I never study for tests and I manage to pass most of them. The only test I failed this year was a Spanish test and I got a 62 on it and I'm not ashamed.
I like this story a lot, I really do, but you seem to be going a bit too fast and there's too much dialogue and not enough explanation. If you could explain a little here and there, this could turn out successful. Don't get me wrong, this story has a lot of potential but you need to work on bringing it out.
I spent over half an hour trying to find this story. And, there's only one thing I want from you: MORE! :)
I normally don't read any long, uninteresting quotes on here let alone stories. But, for some reason, this caught my eye and I read every word from chapter one to now. Please write more. You'll make my day! :D
It also has wallpapers and themes and stuff
I spent over half an hour trying to find this story. And, there's only one thing I want from you: MORE! :)