Hi there :) I'm Dakota :D Could you please check out my awkward turrtle of a story?
Yes. I do realize how much i'm you off right now...
I hate when people do this too. It's fliping annoying. But I want people to see my story...
OKAY, I'ma get my awkward annoying butt of your profile.
P.S. I think your gorgeous :D
SHIZ. Now i shound like a blackmailer...
KBYE(:
Hello!! I am sorry about the spam, but I was wondering if you could check out my new story? The prologue is up on my profile. I am new to Witty, and it would mean a lot!! Thank you!! XxxX
heyheyhey! (:
New chapter's up!
Thanks for all the support & hope you like it!
Yes, I do have school now... unfortunately. It's winter and I live in Australia so yeah...
I was goint through my comments and I saw one from you. It said something like,
"Oh Sweet Jesus Remind me to come look at your profile every night before bed so I see something beautiful before I go to sleep."
And then it was about the summer bucket list. It really made my day!(: Thank you gorgeous!
Hey beautiful(: can u please go to this link for me? http://www.kiss108.com/common/shareme5/index.php?linkid=48584 it would make my dayy!!(: (its for 1D)
Aww sweetie, thank you(:
But I'm not Witty famous! Not even close, my dear.
Ready for a vent?
It's my boyfriend. You see, he's not the nicest guy. Actually, he's never the nicest guy. He has hurt me before, he said he was only playing around. But it still hurt. He makes fun of me because I do things I love like writing or acting. He tells me that I'm awkward and stupid. He says I'm not skinny, which he says is a compliment but..? Anyways, my parents don't trust him with me, they think he's dangerous. So I have to end things. I love him, but I don't feel safe, I guess.
Woah, sorry for all that venting, it kinda came out in a rush.
Thank you so much for listening♥
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Ok. Well. Your grammar isn't very good...you change tenses a lot on your story. When I read it I was a little confused as to what was going on. I had to reread things multiple times to understand. Maybe you should have a friend who's good in English proof read it for you? I'm sure you have good ideas and a lot of talent...I think you just rush through your chapters a little.
So, I saw your comment on my best friend's quote and decided to try to help you out too! :D
There's 104 days of summer vacation, and school comes along just to end it. But the annual problem for our generation, is finding a good way to spend it. Like maybe...
Building a rocket, or fighting a mummy, or climbing up the Eiffel tower!
Discovering something that doesn't exist, or giving a monkey a shower! Surfing tidal waves, creating nanobots, or locating Frankenstein's brain...
Sorry, I couldn't resist! :D
Anyway, some really crazy and stupid things that me & my friend wanted to do, are:
-Build a fort made out of only bendy straws and duck tape (we already tried once, and I concluded that we would be the WORST architects!)
-Going to Food Depot, and eating vanilla pudding out of mayonnaise jars
-Going to Food Depot and drinking blue Powerade out of Windex bottles
That's all that I can remember right now... Sorry, this was probably like, the longest comment in history. :D
Hope I helped! :)
Alright, heres my bucket list;
Sneak out
ellens dance dare
all day beach session
kiss boys
have a lemonade stand
co ed sleepover
make a music video
lose lots of weight
become tan
sneak into the movies
bridge jumping
chalk up a whole sidewalk
have a legit picnic
character drawings
go a whole day with a british accent
twister with a bunch of friends
flash mob
water gun fight
carve names into a tree
meet new people
sing to people on the streets
summer fling
drive a car
water gun fight around town
walk gangsta around town
Yes. I do realize how much i'm you off right now...
I hate when people do this too. It's fliping annoying. But I want people to see my story...
OKAY, I'ma get my awkward annoying butt of your profile.
P.S. I think your gorgeous :D
SHIZ. Now i shound like a blackmailer...
KBYE(:
New chapter's up!
Thanks for all the support & hope you like it!
Yes, I do have school now... unfortunately. It's winter and I live in Australia so yeah...
"Oh Sweet Jesus Remind me to come look at your profile every night before bed so I see something beautiful before I go to sleep."
And then it was about the summer bucket list. It really made my day!(: Thank you gorgeous!
But I'm not Witty famous! Not even close, my dear.
Ready for a vent?
It's my boyfriend. You see, he's not the nicest guy. Actually, he's never the nicest guy. He has hurt me before, he said he was only playing around. But it still hurt. He makes fun of me because I do things I love like writing or acting. He tells me that I'm awkward and stupid. He says I'm not skinny, which he says is a compliment but..? Anyways, my parents don't trust him with me, they think he's dangerous. So I have to end things. I love him, but I don't feel safe, I guess.
Woah, sorry for all that venting, it kinda came out in a rush.
Thank you so much for listening♥
And keep writting!!!
PLEASE!!
and I'll be sure to check out your story:)
There's 104 days of summer vacation, and school comes along just to end it. But the annual problem for our generation, is finding a good way to spend it. Like maybe...
Building a rocket, or fighting a mummy, or climbing up the Eiffel tower!
Discovering something that doesn't exist, or giving a monkey a shower! Surfing tidal waves, creating nanobots, or locating Frankenstein's brain...
Sorry, I couldn't resist! :D
Anyway, some really crazy and stupid things that me & my friend wanted to do, are:
-Build a fort made out of only bendy straws and duck tape (we already tried once, and I concluded that we would be the WORST architects!)
-Going to Food Depot, and eating vanilla pudding out of mayonnaise jars
-Going to Food Depot and drinking blue Powerade out of Windex bottles
That's all that I can remember right now... Sorry, this was probably like, the longest comment in history. :D
Hope I helped! :)
Sneak out
ellens dance dare
all day beach session
kiss boys
have a lemonade stand
co ed sleepover
make a music video
lose lots of weight
become tan
sneak into the movies
bridge jumping
chalk up a whole sidewalk
have a legit picnic
character drawings
go a whole day with a british accent
twister with a bunch of friends
flash mob
water gun fight
carve names into a tree
meet new people
sing to people on the streets
summer fling
drive a car
water gun fight around town
walk gangsta around town
hope you like it :)