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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6933574

Still awesome tho

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6933574

Uhm wow, that's two packets of Kleenex gone...
Mia died... :( I hadn't anticipated that, umm I don't know what to say because it isn't the same without her and it's weird to continue reading but I am going to. If you are willing to write the rest of course :) Just... don't kill anyone else of because I get the feeling Niall's gonna go suicidal and :(

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tigersforever 1 decade ago on quote #6933662

I loved your story, it was the best one direction story ive read, kinda sad its over: your a very talented writer. :)

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6933662

Thank you, that honestly just made my night(: I'm really sorry I couldn't finish it for you guys, but I've moved onto another part of my life that's different from when I was writing this and I didn't want to ruin the story anymore so I'm sorry for not finishing but I hope you understand. Thank you again(:

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tigersforever 1 decade ago on quote #6933662

I do understand, I know exactly what that's like. Thank you for writing it, and your welcome. :)

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tigersforever 1 decade ago on quote #6926940

I really loved your story, you have a real talent

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6926940

Thank you, that really means a lot(:

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tigersforever 1 decade ago on quote #6926940

your welcome :)

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6886507

No, seriously I don't care if it was a filler I'm just glad you're writing again and the characters of this story aren't dead. SOO HAPPY *unicorns and rainbows" n_n <3

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6886507

Haha you just made my night(:
I just got done with homework(its 1:42am here) so now I'm bout to go write chapter 88, or try to lol thanks again for giving me that push to start this again, I really need it in my life(:

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6886507

You're welcome :) It's not that I'm a hardcore directioner because actually I'm not (my fave bands are 5sos and The Vamps) its just you're such a great writer and this stories got me fixed. So it just has to continue. So than YOU for having such an articulate hand (that sounded better in my head) hope you get good grades on your homework..? haha :)

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6885314

Oh ma gerdd! Hell to the yes! Thankyouuuuu! <3 Really though :P

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6818759

THAT'S IT, if you din't update I'll... just have to give up and assume Louis and Katia are never getting back together. I know you're busy but I'm asking for words on a page. Get yourself together! Your readers need you, so help us before you lose us..? pretty please?

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6818759

just posted a new quote to check out

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isabeltheosm 1 decade ago on quote #6818759

yeah, upload please?
i love you :)
its a great story too, come back to writing!

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6818759

*weeps* why haven't you updated :'( I'm missing this story. I'm so close to giving up pwetty pwease upload?

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Zoë* 1 decade ago on quote #6805774

Yayyy! I have a feeling the next few chapters are going to be great ahahha

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6805774

(: some of the things might take a couple chapters to set up but I'm excited! I just hope you guys like it as much as i do haha

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isabeltheosm 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

lol i thought the secret was a lot bigger :D like louis was cheating on her or something

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

I figured that is what a lot of people were going to think, but don't worry there are still a lot of twists left in this story. You guys have no idea haha(:

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isabeltheosm 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

lol can't wait :)

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

I thought the secret was actually... Perfect. :) It kinda glued the last few chapters together x

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

I'm glad you like it! I was wondering how you were going to respond when I was reading over it haha sorry for kind of calling you out in my authors note but thanks for letting me know! Hope you're enjoying the story, love. I'm hoping to have another chapter up by Wednesday!

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

I really did! Well know you know ;) and its fine haha, I kinda just read past it and then went WAIT WHAT THAT SAID MY NAME! Haha, yeah the stories good. Awesome and I was wondering, do you have a Wattpad?

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

Haha! That's awesome! Thanks! and I do but I haven't written anything on it yet. I'm editting The Letter and I'm going to post that story when I'm done editing and then I have another story that I'm kind of working on that I'm probably going to start posting before the summer's over. Do you??

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

Yes, I do have a wattpad. I've written a few first chapters to stories and Ive published like two of them. But I don't really like them hah. So I'll be starting on a new fanfic too hopefully :)

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

What's your username? I'll look you up!(:

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

TaintedCherry like on here, how about you? I'll follow you so I can read your stories? Maybe we can do a collab story sometime? That'd be awesome :)

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

AbigailCurrie I'm not going to lie, I haven't spent a ton of time on the site to really know how it works and haven't really done much on it. And I'd love to do a story with you!! (:

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isabeltheosm 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

am,.sdfn.a.,mdfsna.,dmf
i hate you.
but please let them stay together?

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

I don't know I'm so torn and conflicted now! Honesty it's a toss up of what will happen because each answer gives me a ton of different, good ways to go with their story. I don't know just be prepared haha hopefully you still like the story even if they don't stay together!
Thanks for reading, and commenting!!(:

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mj25 1 decade ago on quote #6791833

It's very well thought out, but I think you should come up with something more creative as an ending? Idk it's just that usually the first or the last line of a poem is what people remember. And the ending was sort-of typical you know? It flows very nicely. I didn't spot anything really awkard or out of place. Really amazing poem. :')

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6791833

Thank you! It means a lot that you like it! I know I wasn't in love with the ending either, like the last three lines. Do you like for the last three lines better?
Emotions tearing me apart like a child on Christmas day
With the swift arc of their blade
I executed my executioner

(by the way, i've decided to name the poem Executed, especially if I use this ending)

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mj25 1 decade ago on quote #6791833

I like that ending! But do you think there should be a different word there? Like for excecuted? But OMG. THAT ENDING IT REALLY GOOD! And the poem's title is very, very good :')

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6791833

I kind of want to keep the word executed because of the title, but what if I changed executioner to murders? or my demons?? and thanks! haha I read your comment and then went to eat some mcdonalds and was like hey, just switch the roles lol(:

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mj25 1 decade ago on quote #6791833

Alright. That sounds good :')

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Zoë* 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

I really like Katia and Louis together, but I think I'd like to see a single Katia as well. Not sad and mopey though, but actually going out and having a bit of fun. I think it could give the story a bit of a twist. And maybe bring in more Harry and Katia, since Katia and Louis break up, Harry (even though he has a girlfriend) might think about her again? It might also mean Harry and Louis have a fight? I don't know, I just think that might make an interesting story line.

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

Thank you for commenting! You just made my day better haha.... I actually really like that idea! I actually have been tossing around an idea involving an intoxicated Harry which I might just use now, so be prepared. Wow I actually really like where I could go with this idea, thank you!
Thanks for reading, and commenting! Hope you enjoy the story!

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Zoë* 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

Haha no problem! I just thought it would bring more excitement to the story. :)

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6794063

Oh by the way! I'm leaving again tomorrow for vacation(I'm going to go see the Grand Canyon! :D ) but I'm going to gone for a week. This time, however, I will be able to write and maybe post a chapter or two depending on how much I'm able to write and what not. Sorry guys, but I will definitely be able to reply to all of the qutoe comments I get (;

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6789622

Love you for uploading but... WHAT IS THAT SECRET?? :'( i really want to know, I'm dying her... DYING :( Pweety Pweese? xx

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6789622

I would love to tell you what the secret is but I can't! I'm really excited for you guys to learn what it is but at the same time I'm afraid you guys are going to be greatly disappointed... I'll give you a hint though: it's not a secret that Louis is going to be eager to tell, and definitely not on the spot (just to know in case something happens in the upcoming chapters)
Thanks for reading love! (:

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6789622

Ok?... :( will it be revealed soon like in the next two chapters? Welcome! <3 x

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6789622

Something will be... *cheesey smiley face*

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TaintedCherry 1 decade ago on quote #6789622

Yay!

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tigersforever 1 decade ago on quote #6770696

You need to have more confidence in your writing, this was really good.

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6770696

Thanks love! I feel like I just didn't like this chapter so much because it was in the POV of someone who was drunk, and I've never been drunk so I don't know how to write that haha(:
Thanks for reading!

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tigersforever 1 decade ago on quote #6770696

I don't know what its like either but I still liked it, and of course its an amazing story

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6770694

Part two is a quote you have to click to see! Sorry guys I clicked the add quote button and then the warning came up.

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Live_life98 1 decade ago on quote #6764001

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OnceUponAStory 1 decade ago on quote #6764001

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

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