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Tears streamed down
Jordan's pure white cheeks. She was
shivering, even in the arms of Shawn,
wearing his sweatshirt, and wrapped in a
blanket. Shawn held Jordan tight, rubbing
her arms, trying to keep her warm.
"All I want is you!" A voice
said. The source was unknown to anyone and
nobody recognized the voice. It was like a
whisper, which sent chills down
everyone's spines. Of course, they knew
the girl was referring to Shawn. "The
other guys aren't like you,
Shawn." The
girl's voice whispered.
Shawn was freaking out. It knew his name.
"Mhm, I know your name. I've been
here with you this entire time." The
voice whispered. It was terrifyingly clear
and crisp. "Shawn, you're the
sweetest. You're the nicest. You're
the cutest." The voice taunted.
"And Jordan
doesn't deserve
you." She said.
"I'm going to keep playing with
her unless you let go, now. And let me have
you." She whispered.
"Okay, you're just creepy!"
Emily managed to yell at the unknown
voice.
"Hahahahahaha!" The girl laughed
and in the middle of the living
room, a white mist appeared and
twisted and spun, exerting a cold
breeze.
A girl appeared, a ghost. She smiled and
waved as all of us.
She looked to be about 16 years old and she
wore a short dress that flowed down to her
knees. "Thank you,
Emily. I appreciate that
compliment." Then she
turned back to Shawn. "Come with me,
Shawn. I will give you everything you want.
Miranda will wake up,
Sammi will gladly join you
as herself, Annie
and the unnappealing boys
will be brought back to your friends.
Jordan will not be harmed any further. Take
back your sweat shirt and she will be warm.
Let go of her, and she will be warm.
Without you, she will be happier, even if
it's just because she's warmer.
Pretty soon, she will become very
sick and could
die. I can
kill her, Shawn. Because
if I can't have you, nobody can."
Shawn gulped as he stared at the ghostly
figure ahead of him.
"Shawn, don't listen to her!
Don't go!" Jordan cried. As the
tear drop manuvered down her cheek, it
froze in place. "You don't need to
go with that b****! You
don't!"
Shawn looked at Jordan and stood up. He
removed her blanket and took back his
sweatshirt. He looked at her with tears in
his eyes and watched the color return to
her skin and the tear continue to fall
down.
"Yes, I do Jordan. I do. But before I
go..." He said, and was cut off.
"Nothing!" The ghost yelled. And
they both disappeared.
Miranda awoke, breathing heavily. Annie and
Sammi came back up from the basement,
looking very scared, and all three boys
came back from upstairs.
"Annie!" Todd burst, and ran
toward her to embrace her.
"Todd." Annie said with a smile
on her face.
Tears ran down Jordan's face.
"No." She whispered, over and
over.
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"So... uh... what exactly is going on, Miranda?" Emily asked, worried and scared. "...Miranda?"
Miranda sat on the couch, breathing slowly in and out with her eyes closed. Everyone sat in silence and watched her.
She opened her eyes and looked around.
"It's complicated." She said, and another scream was heard, thumping was loud from above.
"Todd? Max?"
Hannah asked, looking above as wooden chips
fell from the ceiling. Miranda's skin
was growing pale and she began to shake.
Everyone looked at each other, they
didn't know what to do.
"That's it I'm going up
there!" Ryan burst, jumping up from
his seat and dashing toward the stairs.
"Just be careful, all of you."
Miranda said, and fell asleep. And with
that, Ryan was gone before anyone could
even think about stopping him.
"Did she just fall
asleep!?" Emily burst, unaware
of what to do, knowing she spoke for
everyone when she said that. "We need
to do something, guys. Who knows if
we're ever going to see any of them
again! So, let's make a plan."
"How about we start with staying here
and doing nothing!" Hannah burst.
"Sammi is possessed, Annie could be
DEAD, and God knows where Todd, Max and
Ryan are now! And Miranda's asleep.
Just asleep. Does that make sence to
anyone?!" She asked, standing and
asking everyone else. They looked around,
trying to figure out what they should
do.
"Let's just stay here. We
don't need to loose anyone else."
Shawn said, squeezing Jordan's hand.
She was now leaning on him, resting her
head on his shoulder.
"That didn't work with
Miranda." Emily said.
"Miranda isn't missing though,
she's right there. Passed out."
Jordan said.
"Does anyone know what time it
is?" Lauren asked.
"Nine thirty." Jordan asked after
checking her phone.
"YOU HAVE A PHONE!" Emily
exclaimed. "Guys, how have we been so
stupid! Our phones! We can call some
one!"
Everyone got excited and Jordan pressed
call on her phone and after she dialed her
mom's number, she was about to press
send when her phone shut off.
"Mine ran out of battery." She
sighed. Shawn took his phone out.
"Mine's off too..." He said.
"It won't turn back on."
Everyone checked their phones and no
one's was on.
"Okay.. Okay!" Emily said, trying
to calm the group. "No biggie...
um..."
"Yeah no big deal. We're just
going to be stuck here ALL NIGHT!"
Hannah burst, angry.
"And you think it's MY
fault?" Emily asked. "Trust me, I
don't want to be here just as much as
anyone else! But we are and clearly no way
out of it!"
"Well, we haven't tried to get out
hard enough!" Hannah said. "Check
the windows, are they unlocked? Check
upstairs windows, check the basement. Check
under the welcome matt, on top of the door
frame, maybe there's a key!"
She comanded, but no one listened.
"Guys, there's no need to
fight." Lauren sighed. "We're
ending 2o11 here, together, Whether we like
it or not! And the worst possible thing we
could possible thing we could be doing
right now is fighting." She said and
everyone agreed so they sat down together
and were quiet.
Shawn grabbed Jordan's hand again,
they'd let go to handle their
phones.
His hair was being ruffled and played with
and he just looked up and watched it.
Everyone heard girly giggling, but mostly
Shawn. It was in the ear, and it definitely
wasn't Jordan. He looked at everyone,
eyes wide and they were nervous.
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"Could that have been Annie?" Emily asked, frightened.
Jordan's grip on Shawn's hand tightened and he gently brushed his thumb along hers to calm her down.
"No." Miranda said.
This confused everyone and they all waited for an explaination but it didn't come. Instead, they listened for more noises. Down below, it sounded like pots and pans were being thrown around.
Miranda groaned.
"Miranda... are you okay?" Emily asked, getting creeped out.
"My head hurts, like really bad." Miranda said, with a painful inflection in her tone.
"Mine does too." Sammi said, crouched over and rubbing her head.
Miranda looked over at Sammi.
"Sammi, what's your favorite color?" She asked with a serious look in her eyes.
"Sammi's favorite color's blue." She said, not sounding a bit confused by the random question. Miranda squinted over at Sammi and Sammi smiled softly back at Miranda.
"Sammi's not with us anymore." Miranda said.
Immediately, Sammi's head tilted to the side and her smile was wiped off her face.
"UGH, NO!" Sammi suddenly screamed and was angry.
"Hey, everybody, come sit back down." Miranda said, warning them and immediately they did.
Sammi looked at everyone and stormed off toward the closet, which led to the basement.
"Shhh..." Miranda warned the group. They were all about to yell out for Sammi to return. She gently closed her eyes.
"Careful, you're going to break my hand." Shawn teased Jordan who's grip kept getting stronger.
"Sorry.." She apologized.
"Hey, it's no problem." He said, smiling at her. She smiled in return.
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"No." Hannah said, simply.
"But he's really that in
love."
After a moment of consideration, the entire
group came to agree with that.
"Should we go after him?" Ryan
asked Max.
"Don't!" Sammi burst. Max
spun around.
"Why not? Who knows what's up
there!" Max burst.
"Is he
seriously that
stupid?!" Emily burst,
amazed at the fact that Todd had really
disappeared to the top floor of the creepy
house.
"Exactly! You don't know what's up there, and you don't know what you're getting yourself into by following him up there." Sammi said, trying to potentially save their lives.
"Which is why I have to go up there. I'm not going to let another person mysteriously disappear at my party." He said. "Which is why I'm going and Ryan, you're staying."
"Okay, man..." Ryan said, a worried tone in his voice.
"I'll be back." Max said and dashed upstairs.
The room was finally silent besides Miranda's crying.
"Miranda, are you alright?" Lauren asked, worried for her best friend.
"No!" She cried. "Annie is gone, Todd's gone after her, and Max is after Todd."
"We know.." Lauren said. They'd all just witnessed it all.
"This isn't good!" Miranda yelled.
"Is this what happened at Anthony's party?" She asked. And Miranda looked up at her with a tear stained face.
"No, it's worse."
A blood-curtling scream was heard from below them, followed by several others from the group in the living room. It was a female.
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His expression was painful for Annie to look at, but she turned around. Her last step made the floor boards creak and moaned underneath her. She looked down quickly and the lights went out.
Screams and gasps were heard throughout the room.
Shawn felt some one grab tightly to his left hand. There fingers weaved between his. He smiled.
The floor boards creaked as Miranda began to pace. The lines went on, then off again. Annie wasn't there.
"No, no, no, no, no, no, NO." Miranda cried. Tears streamed down her face, though nobody saw.
"Miranda, are you okay?" Hannah asked, worried. She heard her quick breaths and sniffles.
"Yes." Miranda said. "Are you?" She sounded completely uneffected even though tears ran down her face. The lights flickered back on and Miranda dried her face.
Shawn looked to his left and found Jordan by his side.
"Er.. Sorry." Jordan confessed and let go of his hand, even though she wanted so much to hold on. Shawn grabbed it again.
"I'm going after her." Todd said.
"How do you know where she went?" Emily asked.
Todd looked at her.
"I don't."
He said and turned toward the stairs and
disappeared.
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Yeah,
there's going to be a delay
on the first chapter of Just A Feeling because I'm
considering my options
for a plot. haha. If you've gotten my little message about
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You'll probably give me some good ideas!
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