MAIAH, okay, you know Ryan's party coming up? Can you make sure people are bringing bottles and ? Like people from that friend group and such, I want to make sure we have enough, because I know a bunch of them can easily get alcohol. I'm making sure my friends bring some, so can you make sure they bring some too? GRACIAS (susannah wouldn't ask this, so i'm going to)
We finally got them back, so I found out that I only really had two major flaws in my paper-- it wasn't what we were suppose to write apparently and a little bit of passive voice. But I got full points for language, vocabulary, transitions.
I had my paper checked about 30430 times for grammatical errors. I guess it was the content or maybe the format of my essay or I didn't delve deep enough into my essay since it was such a board topic.