story idea? need advice.
im thinking about writing a
story. heres the description:
it seemed like whenever winter came,
everything went wrong. it was like a
change in the weather led to a sudden change of heart. we all
minds, for one reason or another. We always just left. and i
never really knew
why. It was one one those things i learned to live with. Like
all the things i had
learned to live with out.
I let my mind wander off as my feet led the way. One step
after another, i didnt
think, i just went with it. it was like i was dreaming,
accept i was fully awake. At
any given time i could change my mind and go back, but i
didnt. And maybe i
That was when it happened. It was my first night in the new
Everything was new and fresh. I had a chance to act normal,
and maybe make
some friends. But all those chances flew out the window when
i found it.
It was a small box, which fit perectly in the palm of my
hand. it looked like a
small jewlery box, but i had never seen a jewlery box of that
size. i didnt know
how i knew to come here, or how i found it. But it wasnt very
suprising that i did.
i wasnt normal, and i knew that. but i was yet to
discover what i was capable of.
Suddenly i was standing. my feet were moving once again and i
just let them
take me. across the feild and through the river, miles and
miles away. i must
have walked for hours, but i wasnt tired. it was dark but no
one had called for
me. no one really cared.
i knelt down to find a small key along the river bank. of
course, it fit in the box. i
was hesitant to open it, but i was curious. i should have
curiosity killed the cat, for what lay on the bottom of that
box would change my
life in ways i never could have imagined. No one could have
predicted what my
so what do you think??? if you
like it, i will continue to write.
but i also want your help. i have three possible title
#1- CHasing Horizons: this symbolizes chasing something that
is impossible to
catch, which is what the whole story is about
#2- Nobodies Fault- This one is less symbolic, but more
straight forward. A lot of
the plot twists in the story are actually no bodies fault, so
it makes sence.
#3- ITS up to you!!! what do you think would be a good story
title?? i know this
is hard considering you havnt read the whole story yet but if
you have ideas i'd love to hear