Detective Agency *
"I'm home, Dad!" 
A tall man with a slight mustache looked up from his newspaper and said,
"Hey, Rachel." His desk is cluttered with beer cans and random papers.
"Geez, Dad, can't you clean up after yourself for once?" Rachel asked with exasperation.
Richard said, "Meh, I will..." When he saw Rachel head straight for the phone, he asked, 
"Who are you calling so late at night?" Rachel turned to her dad and said, "... Jimmy."
Richard looked back down at his newspaper with an annoyed expression on his face and said,
"That detective brat? Geez. Didn't you just see him at Tropical Land?"
"Y-yeah, but he left early so I'm just checking up on him!" Rachel said with an uncomfortable smile.
"Hmph!" Richard said and opened a new can of beer.
Rachel dialed Jimmy's house number and waited for him to pick up, but she got his voicemail.
'Weird,' she thought, starting to worry. 'It's been a while since I left Tropical Land.'
Slightly getting desperate, she dialed again, but was greeted again by the voicemail.
'Jimmy, where are you?'
~
Long intro, yes indeed, just deal with it! :) please tell me if you want me to continue
based upon Detective Conan, a show/series which i don't own!
i just loved it and wanted to reword the story and add in my own stuff, too.

  Internet friends seem to be  
more reliable than the friends I see everyday.
*shrugs* no surprise there