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"When people look down on you because you aren't who they want you to be, that's when you know you're doing something right." -My Bestfriend
Joined:
January 18, 2012
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6 years
Birthday:
May 31
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264988
Location:
California :)
Gender:
F
Hi, I'm Ashlynn. I'm 16, and I am officially a Junior! :)
I am also in High School band! Colorguard to be exact.
I like to read, draw, write, and paint. I am pretty easy going! I am a big chatter box.
I will seriously talk to anyone who even glances my way.
I am probably the most positive person you will ever meet! I'm super nice too,
so don't be shy to talk to me on here! I would love the company. (:
There isn't much else i can say about me! So... Enjoy what little is here i guess!
Lol well, i sorta wrote this the night before, so i would say this was rather good for being done last minute. :3 Haha! But criticism is always a good thing to have on anything. :)
aw man I remember when I had to read the book in freshman year. That was only last year but it seems like so long ago. This is really good, you did a great job.
Hey, so I read this and I wanted to say it's good, but I think it could do a little better. Like I feel like the first paragraph wasn't as compelling and also be careful when you name the book, the commas and such is confusing. And don't forget to underline the book title (add the author...unless it was an autobiography). Just check the essay again. If you don't wanna make any of these changes, I get it, just trying to help. Maybe have someone else proofread it too(: anyway, sorry if that was rude!!
Thanks for the input! I really appreciate it. It was for a summer reading project over the summer for AP Language. It was also kind of last minute. So i think it's rather good for a last minute essay. :P
A BURN?!? you made fun of some one for a thing they had no control over know one wants to be a sl/t she might have had issues growing up that "made" her one. YOU HAVE NO AUTHORITY TO JUDGE PEOPLE FOR THEIR MISTAKES.No one likes being judge by other people i found this "quote" very ignorant.
I know this is a late comment, but happy birthday! Getting older is scary, but it's worth it, once you start getting through the teenage years things get a little easier, trust me :3 xx
hi, im sorry to be a bother but please go check my recent quote it is a real problem that i am having and i would like to hear what you think! thanks :xoxo http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/6709735