TwoWittyWriters

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Two Witty Writers

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sky* 1 decade ago on quote #6512157
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That was a little too, um, straightforward..and unrealistic.
You could've dragged that out into two or three chapters first, with more detail.
You have something here, though. (:
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TwoWittyWriters 1 decade ago on quote #6512157
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Yeah.I just really wanted to put everything in one chapter,so people would get hooked.Thanks for your advice.~Chow Mein
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