this a very exciting, interesting story:) i cant wait to see what else happens to her. :) this is great but a few things watch youre spelling: *coming *there's *tingly *uncomfortable *phone *babe
update more often...i cant wait for the next chapter.
it's a great start :)
but do you think you could give me format credit? just like it would bother you if they stole your quote, it bothers me when they steal my format.
otherwise, keep writing :)
wow, this is amazing. I like how you decided to make Mikella write in her diary to make it seem like the readers are reading her diary, I've never seen that before. this story is great! could you notify me (for the whole story) please? I can tell this story is going somewhere(: xoxo
hmm, i started thinking, and you should not put marquest in this because that would just make everyone cry about what he did to you, but yeah oh and we've been threw alot so mabey i deserve my own chapter lol but whatever you think of im sure will be great. im gonna start a story called how to win a girl, and its gonna be a romantic comedy about how we met and how you stole my heart but refused to give me yours but twist because in the last 3 chapters i win your heart..
So how about I've already compared everyone to their fake names and i think i know who's who.... But my question is why haven't you mentioned me yet, and what's my name gonna be?
update more often...i cant wait for the next chapter.
but do you think you could give me format credit? just like it would bother you if they stole your quote, it bothers me when they steal my format.
otherwise, keep writing :)