Haha liking the story so far! (:
Just a suggestion for when you're typing would you be able to space out your story more? Like speeches and such on a different line, idk i just find it hard to read all togahter like that. ~ Just a suggestion.
But the story is really good so far. c;
*you asked for HONEST feedback* well, if it's just like the titanic (like w/ Leonardo DeCarprio), then I wouldn't continue to read because I know the whole ending. As for the writing, it is good, just remember details, and a tip: everyone loves romance.
uh, as requested- hers my audition ;P
Im rachael, im 15, I have long black hair and bright green eyes. Im kind of a brooder which makes me super independent. Im obsessed with music - and bands no one has even heard of-, one tree hill, and I like to draw. I also collect meaningful quotes because I plan to be a psychologist someday :)
This seems like a good idea. My name is Fazana, i'm 15. I have long black hair, dark brown eyes, and i'm light skined (light brown xD). I'm 5'7 and I love to read stories, hang out with my freinds, and play sports. My favourite colour is purple & i'm very independant. I don't care about what people think about me. I would love to be either Rose's Bestfreind or Rose's servent. LOL! (:
~&if you wanna know aything else about me, just hmu.
I can tell that this is gonna be an amazing story! xD.
can i please be captains daughter??? or Jacks little sister?
My name is Belva, 16, I have. brown hair, I'm 5'5, and I like to read, daydream, and mischievous fun!! Haha, oh and I like to laugh, and I'll help whoever is in need! Yep...I think I got it all! Need more or something, just drop a comment!!
my name is lauren im 13 i love swimming i swim 22 hours a week my hair is brown. I love to read and i have some crazy obsession with llamas:P i would like to be roses bestfriend or the captains daughter i love this idea:P xxx
yaayy!!! so excited to read this!!!
my name is shira, i am 17 years young. i have light brown curly hair reaching midback, hazel eyes, 5"4, not fat but not skinny. i love dance, gymnastics and softball. i have an obsession with yellow roses. i love food. i love reading -- when im into a book i could read it in a day. im pretty opinionated but im willing to hear both sides of the story. im independent, and sometimes i like being alone but i love being with family and friends. anything else you wanna know just ask!!! good luck :)))
Just a suggestion for when you're typing would you be able to space out your story more? Like speeches and such on a different line, idk i just find it hard to read all togahter like that. ~ Just a suggestion.
But the story is really good so far. c;
Im rachael, im 15, I have long black hair and bright green eyes. Im kind of a brooder which makes me super independent. Im obsessed with music - and bands no one has even heard of-, one tree hill, and I like to draw. I also collect meaningful quotes because I plan to be a psychologist someday :)
BUT THANKSS<3
~&if you wanna know aything else about me, just hmu.
I can tell that this is gonna be an amazing story! xD.
My name is Belva, 16, I have. brown hair, I'm 5'5, and I like to read, daydream, and mischievous fun!! Haha, oh and I like to laugh, and I'll help whoever is in need! Yep...I think I got it all! Need more or something, just drop a comment!!
im 14 i have light brown hair and light brown eyes I wanna be the captains daugther (:
my name is shira, i am 17 years young. i have light brown curly hair reaching midback, hazel eyes, 5"4, not fat but not skinny. i love dance, gymnastics and softball. i have an obsession with yellow roses. i love food. i love reading -- when im into a book i could read it in a day. im pretty opinionated but im willing to hear both sides of the story. im independent, and sometimes i like being alone but i love being with family and friends. anything else you wanna know just ask!!! good luck :)))