WaltzingInTheWind

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Bonjour, mon amis. Je m'appelle Meg.

Figure me out for yourself, love.

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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4946724
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A door to my true loves heart? xD
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4940328
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If you were talking about last year, and behind me, I would agree that I am marrying him. But this year I sit next to an empty desk...forever alone...
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4931839
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Wait, what? A blackout? I know this may sound stupid but...what's that?
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4886961
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Amen! Society is going to Hell, and I blame technology for it.
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4852571
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That's great, Tosha! Congrats! You're a really strong person!
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4844535
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I'll be praying for you and your loved ones, dear. Stay strong, and keep praying for them. I love you.
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4842341
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You have that story too! The time when you're fighting and he just grabs you and kisses you sort of thing.
I love this.
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4833599
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Woah, I STILL do that. xD
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4828658
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"Sock flooded my veins, flying to my fragile heartstrings, tainting them, forcing the drumbeat of my heart to fall reticent."
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4821409
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Piglet was my favorite character on Winnie the Pooh...
Now I have anxiety. How odd.
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4822632
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I did, Sugar_and_Schweiss!
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4824259
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Or just delete it yourself.
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4724608
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Wow. People are so sick these days. Shooting 7 people for the hell of it?
Apparently a mother lost her parents and children in a house fire on Christmas too.
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4698659
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I thought I would love R&J, but the stupidity of each and every one of the characters makes me feel something of disdain towards it.
Anyway, maybe one family betrayed the other by telling the first family's secret and unleashing a scandal.
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #3817393
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I love Pride and Prejudice too!
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4310463
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Currently obsessing over this movie, and I'm going to read the book again. <3
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4679010
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You're on. I'll do it not only for complaining, but for procrastination.
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4668734
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I'm a triplet, and I used to wake my brothers up at like 5 am and we would sit on the stairs for an hour until we could come down. By the time we were 5, 5:55 am became the 555 number.
My brothers are making me sleep in this year.
Psh, I'll be listening to Christmas music on my laptop until I wake them up.
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4656791
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I told my friends that I don't like cats--they retorted that I'd hoard Pomeranians instead.
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WaltzingInTheWind 9 years ago on quote #4607876
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This was good. However, once more, the pacing is fast and lacks description. I LOVE the plot so far, but description is key, just like diction; they're closely related.
I've noted something about your narration. You tend to just tell people opinion--you don't let the reader concoct them based on their actions. So instead of saying "Don't judge--I sing in the shower" say, ""Those were the best days of my life!" I sang, off key and loud enough so that the people in Africa could hear my unbearable shrieks." or something. I admit that's really embellished, but you know what I mean. Comment me with any questions! Keep writing!
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