i tihnk.. that you have potentialll but if you want to make a real story just put a lot more details into it ya know? and just for the record.. you might already know this but you can't tell you're pregnant until like 2 weeks after comception i think..
but anyway it's a good story. keep it up:]
it's not your fault. it's not. THEY are the sick ones. THEY need help. don't kill yourself.. because out there is somebody who's gonna marry you. and up in heaven are your children, waiting for their time to come to earth. you may think that killing yourself will make people happier.. but if you do, somebody will be alone for their life. please don't do it. please. because even though it seems like nobody cares about you.. but believe me. SOMEBODY does.
hehh sorry:)
hahah good quote tho.
you made me loose >.<
but anyway it's a good story. keep it up:]
haha no i think it's cool. there's no reason guys shouldn't be allowed on witty.
glad you're here dude:]
please don't do it. please.