OnceUponAStory

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1D_Fanfiction 8 years ago
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hi i miss you
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OnceUponAStory 8 years ago
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Hey, I know what you mean. Its been a long time since I've been on here and honestly, if you hadn't of commented I don't know when I would have gotten back on. Brought back a ton of memories seeing your username haha how have you been?
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1D_Fanfiction 8 years ago
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I keep forgetting this website exists wow. but seeing your name in my notifications is definitely a flashback. I've been incredibly busy, i've written a lot but I am in that dreaded spot of unable to finish stories. How are you doing?
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1D_Fanfiction 8 years ago
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I keep forgetting this website exists wow. but seeing your name in my notifications is definitely a flashback. I've been incredibly busy, i've written a lot but I am in that dreaded spot of unable to finish stories. How are you doing?
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OnceUponAStory 7 years ago
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I know what you mean! I've been writing poetry like crazy lately. I'm on spring break and i've written 10 poems in like two days, which is crazy haha i miss working with you on story ideas and reading your fanfics.
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1D_Fanfiction 7 years ago
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me too! I'm currently working on a new story and I have a few that I have on hold. I miss working together! Do you have a kik or wattpad or anything that we could catch up?
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VioletCherries 7 years ago
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I do have a kik! its VioletCherries!
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TaintedCherry 9 years ago
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Hey I'm one of your readers... Not sure if you remember me but.. Is it worth reading what you've posted or will it ruin the story? I'd haut want to know from the writes perspective. It's great anyway :)
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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I do remember you haha ummm… I don't know if it will ruin the story for you or not. Basically I just posted random pieces I had written that I was going to use when I got there if I hadn't decided to stop working on the story. I guess its sort of a personal preference. Some of it isn't great and I may not have ever posted but it was all written back when I was truly committed to it, so it's not some half written thing. Sorry, that probably wasn't much help
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Zoë* 9 years ago
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I actually loved the story despite not liking One Direction. Glad you gave us some chapters:) just read them all. You ended it perfectly(:
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Thank you(: I'm really glad you enjoyed the story, and giving you all the chapters was the least I could do(:
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YoungForever_723* 9 years ago
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Hey Girl! I just wanted to let you know that I did update UNINH recently. I wasn't sure if you got a wattpad yet but I just thought I'd let you know! :)xx
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Thanks for letting me know! I just got one last week and forgot to tell you, sorry /: LOVE the story by the way!!(:
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YoungForever_723* 9 years ago
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That's no problem!! And awh thank you so so much!!! :) xx
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tigersforever 9 years ago
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could you help me with my story i am so stuck and dont know how its gonna happen, you dont have to read the whole story just chapter 9 please and thank you
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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I would love to help, but I had a track meet today and still have a couple hours worth of homework to do. Can i help tomorrow? I would tonight but I have way too much homework
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tigersforever 9 years ago
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thats fine thanks
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Jadialynn 9 years ago
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omg i can totally relate to your "writer problems" series haha... do you ever have that problem where you write something and you're like "this is great! i should get it published!" then you read it again like a week later and you're like "sweet jesus it's like a four-year-old wrote this -___-"
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Yes!! All the time!! What about when you wake up in the middle of the night and have an amazing idea so you write it down and go back to sleep all happy and proud of yourself and then you wake up the next morning and read over it and you're like "what the h.ll was i smoking when i wrote this??"
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Jadialynn 9 years ago
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ahaha yes!! the "notes" section of my phone is full of those lol!!! what about when you make a really good analogy or metaphor or something and the sentence is really beautiful but you feel like you can never use it again because everyone will notice and judge you???
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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oh my goodness yes!!! I do that all the time! What about when you have an initial way you planned on a story/poem ending and you really like it but then you get another idea that takes the ending in a completely different direction that you like just as much and then you can't decide which ending to use?? That one happens to me all the time!
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Jadialynn 9 years ago
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uhh.. that's only the story of my life!! what about when you have a really spcific meaning you want your poem to portray, but you also need it to rhyme or something, and you feel like you have to sacrifice the meaning of your poem so that it will fit a specific format??
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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all the time! Or I have been known to make much words and phrases just so it rhymes haha do you ever have it where you have it where you will just be sitting in class and suddenly come up with a really good line for a poem but no way to write it down??
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Jadialynn 9 years ago
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omg yes!! like in the car or something and you just have to sit there and hope you remember it haha. do you ever write something that you feel is like so amazing and perfect and you just want to share it with the world but at the same time it's WAYY too personal for you to share with anyone? i hate that-___-
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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I know exactly what you mean! Sometimes I hope I have an Emily Dickinson ending where someone finds all of my overly personal poems and stories after I die and publishes them haha is that weird?
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Jadialynn 9 years ago
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haha not at all!!! and also do you ever write characters that are just thinly vailed versions of people you know and you're just like 'okay time to make a rule that no one i know is allowed to read this'
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Oh goodness yes! haha(: what do you write most? Like poems? or..?
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Jadialynn 9 years ago
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realistic fiction... right now i'm righting a book that takes place in mississippi in the 70s and the director of literature at the arts school in my county is going to help me get it published!(: wbu?
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Oh my God thats awesome!! Umm well lately i've been on a poetry kick, but I did just start a book of sorts thats going to be like a daily devotional only instead of being religion related its going to be for people who struggle with self harm, depression, eating disorders, bullying, body image, stuff like that.
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Jadialynn 9 years ago
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wow that's such an amazing idea.. once it's done, you should tell witty about it cause it would help so many people
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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I know, I plan on it... Witty actually kind of helped inspire it haha(:
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YoungForever_723* 9 years ago
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Hey! Just wanted to drop by and let you know that I just added another chapter of You & I & Her! It's "I'm Gonna Pick Up the Pieces" hope you like it! :) xx
http://www.wattpad.com/14988934-you-%26-i-%26-her-i%27m-gonna-pick-up-the-pieces
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Thank you for the notification! I plan on getting a wattpad soon so you won't have to notify me but I don't know when that will be haha I loved the chapter! You really are a fantastic writer which is amazing considering how few people can actually write these days
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YoungForever_723* 9 years ago
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No problem! Well I can just notify you until you get one, I guess? Lol, just let me know! Omg, that means so much to me, you have no idea! Like that made my day. Thank you!!! <3 xx
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Alohaaa 9 years ago
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Hey! You probably don't know why I'm commenting, but it would be cool if you could help me with some desicion i must make:
http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/6713852
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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I really could use someone who is in the same situation. It suuuucks. I thought my whole situation was over and we were just going to not talk anymore but I heard that they were saying things to other people that was turning the whole thing around so it seemed like me and another person involved are the bad guys and like we are these horrible people
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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God i hate when people do that! Like seriously just no, that is not okay! My old "best friend" did the same thing to me like... 6 weeks ago? We got in this huge fight and I called her out on some of the horrible things she does(like treat her friends like crap and cut them down until they are two inches tall) and she turned it around on me and said i was doing that to her. Which I wasn't because I didn't talk to her for like 2 weeks before the fight when i supposedly did all these horrible things to her. And then monday morning she texted me telling me she doesn't see why our fight should be brought to the school and we should just be civil towards one another and I agreed and told her okay. So then she went and told our entire high school (which isn't hard because there is less then 200 students in high school) that I am this horrible person and flipped the entire fight around, literally. Ugh its so annoying! Those are the people I want to push into a pit filled with rabid geese, two faced, back stabbing flurbs(which is a really nice way to call some a b----). Its blown over now though, people don't really believe I did all that stuff and we don't talk so hopefully, if you guys aren't able to make up and be friends again, that at least she'll (or he, i guess I shouldn't assume) stop talking about it.
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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wow sorry I just realized I kind of went on a rant there and this was supposed to be your rant haha
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Haha it's fine! My situation is isn't that bad at all lol my issue with this person was that they have lied about a lot and have caused me to have major trust issues and I guess In a conversation this person was having with someone else, a few things got misunderstood and these things got to me and they were about one of my best friends who is having a tough time right now and so I was incredibly angry with everything in order to stand up for my friend and yeah the whole thing is just a disaster
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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yeah it sounds like it is... the fact that this person lies a lot, to the point where you have trust issues, should be a warning sign to other people that what they are saying is probably not true. I don't blame you for getting upset, if someone was talking about my best friend when they were going through a tough time i'd do the same thing. i don't know if this will help, probably not, but I always look at things from a pyschological stand point so the fact that this person lies all the time probably means there is something in their life that causes them too. I used to be friends with this girl who would lie all the time (like has a fake cousin with 6 kids, while pregnant with twins, (at age 16) living in her laundry room in the basement without her parents knowing) but its probably because she is ignored a lot at her house so she tried to get attention at school by coming up with these elaborate lies. You know this person so i don't know if there is something like this going on in their life?? I know it doesn't help the current situation but maybe with future, you can look at it like this and realize that something is wrong in this person's life to make them do this, it doesn't it make right for them to lie but i don't know. it helps me to know lol
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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The person told me they are getting help with everything so I'm trying to avoid crossing paths with them until they have been getting help for a few weeks and are on the road to recovery
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Thats probably best haha so did you guys talk things out and the situation is better now? Sorry not trying to pry just wanting to make sure everything is okay
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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You aren't prying your caring, and yeah we have talked things out a few times but things aren't normal yet but we don't hate each other
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Sorry I didn't see I had a notification for this... well thats good, at least you don't hate each other. Always a good start haha i hope things get back to as normal as they can get for you soon (wow that was a horribly written sentence, but i'm too lazy to go back and rewrite it, sorry lol)
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YoungForever_723* 9 years ago
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Hello Der! I just wanted to let you know I just posted Chapter 5 of You & I & Her ! Thanks for reading! :)xx
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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So what I'm planning for the next little bit is they break up, she revisits her love with Ashton but then Louis does something to make Jess realize she still loves him. I'm thinking maybe him (with hel from the boys) writes Truly Madly Deeply?
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Oh my goodness yes, I love that idea! :D Thats perfect!!
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Hahaha good(: some girl is being really rude about my story and what happend last chapter
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Yeah I saw that, that's stupid. Personally I loved your last chapter but also its your story, you should be able to write what you want haha
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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I know! Like idk hah I was just so angry about it haha
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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I would of been too! Like why stop reading just when something dramatic happens?! If a couple I loved were to break up in a book I just want to read more to find if they ever get back together or not haha
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Exactly! Like its a fan fiction, they are obviously together again in the end! Like I'm tempted to not put them back together just because its in my nature todo the opposite of what people tell me too if they aren't nice about it haha
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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I know! And I am the same way!!!... and even though I want them to get back together the evil author in me is saying to go for it and not have them end up together haha I am actually a really mean writer, I am horrible to my characters, especially in future story ideas i have lol
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Hahaha I feel so bad for my readers because depending on my mood it changes how I write
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Thats not always a bad thing though, it keeps the story interesting at least haha
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Haha sometimes it ends up badly haha whenever there are like fights or something it's usually because I'm not in a good mood haha
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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haha don't worry, I got in a huge fight with the person mia is based on (and ashlyn too, but just so you know Ashlyn's characteristics are magnified, she isn't that bad of a person really) and so I wrote like 10 whole chapters where I ended up kiling off Mia and Ashlyn... yeah the next morning I decided that would not be a smart decision for the story line and erased it lol(:
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Hahaha! That's why I stopped writing look after you! The characters were making me crazy
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[deleted] 9 years ago
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Hi person! I just spend almost 2 1/2 hours reading the prologue-chapter 65. You're welcome ;)
One thing I noticed (I'm a grammar D: ) is that you use lazy English, which is when you spell it how it sounds. Not like 'ur' instead of you're, but you say "should of" instead of the correct phrase "should've" I felt the need to correct this xD sorry
Okay bye x)
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Haha yeah I know, I'm horrible about that. I don't do it when I write presfessionally (like school reports ect) but for my witty story I don't take the time to go back through and find them. Thank you so much though for the advice! As weird as it is I do appreciate when people do that haha And I hope you enjoyed the story!
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YoungForever_723* 9 years ago
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Omg your birthday is the day after mine!! Lol :) xx
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Hey! I was wondering if you could help me fit a new character into TMD. I know the character and everything I just need ideas on how to bring her into it
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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yeah of course!
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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So it's based off of my friend Nicole and she is going to be Harry's girlfriend. I don't how to bring her into it though like should it be her long lost best friend from before she moved to America and works on the tour or i dont know haha maybe opens for the boys or something?
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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I like the long lost best friend idea! What if they used to be neighbors?? Oh idea! What if Harry had her hired because he knew how much Jess was missing Wes and then also personally he always had a crush on her?? I don't know haha
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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That will be perfect! What i was thinking is that for the first show she is opening for Harry doesnt tell her that Jess is on tour with them and so she starts getting really nervous on stage and Harry sends Jess out to perform with her to calm her down
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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that would be amazing! What if they do such an amazing job that they get to open for them again throughout the tour?? (sorry its taking me so long to respond, I'm watching a track meet haha)
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Yes! I was thinking of having Jess be their Stylist but maybe every few shows she goes out with her to open it? Maybe Wes gets jealous that she thinks she was replaced?
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Yeah! and maybe that just makes her life at home seem ever worse? Because now not only does she have her problems with her family but her best friend replaced her?
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Yes! Maybe she just freaks out and goes to live with some aunt or something who lives in like england or ireland and Jess freaks out because she can't find her
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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And so she thinks something terrible happened to her, like she was kidnapped or murdered or something so when she finds out someone is in her place she freaks out even more?
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Ah yes!!! Then Wes ends up being good friends with the girl who she thought replaced her and opens with her
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Yes!! haha omgoodness I'm so excited to read your story now lol
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ChocoTaco 9 years ago
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You are gorgeous! I love your profile <3
You seem really nice too ^-^
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ImNotNormal 9 years ago
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Where's chapter 55 :(
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Oh sorry! I accidently didn't change the chapter number. here it is! http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/6640979 Thanks for reading love!(:
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ImNotNormal 9 years ago
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no prob! thanks :)
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Hi! Okay so I wasn't planning on having Jess move to London but I'm considering it now. My idea right now is that for her birthday Harry buys her a flat in the same building as everyone and then the rest of the boys chip in to decorate it and furniture and stuff and then the girls do her room and maybe when high school ends for Jess and Wes, Jess moves there and Wes goes to see her once in a while and then have a Wes chapter where you get exposed to her family life and see why Wes is never home and then she runs away to England when her birthday finally comes around to live with Jess just to learn that Jess is working for the boys and is off on tour with them
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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going to apologize now if I accidently delete anything lol.... yeah I would wait for Jess and Wes to graduate before having them move and I love the entire Wes idea!! especially having Jess be gone on tour! Do you plan on having Wes join them for the rest of the tour?? Or what if Wes just decides to stay at Jess's place and lives there, gets a job and then when Jess gets back she is totally freaked out because she believes some crazy person broke into her place
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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I love that idea! Maybe like they can go through part of the tour so they are gone for a month or two and when they come back Jess goes home and walks in and she could tell someone was in her house and she starts freaking out because no one will answer their phone so she starts banging on Louis and Harrys door and they won't answer the door so she goes to Zayns and he goes back to the flat and finds out that it is Wes and then Jess is walking Zayn out and Jess didn't want to be alone since Wes was sleeping and so she sits on the couch and her and Zayn start joking around and wrestling and once Zayn pins her down Louis walks in
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Yes!!! I love it!!! And then what if (because I love Caleb) she goes to talk to caleb about it but he isn't there but Zac or Austin(which ever one she was dancing with at the club) is?
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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And then Austin starts hitting on her and then Caleb walks in and like attacks him because he tries to kiss her (I need to point out the fact Jess and Austin aren't related first haha)
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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What if at the party he comes drunk and starts hitting on her and Louis freaks out and while Jess is trying to calm Louis down Caleb freaks on him saying that Jess is his sister and Austin like clarifies that they aren't technically related
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Yes! I was trying to figure out how to do that! For Louis' present for Jess' birthday I was thinking about a necklace and when she opens the box there is a piece of paper in it and when Jess opens it it's an invitation to be Louis' date to the Brits and then I want some big thing to happen at the Brits but I'm not sure what. Like in Gotta Be You (Idk if you read that) I had Justin Bieber and Caroline Flack show up. I want to do something simmilar but not the same.
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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I remember that, that would be good!.... Okay so in this story was Louis ever with Eleanor? Because if he was what if she was there with someone and was flirting with Louis all night making Jess jealous
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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yeah they were together. That is a really good idea! Maybe at the after party they can have like a catfight or something
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Yeah! haha oh my goodness your story is goign to be freaking awesome, I can't wait!!
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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I cannot wait to write it at this point haha thank you so much for helping
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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no problem! haha quick question for you though: would it be way to obvious if in my story I were to have the guys go out for a night (sometime after Milo's surgery) and Louis gets drunk and then pretty much Katia's dream comes to life?
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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not at all! I'm waiting for Zach (Sorry if i spelt it wrong) to show up in England
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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no you spelt it right! i don't think i'm going to have him show up in england. I think i'm going to just have him be there when school starts and then at the court date and then I have something HUGE planned for the end of the story and he is going to show up there.... i really can't wait for the end just because I want to see everyone's reaction lol
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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I cannot wait to hear it!! I am so excited!
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Me too!! haha thanks for all the feedback you've been giving me on my story btw, it helps motivates me to write more lol
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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Of course! I love your story!
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Thanks!I love yours too! Especially now haha I'm so excited now to read the rest of it
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Abigiggles* 9 years ago
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Hi! So I was reading some of your quotes and saw your story! It seams really good but the funny thing is my bestfriends name is Katia:P haha
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OnceUponAStory 9 years ago
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Thanks! and really? haha I just love the name, I just think its really pretty
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Abigiggles* 9 years ago
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Welcome! i think so too:)
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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I know you wouldn't copy anything from me and I know yo plan out your stories so never worry about it (:
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1D_Fanfiction 9 years ago
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for some reason I don't know why reply isn't working. I am completely okay with it!
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