hey there :) I'm jake, I'm 17 years old and I'm from Gunnedah, Sydney Australia, but I moved with my family to Miami Florida (where i currently live) I love to write my own songs, sing, play the guitar and drums. I also have a passion for dancing, i do almost every genre :3 I hope to someday meet the girl of my dreams, and ask her to marry me in the most unforgettable way possible, so that she will never forget who we once were, and who we will become
this is really good :) i like the plot :) but maybe instead of ending off sentences so early. like this. try using comas to make it flow a bit better :) other than that keep up the awesome work :)
yeah :) it's the lack of time and patience I have when writing. I think of an idea and want to rush until I get to it, if that makes sense. and thankyou! :)
i bet your father was a good man, and he will forever be in my thoughts and prayers. i hope you know that he is looking down smiling at the amazing daughter he has raised :)
yeaaah u have too, you are such a GREAT kid, i hope i could meet ya but i live in Greece and here we have only some a*sholes who like to smoke and drik from 13years old :(