JustinCrusade

Chapter 3
 
“Don’t worry about a thing Hannah. You won’t even feel it. You will be asleep the entire time. It will seem like only a second. You might be in pain when you wake up, but that’s what pain medicine is for right?” The surgeon laughed.
I didn’t really find it funny, but I didn’t have any time to object, because right after he said that his nurse put a mask over my mouth and nose. That’s when I passed out.
 
~~~about 6 hours later~~
“How are you feeling?”  It was Evan’s voice. I didn’t want to answer for fear of someone else being in the room. I opened my eyes and saw him standing next to my bed. Sarah was on the other side.
“Well answer your friend Hannah!” Sarah could see him to? I thought only I could see him. I will have to ask him about that later.
“I feel fine. I guess.” My voice cracked a lot. My throat was unexplainably dry. I took a drink of water and sat up. My blonde hair was a mess, my pale blue eyes looked exhausted, and my makeup all came off.
“Well you look tired. Do you want to go back to sleep?” Evan asked sweetly.
“No, I’m fine. But do you think you could get me something to eat? I don’t care what it is.” He nodded his head and left.
“Who is your friend???!!!” Sarah was getting excited. I already knew what she was thinking.
“Just someone I met a couple days ago. No big deal.” She could tell I didn’t want to talk about it.
That’s when I saw the first one. I don’t know how to describe it. Was it a ghost? A demon? Or was it merely a person? Whatever or whoever it was, it made my heart rate go up. the machines were going crazy. All of the commotion made it hard to breath. I heard nurses and doctors yelling something I couldn’t understand. Sarah was besides me crying and saying something. The last thing I saw was Evan sprinting towards the room. He looked so sweet when he had fear and concern mixed together on his angel like face.
“If I am about to die,” I thought, “his face is the last thing I want to see.”
And then I blacked out. 


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Chapter 2
 
I was startled by the question but I didn’t have the time to answer. In the next instant I was in a hospital bed gasping for the air that I couldn’t get. It was nearly impossible to get that first breath. The next thing I knew there were doctors and nurses rushing into the room.
“She’s awake!” A nurse in purple yelled. “Doctor, she is awake!” And then she left the room and the doctor came in.
“Hello Hannah, how are you feeling?” The doctor was surprisingly young and attractive.
“Wh-where am I a-at?” It was impossibly hard to talk, my throat was so dry. I noticed a glass of water to my right. The doctor must have seen my eyeing it because he walked over to get it for me.
“You are at the St. Moris hospital.  Your friend Sarah said you fell off your roof? You are a very lucky girl; you fell almost 30 feet to the ground. Although you did fracture your wrist and break your shoulder bone. But with the surgery we have you scheduled for in about an hour it should heal within three weeks. Perfect timing because your friend tells me that’s when softball starts? We don’t want you to jump right into it, but you will be able to play once it starts.” He said all of this so calmly. He could probably see the look of relief that came across my face.
“Thank you doctor.” I said in a quiet voice.
“We have to get the patient ready for surgery now doctor.” Said the nurse in purple.


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Chapter 1
                All I could hear were the sirens. And shouting, there was a lot of that. That’s all I heard for a while besides the ringing in my head. It was so loud, but the sirens were louder. All the noise was like an earth quake in my head. I just wanted the noise to stop. I tried to open my eyes to see what was going on but I couldn’t. I couldn’t move anything. Not my mouth, arms, legs, nothing. I was a statue. That’s when I heard the voice.
                “You could die any second ya know.”  The voice was really shaky but deep. It was probably a mans. “You can talk to me, I am in your head, not out there. Nobody else will hear you.”
                “Wh-who are you?” I was freaking out.
                “That’s not important,” the voice said. “What is important is that you listen. You are unconscious right now. From the outside anyways. My name is Evan, and I was sent from The Ever After. It is where you go when you die and you still have things you need to finish before your spirit moves on. Some people chose to stay in The Ever After so they can walk the earth.
“The reason I was sent to you was because we are going to let you live, but you are going to experience things you have never experience before. Let me ask you a question.” Evan was so calm it was scary.
“What?” I said, still shaky.
“Do you believe in demons?”