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Hi. I'm Emily! ;D
I'm a writer here on witty and right now, I'm writing 'Just A Feeling'. I'm very confident in this story based on the feedback.<3
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Just A Feeling
Chapter Eight

  We sat in uncomfortable silence.
Miranda was in the middle of a migrane.
Shawn was gone.
Jordan was in a state of shock and confusion.
All of her over emotions were caused by the presence of the ghost girl.
"What do we do now?" Emily questioned, curiously. Everyone looked at Miranda.
"I don't know." She snapped, tired of people relying on her.
"Hey, you're the one who knows EVERYTHING." Sammi said, frustrated that Miranda wasn't accepting the fact that she wsa the one who knew what went on.
Lauren had been watching Miranda's behavior. She had fallen asleep. That wasn't like her, or anyone to just fall asleep. To be honest, Lauren had been at the party too. But did she ever say anything? Nope. She didn't recognize any similarities in the two nights.
"Miranda, what is with you?" Lauren asked. " I was at that party too, remember? How do you know all this?"
Miranda looked up at her and hesitated.
"Why are you hiding something?" Annie asked, continuing the interrogation.
Miranda hesitated further.
"If you know something we don't, you need to tell us!" Emily insisted.
"We can help you!" Hannah pleaded.
Miranda looked up at all of her friends and sighed.
"I don't want you guys to think I'm a freak..." She began as tears arose in her eyes.
Her life wasn't easy. She didn't trust anyone but her mom with  keeping the secret. It was scary. People say it's a gift but really, it's a curse.
"Why would we!?" Hannah burst. "We love you Miranda!" She burst, smiling at her.
Miranda bowed her head and picked it up.
"Alright." She said and, the secret was out.
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Just A Feeling
Chapter Seven

Tears streamed down Jordan's pure white cheeks. She was shivering, even in the arms of Shawn, wearing his sweatshirt, and wrapped in a blanket. Shawn held Jordan tight, rubbing her arms, trying to keep her warm.
"All I want is you!" A voice said. The source was unknown to anyone and nobody recognized the voice. It was like a whisper, which sent chills down everyone's spines. Of course, they knew the girl was referring to Shawn. "The other guys aren't like you, Shawn." The girl's voice whispered.
Shawn was freaking out. It knew his name. "Mhm, I know your name. I've been here with you this entire time." The voice whispered. It was terrifyingly clear and crisp. "Shawn, you're the sweetest. You're the nicest. You're the cutest." The voice taunted. "And Jordan doesn't deserve you." She said. "I'm going to keep playing with her unless you let go, now. And let me have you." She whispered.
"Okay, you're just creepy!" Emily managed to yell at the unknown voice.
"Hahahahahaha!" The girl laughed and in the middle of the living room, a white mist appeared and twisted and spun, exerting a cold breeze.
A girl appeared, a ghost. She smiled and waved as all of us.
She looked to be about 16 years old and she wore a short dress that flowed down to her knees. "Thank you, Emily. I appreciate that compliment." Then she turned back to Shawn. "Come with me, Shawn. I will give you everything you want. Miranda will wake up, Sammi will gladly join you as herself,  Annie and the unnappealing boys will be brought back to your friends. Jordan will not be harmed any further. Take back your sweat shirt and she will be warm. Let go of her, and she will be warm. Without you, she will be happier, even if it's just because she's warmer. Pretty soon, she will become very sick and could die. I can kill her, Shawn. Because if I can't have you, nobody can." Shawn gulped as he stared at the ghostly figure ahead of him.
"Shawn, don't listen to her! Don't go!" Jordan cried. As the tear drop manuvered down her cheek, it froze in place. "You don't need to go with that b****! You don't!"
Shawn looked at Jordan and stood up. He removed her blanket and took back his sweatshirt. He looked at her with tears in his eyes and watched the color return to her skin and the tear continue to fall down.
"Yes, I do Jordan. I do. But before I go..." He said, and was cut off.
"Nothing!" The ghost yelled. And they both disappeared.
Miranda awoke, breathing heavily. Annie and Sammi came back up from the basement, looking very scared, and all three boys came back from upstairs.
"Annie!" Todd burst, and ran toward her to embrace her.
"Todd." Annie said with a smile on her face.
Tears ran down Jordan's face. "No." She whispered, over and over.

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Just A Feeling
Chapter Six

"So... uh... what exactly is going on, Miranda?" Emily asked, worried and scared. "...Miranda?"

Miranda sat on the couch, breathing slowly in and out with her eyes closed. Everyone sat in silence and watched her.

She opened her eyes and looked around.

"It's complicated." She said, and another scream was heard, thumping was loud from above.

"Todd? Max?" Hannah asked, looking above as wooden chips fell from the ceiling. Miranda's skin was growing pale and she began to shake. Everyone looked at each other, they didn't know what to do.
"That's it I'm going up there!" Ryan burst, jumping up from his seat and dashing toward the stairs.
"Just be careful, all of you." Miranda said, and fell asleep. And with that, Ryan was gone before anyone could even think about stopping him.
"Did she just fall asleep!?" Emily burst, unaware of what to do, knowing she spoke for everyone when she said that. "We need to do something, guys. Who knows if we're ever going to see any of them again! So, let's make a plan."
"How about we start with staying here and doing nothing!" Hannah burst. "Sammi is possessed, Annie could be DEAD, and God knows where Todd, Max and Ryan are now! And Miranda's asleep. Just asleep. Does that make sence to anyone?!" She asked, standing and asking everyone else. They looked around, trying to figure out what they should do.
"Let's just stay here. We don't need to loose anyone else." Shawn said, squeezing Jordan's hand. She was now leaning on him, resting her head on his shoulder.
"That didn't work with Miranda." Emily said.
"Miranda isn't missing though, she's right there. Passed out." Jordan said.
"Does anyone know what time it is?" Lauren asked.
"Nine thirty." Jordan asked after checking her phone.
"YOU HAVE A PHONE!" Emily exclaimed. "Guys, how have we been so stupid! Our phones! We can call some one!"
Everyone got excited and Jordan pressed call on her phone and after she dialed her mom's number, she was about to press send when her phone shut off.
"Mine ran out of battery." She sighed.  Shawn took his phone out.
"Mine's off too..." He said. "It won't turn back on."
Everyone checked their phones and no one's was on.
"Okay.. Okay!" Emily said, trying to calm the group. "No biggie... um..."
"Yeah no big deal. We're just going to be stuck here ALL NIGHT!" Hannah burst, angry.
"And you think it's MY fault?" Emily asked. "Trust me, I don't want to be here just as much as anyone else! But we are and clearly no way out of it!"
"Well, we haven't tried to get out hard enough!" Hannah said. "Check the windows, are they unlocked? Check upstairs windows, check the basement. Check under the welcome matt, on top of the door frame, maybe there's a key!"
She comanded, but no one listened.
"Guys, there's no need to fight." Lauren sighed. "We're ending 2o11 here, together, Whether we like it or not! And the worst possible thing we could possible thing we could be doing right now is fighting." She said and everyone agreed so they sat down together and were quiet.
Shawn grabbed Jordan's hand again, they'd let go to handle their phones.
His hair was being ruffled and played with and he just looked up and watched it.
Everyone heard girly giggling, but mostly Shawn. It was in the ear, and it definitely wasn't Jordan. He looked at everyone, eyes wide and they were nervous.

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Just A Feeling
Chapter Five

"Could that have been Annie?" Emily asked, frightened.

Jordan's grip on Shawn's hand tightened and he gently brushed his thumb along hers to calm her down.

"No." Miranda said.

This confused everyone and they all waited for an explaination but it didn't come. Instead, they listened for more noises. Down below, it sounded like pots and pans were being thrown around.

Miranda groaned.

"Miranda... are you okay?" Emily asked, getting creeped out.

"My head hurts, like really bad." Miranda said, with a painful inflection in her tone.

"Mine does too." Sammi said, crouched over and rubbing her head.

Miranda looked over at Sammi.

"Sammi, what's your favorite color?" She asked with a serious look in her eyes.

"Sammi's favorite color's blue." She said, not sounding a bit confused by the random question. Miranda squinted over at Sammi and Sammi smiled softly back at Miranda.

"Sammi's not with us anymore." Miranda said.

Immediately, Sammi's head tilted to the side and her smile was wiped off her face.

"UGH, NO!" Sammi suddenly screamed and was angry.

"Hey, everybody, come sit back down." Miranda said, warning them and immediately they did.

Sammi looked at everyone and stormed off toward the closet, which led to the basement.

"Shhh..." Miranda warned the group. They were all about to yell out for Sammi to return. She gently closed her eyes.

"Careful, you're going to break my hand." Shawn teased Jordan who's grip kept getting stronger.

"Sorry.." She apologized.

"Hey, it's no problem." He said, smiling at her. She smiled in return. 

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Just A Feeling
Chapter Four

 "Is he seriously that stupid?!" Emily burst, amazed at the fact that Todd had really disappeared to the top floor of the creepy house.
"No." Hannah said, simply. "But he's really that in love."
After a moment of consideration, the entire group came to agree with that.
"Should we go after him?" Ryan asked Max.
"Don't!" Sammi burst. Max spun around.
"Why not? Who knows what's up there!" Max burst.

 "Exactly! You don't know what's up there, and you don't know what you're getting yourself into by following him up there." Sammi said, trying to potentially save their lives.

"Which is why I have to go up there. I'm not going to let another person mysteriously disappear at my party." He said. "Which is why I'm going and Ryan, you're staying."

"Okay, man..." Ryan said, a worried tone in his voice.

"I'll be back." Max said and dashed upstairs.

The room was finally silent besides Miranda's crying.

"Miranda, are you alright?" Lauren asked, worried for her best friend.

"No!" She cried. "Annie is gone, Todd's gone after her, and Max is after Todd."

"We know.." Lauren said. They'd all just witnessed it all.

"This isn't good!" Miranda yelled.

"Is this what happened at Anthony's party?" She asked. And Miranda looked up at her with a tear stained face.

"No, it's worse."

A blood-curtling scream was heard from below them, followed by several others from the group in the living room. It was a female.

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Just A Feeling
Chapter Three

  Every guest manaaged to stand up and watch in awe as their close friend dared to do such a risky thing like that. She was the most terrified out of all of them and she was headed toward the door.
"Annie, don't! I can't let you do this!" Miranda yelled, throwing a hand out to try and stop her physically, but Annie was too fast.
"Miranda, why are you stopping me? I want to get out of here. Right now." Annie had turned briefly around to tell Miranda this. Her eyes were watering with tears and she was shaking vigorously.
"Is there anything else you feel? Besides fear? Besides the fact that we're here with you?" Miranda asked, looking at the back of Annie's head. Annie stopped in her tracks and spun on her heals.
"Yes, Miranda. I do. And it's creeping me out. I just want to leave." She said, tears streamed down her dampened cheeks and she contined toward the door.
Miranda stood, speechless. Until she finally managed to call out for Annie again, but she was three steps away from being able to reach the door knob. She stopped and turned around, looking at the group a last time. They all watched worriedly from the living room. The closest to her was  Miranda and right behind her was Todd.
Todd who had been there for her all through her life, since kindergarten. They've been neighbors and best friends for as long as either of them could remember. Todd is always there for her and with her.

His expression was painful for Annie to look at, but she turned around. Her last step made the floor boards creak and moaned underneath her. She looked down quickly and the lights went out.

Screams and gasps were heard throughout the room.

Shawn felt some one grab tightly to his left hand. There fingers weaved between his. He smiled.

The floor boards creaked as Miranda began to pace. The lines went on, then off again. Annie wasn't there.

"No, no, no, no, no, no, NO." Miranda cried. Tears streamed down her face, though nobody saw.

"Miranda, are you okay?" Hannah asked, worried. She heard her quick breaths and sniffles.

"Yes." Miranda said. "Are you?" She sounded completely uneffected even though tears ran down her face. The lights flickered back on and Miranda dried her face.

Shawn looked to his left and found Jordan by his side.

"Er.. Sorry." Jordan confessed and let go of his hand, even though she wanted so much to hold on. Shawn grabbed it again.

"I'm going after her." Todd said.

"How do you know where she went?" Emily asked.

Todd looked at her.

"I don't." He said and turned toward the stairs and disappeared.
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Just A Feeling
Chapter Two

  We sat in silence, all of us afraid and trying to determine whether what we'd just witnessed was real or not. After a moment or two, Max changed the subject.
"Refreshments, anyone?" He asked, sounding a little panicked but trying to calm himself and everyone else down.
A few people came out of their transe and nodded.
"Ryan, could you come with me for a second?" Max asked, obviously afraid to venture into the kitchen alone.  Ryan nodded, and got up and nervously followed Max into the kitchen.
The two of them got the chips from the cabinet and drinks from the fridge. As Ryan poured chips into a big bowl, Max took in a quick gasp of air, causing Ryan to spin around.
"Dude, what's wrong?!" He asked, nearly having knocked over the bowl of chips.
"Haha, nothing I just wanted to scare the crap out of you." Max said laughing. "I didn't want to scare anyone else, you know what I'm sayin?" He asked, and Ryan returned to what he was doing, shaking his head.
"Good one." He said sarcastically.
Max grinned to himself, laughing at his so-called success.
They brought the snacks out into the livingroom and everyone was begining to talk quietly among themselves. 
They handed bowls and cans out to everyone and resumed their spots. Everyone looked at each other, trying to imagine what would happen next. Everyone wanted out, but everyone knew they all had to stay in. For the entire night.
"How did you guys get out of here, Miranda?" Todd managed to ask.
"It was morning and the first person up woke everyone else up. When we walked to the door, it was unlocked." She said.
"Unlocked?" Todd asked and others did too, or were thinking it.
Miranda nodded and said, "But we tried getting out that night and it was locked."
Everyone took a monet to let the new information sink in.
"Why'd you come back here?" Abby asked, a good question. They were all sitting there, shaking with fear and Miranda had chosen to relive it?
"Yeah, I'm not known to be the brightest of the bunch..." She admitted and everyone was confused, because she was the smartest... at least of this bunch.
"You are, actually." Hannah said, speaking for everyone. Miranda hesitated.
"I don't know." She said. 
"What happened that night?" Shawn asked, curious about her wierd behavior.
Miranda sighed and looked at the fire which was still burning strong. "I fear a recurrence, I'd rather not say." She said.
Everyone was silent and was speechless.
"So.. there's 3 and a half hours left in 2011..." Todd said, getting everyone's mind's off the creeoy thoughts drifting through the air.
Suddenly, Annie got up. This scared everybody, nearly everyone jumped.
"New Year's Eve is supposed to be fun." She burst, wanting a fun party as she thought she would recieve. "I'm not saying I don't want to be with you guys, but I do not want to be here." She said and courageously, made her way toward the door.
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Hey guys! Got another chapter out to y'all! ;D
Hope you all enjoyed it!
Okay, so!
New character?
ToddWasHere
I know it's sorta weird some people haven't even said anything  anything yet. But they are still there! I'm writing this off the top of my head. Fave, comment, follow....(;
Especially comment, I wanna know what you think! (What can I do better? Ideas? What is your favorite part? Ect.)
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HAVE A MAGNIFICENT NEW YEAR!!!!!!

         

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Just A Feeling
Chapter One

  Jordan and Hannah arrived at the New Year's Eve party at the local haunted house last of all the other guests.  Somehow, Max managed to get into the haunted house and set up a party. He turned on the heating and electricity and set everything up.
The girls walked up to the house together and smiled flirtaciously at Max when he opened the door for them.
"Hello, ladies." He said, smiling back at them. He closed the door behind them and followed behind them into the living room.
In the haunted house, there was a lot of old furniture and decorations and their friends were all hanging out in old arm chairs and couches around a fire burning in the fire place. 
Jordan and Hannah sat on the couch, sandwhiched by Lauren and Annie. 
General conversation filled the room, mostly about the fact that they were all sitting in a haunted house.
"I've heard there have been loud crashes and screams heard in this house." Lauren said, a tad bit afraid but mostly excited.
Annie shivered and shrunk into the couch, this whole haunted idea was creeping her out.
"I've heard of people getting possessed." Emily said, smiling at Annie.
"Shut up, Emily." She laughed, knowing that Annie was truing to frighten her too.
"I've heard that too." Max said, not seeing Annie's expression of terror. "Remember Anthony Valley?" Everyone nodded, he was a class clown never to be forgotten. "He was the last person to have a party here, thought to be the last. But since we're such fearless bastards, we're having one right now." 
"I was at that party." Miranda said and everyone's heads turned immediately to her, ready to hear the story. "It was dark and cold, he didn't get all fancy and turn on the heat and electricity. It was an all night deal and some of us were planning on leaving early, but we couldn't. The door had shut and locked. We were all scared out out of our minds. No one was getting out, No one was getting in." She told them, pausing for dramatic effect. 
No one spoke a word and everyone heard a door lock turn slowly, a chain lock hook up, and several other locks hitch. A neutral gasp was heard throught the room.
"Stop, stop, stop!" Annie begged as she burried her head in her lap, scared.
"Guys, does anyone else feel suddenly really cold?" Shawn asked, shivering. He sat in an arm chair alone, closest to the fire.
Everybody looked at him next, shaking their heads. He was scared and quickly moved next
to Max who was standing diagonally away from where he was previously sitting.
This was going to be a long night.
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Hey guys! Finally got this chapter out, sorry for the delay!
Stars of the chapter in order of appearance:

JordanKaylie1
bluehoodiesbabe
Max (made up because I only have two real guys)
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Lalannie
emily1534
yousacutie6969
shawn_the_man

Thanks to everyone for letting me  use them! :)
If you weren't in this chapter, that doesn't mean you won't be in the next! It's a party, there's gotta be more people there!(: I'll do another chapter soon!
Thanks for reading! Watch for a second chapter! :)
Oh yeah, and...
HAPPY NEW YEAR!

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Yeah,
there's going to be a delay on the first chapter of Just A Feeling because I'm considering my options
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You'll probably give me some good ideas!
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