Storieslike_WOAH

 i wake up and im very confused. Before i can ask where i am people rush over to me messing with a thing on my leg. One of them touchs my head. i screech
"its ok its ok" the doctor says shaky with scares me.
"wh-h-ee--rr-e a--m- i?" i ask freaked out.
"your in the hospital and you have a broken bone and stiches on your head.
"whats on my leg and what are stiches?" i ask and they look at me worried witch makes me worrie.
"uh.. thats a cast witch helps your leg and stiches beacuse you hurt your head" he said being careful with the words he used at the end.
"uhhhh?" i all i can get out before a women comes rushing in the room.
"BABY!" is all shes yells and runs over to me but the doctors block her. i get very confused and look at a docter and he shugs his sholders.
"Ma'am she cant see visitors yet" is all i hear before he whispers in her ear and she gets a worried face. when she leaves i ask
"who was that?"
"uhhhh you dont rememeber?" one says before another doctor elbows him gently.
"that was your mother" the one that elbowed him said and shot him a dirty look.

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when the day is over i run up to my room. I sit there and just think....about everything that happened. "Today was the best day ever!" was all i could text Talli before my mom called me for dinner.I am about to say "Nothing could make this day bad" but then i look up from my feet and i cant believe what i see.
"WHAT IS THIS MOM!" i yell angry
"sweat calm-" is all my mo can get out before i yell
"YOU NEVER CALL ME THAT DONT LIE TO WHOEVER THS MAN IS TELL HIM TO LEAVE!!!!!!" i screch at the top of my lungs
"No now sit and eat your dinner!" she yells but softens it for that guy.
i run up stairs yelling
"YOU CAN NEVER REPLACE DAD EVER!! AND YOU KNOW THAT TOO!"
i lock my door and i sob into my pillow. i hoped my mom would come and tell me he left but when i creecked the door open he was there still holding hands with my mom.
i pray to god that she will not let him replace dad. i prepare to jump out my window. i hold on to the end of the ledge to my window and let my feet fall so im hanging. luckly my house isnt that tall. so when i let go i fall on grass and soccer balls i left out. and i take off running to no where just to get away. I run for 20 mins. at least and then i start to slow down. after 3 mins of reasting i hear my mom calling my name. Half of my wants to run to her the other wants to get away. So i take off running again. since im in soccer i can ran like the speed of light. But after 14 mins of running i believe i trip over one of the park benchs.The next thing i know i see blood all over my face and then i hear my mom yell my name one more time and then i black out.

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...stuck in the moment" I walk into the class room and see at least 23 kids in there.Every one is talking about summer.The classroom looks SO different since the last time i was here. i sit and play with the tabs on my binder untill the teacher calls me over.
"Do you have any friends?" Mrs.Lax says rudely
"No. i dont need any and dont want any." i say confindent
"Same dont give me 'tude" Mrs.Lax says
"i wasnt its ture i dont want any friends" i say losing some "'tude".
"Well i will have to change that" she says with a evil look in her eye.
i stomped over to my desk like a 3 yr old would do. Mrs.Lax yells at every one and tells them to sit down. She starts the lesson for today and all i hear is "BLAH,BLAH,BLAH!" the whole time.
Now its lunch time.I sit alone untill the new girl i saw on the bus comes up and sits next to me.
"Hi, im Talli" she has Red hair with freakles all over her face. I wish i had Red hair SOOO bad i love Red hair.
"Hi, im Sam" i say shyly "So are you new here?" i ask even though i know the answer.
"yeah... i moved here from texas" she says
"Cool" i say
the rest of the lunch we talk about our life and come pretty good friends. It turns out she loves soccer and will be on my team with me this year. Im so happy that i made a friend even though i didnt want one.
"Well Sam, i think we will become really good friends but i got to get to class"
"bye Talli?" i say forgetting her name
"you got it!"
Maybe this year will be Different!!!!


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Just a little girl...
chapter 1 will be out today later or tomorrow in the morning

...stuck in the moment" I'm Sam. I have straight black hair with a flawless face. Yet i dont care about that. My life is soccer.I love it SO much thats ALL i ever did since i was 5 . I dont play with friends... because i have none... like i said i have a life other than soccer. Soccer has always been more important than having a sleepover.
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Today is the first day of school. My used to be best friend hates me for NO reason i did nothing to her i even took time off of SOCCER to hang out with her!  "Whatever ...no time for friends anymore"  i always say so i dont cry when i think of it how she left me alone with no friends and now laughs at me. UGG ok stop thinking about her. i get on the same old bus as every year.my school is a private school so its K-12. But i like this private school because you get to wear what you want! When i enter the bus i already see 1 new person and stay FAR away from her because they could be brats or a sweet nicey-nice girl. Plus im not good at making new friends.....Same old school too...same subjects...SAME EVERYTHING! I just want life to change....So i wished for a week at 11:11. Little did i know that i would be getting a very BIG change.



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