Lovinlife228

It was perfect...until you came
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“You’re the best thing that’s ever been mine” as my 7:00am alarm goes off. “Perfect” I said, just another typical day of school. As I got out of bed, picked out clothes, and got ready I was out the door at 7:30am. As I got to Ridgeway High School I see all my friends standing with the guy I have adored since the 3^rd grade, my boyfriend, Logan. I get out of the car, say bye to my mom and rush to see him. As I walk up to see his big red lips saying “Good morning baby” as he gave me a kiss. Seconds later the bell rings and we head to class holding hands. I knew this day was going to be great, I looked cute and I had my boyfriend right by my side. As we walked into the doors I headed straight towards my lockers with Logan following slowly behind with all of the football jocks. “Hey Hannah!” “Hey girl” “You look cute today” “Damn Logan your girlfriend be lookin hot!” is all I hear walking to my locker. Grabbing my books, my best friend walks up talking about the new girl, Danielle. “Did you just say Danielle, Amber?” “Yes, there’s a new girl at our school named Danielle. Apparently she transferred from CCC.” My first thought was the girl from my soccer team. She was little miss perfect in her mind, her parents are rich, she goes to a 16,000 dollar a year school, she has a Porsche, and she is amazing at soccer. The thing is she’s not perfect in fact no one likes her and she is ugly. “Oh god” as that shouts out from my mouth accidently. “What?” Logan replies as he stops his conversation with the jocks because they had to go to class. “Nothing” I said softly, “We better um get to class.” Amber includes. I give Logan one last kiss and as I walk away to hear him say “I’ll see you at lunch baby. I love you.” I act like I didn’t hear what he said and just kept on walking. As me and Amber enter into Ms.Schwingler’s first period Biology her first words were “Your late Hannah. Now take a seat and we will get started.”

 It was perfect...until you came

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As I halfway listen to her blab on about cells I think about Logan and losing him. Danielle has been obsessed with him ever since she found out I liked him. She trys everything to get to him and nothing ever works. But I must admit, she definitely matured and has gotten a little prettier over the summer. As I start to doze off trying to keep my thought off of losing him I hear the big wooden door slowly open. As Ms. Schwingler stops her sentence about biome cells and says “Class, we have a new student today. She transferred from CCC.” When I heard those words my head shot up faster than ever. As I looked up all I could see was that fake smile on her face with those slutty clothes on. “Hi I’m Danielle.” She says. She saw me and waved. I acted like I didn’t see her and just put my head right back on my desk. “Hannah” Ms. Schwingler says. “You have a new lab partner. Introduce yourselves and get to know eachother.” “Don’t worry Ms. Schwingler we already know eachother.” As Danielle puts her stuff on the table. About two minutes later after getting situated, the bell rings. Thank goodness it’s time for lunch where I get to see Logan.

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It Was Perfect...Until You Came
Introduction
Hi I'm Hannah! I'm a 15 year old Sophmore at Ridgeway High School. My life is perfect, I'm pretty, im the most popularist girl at my school, I have my best friend Amber, my perfect boyfriend Logan, and everything goes my way. Well, thats until the new girl, Danielle, comes. She is very rich, goes to a 16,000 dollar school, really good at soccer, and she gets anything she wants. But the thing is, she not pretty but in the guys eyes all they see is her big curves. Just put it this way, she ruined my life taking my boyfriend, best friend, turning everyone against me, and anything else she couldd possibly do. Well, thats until I expose the real truth about her to the whole school at Prom.
Authors note: I know, the introduction isnt that good but I promise the story will get better.