storygirl64

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Hey guys
My real account is dani64, in case you like me enough to check it out ;)
Soooo here's the deal. I'm one of thoes witty writers. lol yes another one
I love feedback, negative or positive. Anything-anything at all-that you like or don't like about my stories, don't be afraid to tell me
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Chapter 13 baby! Im am SOOOOO sorry I didn't post sooner! I have soo much school work! Ugh! Keep reading! Ily ♥
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Chapter 12 is up! Big plans. Big surprises! Read moree and I'll post moreeee :))
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Chapters 10 and 11 are up. I hope you guys read them, they're pretty good. Things are getting intesnse. Lol. And somebodys knows a little more than they're letting on to ;) You'll just have to find out who and what
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I am sooooooo sorry I haven't posted a chapter in a while but I will really soon I swear. I am working on chapter 9 right now :) Thx so muchh 4 ur patience ♥ I am sooo busy with school n' stuff. lol but thx :)
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Chapter 8 is uppp :) Mmkay guys I hope ya read and enjoy. Fave and comment ♥ Sorry it took so long for me to put up. School started :/ ugh. Hear from ya guys soon, k? Bii!
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Read chapter 7 ♥ It's on my page. I love you guys. This chapter is better, i swear :) You guys rock!
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Here is chapter 6! I hope ya guys like :) This really isn't the best chapter and I'm really really sorry for that but I do know where this story is going so bear with me lol. I love all your support :))))
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Chapter 5 is up :) I love all of your support thank you sooooooo much I love you guys :)
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Chapter 4 is up...ya like? I really hope you do, its about to get good :)
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Chapter 4 comming up really soon! I'm working on it right now! If ya want me to keep ya posted on my chapters, tell me :) Almost like a subscription
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Chapters two and three are both up! Ya guys gotta make sure you tell me your opinion and that you like it so I know to keep writitng!!! :))
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Just put up chapter 1...check it out. If you guys like it, chapter 2 will be comming out soon too ;)
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Working on my first story: Missing
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Missing: 14 : 1 1::

 


 “I don’t get it. It just doesn’t even make sense.” Chelsea said, as she sat with Crista.
“Sometimes things don’t make sense.” She replied
“But she wouldn’t have killed herself! And what about the rest of them? Are they dead too?”
“Maybe, I don’t know. I wish I did, I’m sorry. I know how you must feel.” Chelsea sighed. ‘I know how you must feel.’ You don’t know anything. She thought.
“They aren’t dead. I just know. They’re stronger than that. I can’t go through this again.”
“Again?” She asked
Chelsea looked down. She didn’t mean for that to slip out.
“Nothing,” She spat, not meaning it to come out as harsh as it did.
“You can tell me. I was there when Nicole…” Her voice trailed off. “Erm, you know.”
“I know you were there, it kind of has nothing to do with that. It’s just…never mind.” They sat in silence for a moment until Chelsea spoke. “Why did you ask me if weird things were happening to me?”
“I didn’t.” She answered
“Yes, you did.”
“No, I didn’t.”
“Remember when you asked me if weird things were happening to Tori and Brittany and I had to tell you that they were…gone” She lowered her voice when she said ‘gone.’
“That wasn’t me…”
“Then who the hell was it?”
 


I'm sorry I haven't been on! OMG i promise i will try to post more sooner. Please don't loose interest, I'm trying! Lol i love you guysss ♥



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Missing: 13 : 1 1::

 


She heard a voice from behind her, very faintly. She heard what they were saying but the words didn’t mean anything to her mind, which couldn’t process anything at the time.
“You’re in shock,” She heard and felt someone guide her to an ambulance. “You’ll be ok, we just need to check you out” Chelsea still couldn’t process. So many things were running through her mind at the moment, but she could only understand one of the thoughts. Nicole. Was. Dead. Suddenly, her mind came back to her.
Suddenly she screamed. She felt scared and alone. All of her friends were gone. Just gone. One (and possibly more) was dead. Dead. And she was next. Chelsea was going to be murdered by a man who kidnapped and killed her friends. The air got tight again.
“I-I don’t wanna die,” She whispered. Suddenly, she felt warm, loving arms wrap around her, and heard the person sobbing.
“Mom?” She asked, and looked at her.
“Baby? Are you ok? I love you so much, I heard what happened and came here as soon as I could. I just can’t believe someone would do this, I can’t believe…I am just so happy your ok.” She sobbed
“Mom, I’m fine.” She said, hugging back. But she heard in the background, one of the cops say the word ‘Suicide.’ Chelsea closed her eyes and took a deep breath. “Suicide?” She asked a cop who was passing by. “Who committed suicide?”
“We aren’t allowed to give away any information.” He snapped back, with a harsh tone.
“Please. This girl was my best friend,” She stared, when Nicole’s mom came up behind her, nodding gently, and putting on the best fake smile she could put on.
“You can tell her what happened, she deserves to know”
The cop looked unhappy, and reluctantly explained. “We found Nicole in her house, hung.” He took a breath, obviously not wanting to explain this. “We figured it still could be a murder, but she had no fingerprints on her, or no fingerprints anywhere. There was no sign of someone breaking into her house. No windows are smashed, no locks are broken, nothing.” He took another breath and then looked up at Nicole’s mom again, who nodded with tears in her eyes. “This was the part that nobody knew,” he started. “Nicole came back. Yesterday. Nobody said anything, because she begged us not to. She said she had to take care of something before she ‘reappeared in life,’ as she said. Her parents went upstairs to check on her this morning and found her hung with a suicide note in her pocket”
  


Omg I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sorry I havent' posted a chapter in a while. The story is really picking up now...is Chelsea going to die? Holy poop find out. Keep reading I love you guys so much ♥



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Missing: 12 : 1 1::

 

Crista knows something. She’s hiding something…what? Chelsea looked around the room, still feeling like somebody’s watching her. Waiting for the perfect moment to leap out and take her. Then she heard it. Sirens. They were coming closer…and closer…and closer to her house. They zoomed right past her house and up the street. She followed them into her very familiar neighborhood. On her bike, she couldn’t keep up that well, but she just listened to the sound of the sirens and followed them until they stopped getting farther sounding, but started getting closer. The ambulances and police trucks were stopped in front of Nicole’s house. And there, in front of the police cars and tape, was Crista, standing there, with a look on her face that was very hard to figure out.
Chelsea dropped her bike and ran up to the scene.
“What the hell happened?” She asked Crista, but Crista wouldn’t answer. She just stood there with her mouth open and was shaking her head.
“Crista! What the hell? Can you please answer me? What happened?” Still no answer. And then she saw it. She saw what happened. She dropped to the ground, out of breath and words. She couldn’t breathe. The whole world was closing in on her.
There, laying in the middle of the grass, was Nicole's lifel.
 
 


Omg they found Nicole's body! Does that mean Brittany and Tori and also dead? Or are they not dead yet but they will be soon? And what is with Crisa? She is definately hiding something...what? She can't be Nicole's murderer, she was there when Nicole went missing, right? I think Chelsea is forgetting a big piece of important information in this whole thing. Keep reading to figure out what :)



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Do you know how creepy it is to be stalked?

You can’t make a single move without thinking to yourself, is somebody watching me? It’s much scarier than you think. Chelsea became so afraid of everything; she refused to leave the house unless mandatory. She became withdrawn and would sit in her room all day, too sad and scared to move. Her mom would try to cheer her up, her mom even forced her to go to a therapist or something. But nothing had helped. She was lost. Until she got a call.

Missing
It all starts here:

http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3714930

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 “Hello?” She spoke into the phone
“Hi, Chelsea?” She heard the familiar voice of Crista on the other side.
“Yeah, it’s me.”
“Has anything, weird been happening to you, Brittany, or Tori.” She said ‘weird’ like it was some alien word that she’s never used before.
“What do you mean Brittany, or Tori?” Chelsea asked
“Huh?” She didn’t know. Oh. My. God. She didn’t know. How could she not have heard about it, Chelsea had thought that the whole town of Henrietta had.
“Um,” Chelsea had no clue how to tell her this. “You know how Nicole went kind of, ‘MIA?’”
“Yeah, I was there when it happened.”
“So did Brittany and Tori.” She blurted out. The other line was silent
“I’m so sorry” She heard somebody finally whisper.
“Yeah,” Chelsea replied, “So am I”
“What happened?” Crista asked
“I don’t know, I hardly know ANYTHING. I’m so confused right now and I jus-” When she remembered her original question “What do you mean by weird things? Are weird things happening to you?”
“Um, well, I don’t know, it’s probably all in my head.”
“No seriously, are weird things happening to you, because I’m trying to piece together they mystery of what happened, and whether or not we’re next.”
“I really gotta go now, and, I, uh, I’m sorry. I can’t help you. Bye.” And she hung up.
 
 


This is like part II of chapter 10 but witty said it was too long sooo, yeah. I REALLY love all your support :) Keep reading, I love you all ♥



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 Missing: 10 : 1 1::

 

             Do you know how creepy it is to be stalked? You can’t make a single move without thinking to yourself, is somebody watching me? It’s much scarier than you think. Chelsea became so afraid of everything; she refused to leave the house unless mandatory. She became withdrawn and would sit in her room all day, too sad and scared to move. Her mom would try to cheer her up, her mom even forced her to go to a therapist or something. But nothing had helped. She was lost. Until she got a call.
 
It was Crista. She had completely forgotten that Crista had been with them the day that Nicole disappeared. The thing was, Crista wasn’t really their friend. They hung out sometimes, but barely. Nicole had only invited her because, well, just because. No reason, actually. Chelsea couldn’t help but wonder if Crista is being threatened too, or if she was already taken, and was calling for help? She picked up her phone and pressed the green talk button.
“Hello?” She spoke into the phone
“Hi, Chelsea?” She heard the familiar voice of Crista on the other side.
“Yeah, it’s me.”
“Has anything, weird been happening to you, Brittany, or Tori.” She said ‘weird’ like it was some alien word that she’s never used before.
“What do you mean Brittany, or Tori?” Chelsea asked
“Huh?” She didn’t know. Oh. My. God. She didn’t know. How could she not have heard about it, Chelsea had thought that the whole town of Henrietta had.
“Um,” Chelsea had no clue how to tell her this. “You know how Nicole went kind of, ‘MIA?’”
“Yeah, I was there when it happened.”
“So did Brittany and Tori.” She blurted out. The other line was silent
“I’m so sorry” She heard somebody finally whisper.
“Yeah,” Chelsea replied, “So am I”
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Do you know how creepy it is to be stalked? You can’t make a single move without thinking to yourself, is somebody watching me? It’s much scarier than you think. Chelsea became so afraid of everything; she refused to leave the house unless mandatory. She became withdrawn and would sit in her room all day, too sad and scared to move. Her mom would try to cheer her up, her mom even forced her to go to a therapist or something. But nothing had helped. She was lost. Until she got a call.
 
It was Crista. She had completely forgotten that Crista had been with them the day that Nicole disappeared. The thing was, Crista wasn’t really their friend. They hung out sometimes, but barely. Nicole had only invited her because, well, just because. No reason, actually. Chelsea couldn’t help but wonder if Crista is being threatened too, or if she was already taken, and was calling for help? She picked up her phone and pressed the green talk button.
 


 



UGHHH This chapter was a lot better and longer but witty said it was too long so I have to make it two chapters. Ughh. Thanks sooo much for reading it seriously means the world :) I hope you enjoy and angain I LOVE feedback :)



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Missing: 9 : 1 1::

 

“They’re watching you, I hope you realize that.” Nicole said.
            “What do you mean, who is ‘they?’” Chelsea asked
They, Chelsea they. Nicole said. She said it like it was so obvious, like there was no way Chelsea couldn’t know who ‘they’ was.
“Nicole, I don’t get it. Could you please just tell me?” Chelsea pleaded, but Nicole just laughed. Then a look of fear crossed over her face, and she pointed at a door that was open just a crack. “They’re watching,” she sputtered, and with that, she just ran away, leaving Chelsea to figure out her strange metaphor for herself. Chelsea turned at looked at the door. It was open, just barely and she just stared at it, until it closed, showing that someone had been there, watching her.
A high pitched shriek escaped her throat, and with that, her eyes flung open and she woke up, from that horrible nightmare.
And since that, she couldn’t shake the feeling that somebody was watching her. Like, actually watching her, not just in a dream. And maybe Nicole was giving her a clue. Maybe somebody was watching her. Maybe her Nicole, Brittany’s, and Tori’s kidnapper was not only planning on kidnapping her, but was actually stalking her. The ironic part was, that as if he had heard her thinking, something reflected in her window, a shadow. Something, or someone, was outside, right now. Watching her. 
 


 I hope ya guys like :) I am soooo sorry it took so long to post! School n' stuff. More comming really soon, I promise! Thank you sooo much for all the faves and support, you can never understand how much it means ♥


 
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Chapter 1:
http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3714930
 
 
Chapter 2: 

http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3715312 
 
Chapter 3:
http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3722601
 
Chapter 4:
http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3729097                               
 
Chapter 5:
http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3737264
 
Chapter 6:
http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3745782
 
Chapter 7:
http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3769407

Chapter 8:

http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/3801601  
 

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            Pacing around her room, Chelsea wept silently. She. Was. Next. How the hell was she supposed to avoid this guy? Tori couldn’t even escape him when she was in a hospital. Which, she thought were safe. Guess again. The only way to avoid him, was to know where he is. At. All. Times. But how? She can’t turn into a stalker in an hour. Stalking takes skill, and commitment. Besides, how did she know she wasn’t being stalked by him? Maybe he isn’t just a kidnapper, maybe he is a stalker too. He could be watching her right now. As she thought this she closed all her blinds and locked her door. This was the scariest thing she has ever been through. And worst of all? She didn’t have her best friends to help her through it. She had to find out what happened to them. Where are they? Are they…dead?
No.
No.
No.
They can’t be. They aren’t dead. They’re not that kind of people. They don’t…they don’t…they just don’t die. They just don’t.
So, now is it up to Chelsea to find out what happened? Or should that be up to the police? Wasn’t it her duty as their best friend to keep them safe? What is a 16 year old supposed to do? What can a 16 year old do?
This wasn’t right. No. Who would do this? Who could be so heartless? It was up to Chelsea. She had to find the kidnapper.
 


This is an ok chapter lol ♥ Sorry it's taking so long to get good haha. Keep reading...more comming soon :)

 

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