WaltzingInTheWind

A door to my true loves heart? xD

If you were talking about last year, and behind me, I would agree that I am marrying him. But this year I sit next to an empty desk...forever alone...

Wait, what? A blackout? I know this may sound stupid but...what's that?

Amen! Society is going to Hell, and I blame technology for it.

That's great, Tosha! Congrats! You're a really strong person!

I'll be praying for you and your loved ones, dear. Stay strong, and keep praying for them. I love you.

You have that story too! The time when you're fighting and he just grabs you and kisses you sort of thing.
I love this.

Woah, I STILL do that. xD

"Sock flooded my veins, flying to my fragile heartstrings, tainting them, forcing the drumbeat of my heart to fall reticent."

Piglet was my favorite character on Winnie the Pooh...
Now I have anxiety. How odd.

I did, Sugar_and_Schweiss!

Or just delete it yourself.

Wow. People are so sick these days. Shooting 7 people for the hell of it?
Apparently a mother lost her parents and children in a house fire on Christmas too.

I thought I would love R&J, but the stupidity of each and every one of the characters makes me feel something of disdain towards it.
Anyway, maybe one family betrayed the other by telling the first family's secret and unleashing a scandal.

I love Pride and Prejudice too!

Currently obsessing over this movie, and I'm going to read the book again. <3

You're on. I'll do it not only for complaining, but for procrastination.

I'm a triplet, and I used to wake my brothers up at like 5 am and we would sit on the stairs for an hour until we could come down. By the time we were 5, 5:55 am became the 555 number.
My brothers are making me sleep in this year.
Psh, I'll be listening to Christmas music on my laptop until I wake them up.

I told my friends that I don't like cats--they retorted that I'd hoard Pomeranians instead.

This was good. However, once more, the pacing is fast and lacks description. I LOVE the plot so far, but description is key, just like diction; they're closely related.
I've noted something about your narration. You tend to just tell people opinion--you don't let the reader concoct them based on their actions. So instead of saying "Don't judge--I sing in the shower" say, ""Those were the best days of my life!" I sang, off key and loud enough so that the people in Africa could hear my unbearable shrieks." or something. I admit that's really embellished, but you know what I mean. Comment me with any questions! Keep writing!