Split.
So i have been writing a story for some time now, and i have a
few short chapters up for sample. So what do you say Witty
sisters, can you help me out, Fave if you will read it and give
me some feedback?
Chapter One:
I am a wreck. Nervous, Vulnerable, but more
often then not Neutral. I live the average life of an expected
teenager, though only on the outside looking in. Coming from my
town, books don't get oftenly read, so judging from my cover
you would never know, never read too much into mine. I have a
natural powdered coloured skin tone, just a light peach tint
colours my skin, year round. My hair is recognised as a washed
out blonde, just like the sand, rolling down just under my
ribs, resembling the waves. My eyes, a dull green, what 'they'
left behind. At least that was what my dad told me, i only
heard those words twice a year if i was lucky. My dad brought a
smile to my face, no matter what, a large differ to a plump
stiff lower lip to which burdens me today. My dad, burdens me
today. I wish it could have been a story to tell. I came from
an abusive family or My dad changed the world or My dad saved
people. But no, he only changed my world, although he isn't
saving me. What he left for me behind, is slowly tearing me
away at the insides. But you don't know me, and if you take
time to read my story, You still won't know me. But i'm judged
by what i tell, if you make it out, your in for a great deal of
suffering and pain. But your the lucky one, the character. As
for my cover is covered in cuts and scars. I am Katie Fletcher.
I am neutral. Nor happy, Nor sad, but more often then not
Emotionless. After my dad left, the real story began. But this
is the last you hear about him, as this is the last i speak. As
for now, i am telling, showing. Little do you know, this story
is not written for my own purpose, not for yours, but for the
ones who can't express the most of themselves. As for my story
my be fiction, the faults that lie within our own are not. So
if it speaks for you, as long as i can help someone else, i am
not helping my self. I do not need to be helped. I am Katie
Fletcher.