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Hey guys... girls, I am Mari, and this is where I review those famous and... Not so famous Witty storie's you all love! You can look up my regular quote account as Marigail, follow meh... Would be greatly appreciated, and I'll be sure to follow you back! If you know a story that you just, Loveee, then please, comment, telling me about it, and I'll be sure to review it!
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Review 3, March 11th,
2012
Story:
Where's the Happy Ending?
Author:
Wheresthehappyending
Review: Okay...
There are absolutely no words in the literature world to describe
how much I like this story. Period. Clare is probably the most
strongest character I've ever read about, and this story
sounds like it happened in real. It just connects so much to the
highschool world, it's perfect! This story IS done, so read
read read!! Fave fave fave!! Who else thinks Toby's
amazing... Even before he shows his feelings?
"After a minute he pulled away, leaving me breathless. Then he whispered in my ear, "You only think I’m happy all the time because I’m only happy when you’re with me."
xD Rachel, I just have to say... Thank you so much for something so romantic. Highschool love can be dramatic, exactly like this, but that's why we love it! Don't ever stop writing, and your new story, "Every Minute Lost" Is awesome too... but more for that next review :)
Faves(About): 240? That is ridiculous. It's not even funny :| She deserves more. No it's NOT 240 per chapter. But let's make it that way?
WishandDream: "It's a great start to the story:) I can't wait to read the rest"
PervertedUnicorn: "Awwwwwhhh! The end made me smile. :3 heheh."
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Review 2, March 2nd,
2012
Story:
Just a Little Love Game
Author: Flamingobear
Review: Okay... Let's
just say... This story is A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. Amazing. Of course, all
there ever is, are romantic, mushy-mushy stories on Witty, but
this one just has a little twist to it. Hailey is just your
easy-going, beyond average teenage girl... That somehow had fate
on her side... Of the street. I mean, please! Her love is
right next door. It's like the modern version of
Donna and Eric! <--- I've been whatching a little bit too
much of, That 70's Show.. But come on girls; a hot,
(basically emo) guy, named Chase, living right nextdoor?
Life time opportunity. This Witty author is a big fan of
TaySwift, so she knows what she's talking about when she says
love. Or, "falling for". Who cares what you call it?
It's the feeling that matters. The only other thing that your
friends can ask for, Ariane, is if you could make another Witty
account just for your stories? Those also amazing quotes are
getting in the way!
Faves (About): 90?
WHAT is this?! Come on Wittains! Check out this girl! Definitely
fave, and comment... Just to add more friendliness? Unibugsrock
can't be the one to do it all the time!
Unibugsrock- "Wow! THis is a great idea! Completely unexpected and interesting! This is great!"
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Story: So Far Away
Author: Stillwaitingforyou
Review: Okie, so I'm sure everyone has heard of Emma, more known to Wittians as, Stillwaitingforyou. The story, So Far Away is romantic, and sweet! Who said you couldn't fall in love in a week?! This story, or what I have read of it, isn't finished. So that just leaves us in suspense! I heard she was taking a couple of days off of writing, and we don't blame you for that Emma! :) Okie, so Clare and Ben are amazingly explained throughout the chapters, but I kind of want to know a little more about Clare's friends? What about Tyler? I mean there are Leah, and Marge... But in the beginning while they were all at Cali, there were more girls right? More description please? Other than that, this story is a keeper, and the author is an amazing girl that I heard will have more stories out in the future! Be sure to check out, Bad Girl Gone Good, and How to Solve a Murder Without Being Murder (:
Faves (About): 1,300 <.< That's pretty good Emma :) Although it deserves more faves! Readers, be sure to fave after its read! Do some comments too? She appreciates ya'lls word of advice, and opinions. I've noticed that she has lost some viewers?! Explaination?!
Codaa024~ "Your an amazing writter, i've been reading your stories a lot&i love them! continue to write! :D"
Maggie526~ "Boring start? Its flipping awesome!!"
Unibugsrock~ "Wow! This just keeps getting better and better! I wonder how this is gonna work out! :)"
Cecaldwell18~ "MOREEEEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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