My lost love (tell me
what to work on and what you think)
3 Years ago my wife was murdered at the bridge we use to go and
sit and talk. I am trying to find how she got murdered and by
who. One day I was sitting on the porch on the swing watching the
cars go by all the kids playing ball. The birds chirping, the
mail came there was this letter "it was from my wife? Maria
sent me mail and she is dead?"I said quietly. I check the
date the date was 3 year's ago? The day before she died. I
opened it up and it said "Hello sweetie, it is Maria the
person who has killed me told me to write you this letter I love
you and I will never forget you. I cannot tell you who or where
he is I am sorry. But here goes nothing, you will get hint's
everyday from who has killed me. This is one of them. I was
planting flower's at the bridge. Love: Maria" I was
thinking and thinking I finally figured out. Oh my I must go to
the bridge and go to the flower's maybe the murder left
something behind. I was walking to the bridge on a bright sunny
hot day with no clouds. I heard a scream I was thinking to myself
"That sounds like Maria.." I ran to what is was coming
from. "Oh my word these are the plant's I have been
looking for" I said loudly. I look down there is a river. I
kept thinking again to myself "Maybe she is down there.
Maybe the murder pushed her. Or maybe she committed suicide and
said it was a murder" Now I really have to keep looking for
my clue's I told myself in my head. "I must go look in
her diary!" I ran home as fast as I can run for a 53 year
old man. There was my niece Olivia. "Hello grampie Mike
where are you going? She said, I then said "Going to go look
at Maria's diary for some clues" She then said "Can
I he-" I interrupted her knowing what she was going to say.
"Yes, you can but you cannot tell anyone about this
Olivia." "I wont grampie Mike. I promise to the moon
and back!" "Okay then Olivia let's go!" We
then started to go back to my house to look for her diary. I
didn't know where she kept it cause she made me go out of the
house when she did put it some where. We tore apart that house so
bad. We broke thing's we did not find it. Olivia began saying
something quietly "I know where it is" I screamed
saying "WHAT?! WHERE IS IT?" Olivia said "I cannot
tell you I am sorry grampie Mike" She slammed the door and
ran outside. I ran outside after her. I could not see her
anywhere. I began thinking " Where is she. Did he/she take
Olivia to? Is this even still a suicide?" I began to
cry.