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            “Tori.” No response “TORI!” Chelsea screamed. She wasn’t sure if she was dead or just passed out. After they got that creepy stalker note, Chelsea found herself seconds later hovered over Tori’s motionless body laying on the ground. She was pretty sure she had just fainted after a brief panic attack. Chelsea, petrified, called the police, and then an ambulance, all in a panic. But after Chelsea had calmed down, but was still waiting for the police and ambulance, she started pacing (something she always does when she’s thinking). She was fairly confident that the police could handle this problem, like, the police can handle anything, right? They’re the police, seriously.
WRONG
After the police came and the paramedics looked at Tori-and declared she would be ok-the police took the box and the note.
Tori had been admitted to the hospital just to make sure she was ok. But the doctors ensured she would be ok. So Chelsea hadn’t worried. But the next day, the police called and asked her to come to the station because they had ‘news.’ She got there, and the only thing they said was “Whoever he is, this guy is good. No fingerprints, no hair samples, no DNA molecules of any sort. There is no way to tell who sent this.”
            Big help. Really, that was a big help.
So Chelsea went to go visit Tori, that’s what friends do, right? So she found Tori’s room number (number 56) and burst into her room. But nobody was in there. So Chelsea called Tori’s mom to see if maybe she was sent home, but all her mom said was “What do you mean? She’s in the hospital, room 56. I am coming to-” But that’s as far as she got before Chelsea dropped her phone. There, staring at her on the curtain in Tori’s hospital room, in the same small handwriting, it said
 
I’m coming for you now
 

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 Suddenly there was a knock on the door. Tori jumped up, startled. 
“Tori, it’s just the door” Chelsea reassures. “I’ll get it”
“WAIT! DON’T!” Tori blurts out
“Why not?” Chelsea retorts
“It could be Nicole and Brittany’s kidnapper!” Courtney rolled her eyes
 “Tori, it’s ok. You need to stop being scared, you need to face up to your fears. You can’t live your life hiding under the covers.” Tori slowly nodded
“Ok,” She mumbled under her breath.
Chelsea walks down the stairs and puts her eye against the peep hole. She can’t see anybody, so just opened the door, slowly.
There was a package on the ground. It was about a foot long and half a foot wide. She was just about to open it when she saw the label. It read “For Tori, Enjoy!”
 “Tori!” Chelsea screamed “It’s for you!” She called up the stairs.
 Tori ran down the stairs “Who is it?”
“It’s this package” Chelsea handed it over to her. Tori looked up at Chelsea, who nodded in return. She slowly opened it and looked inside. The only thing in there was a small piece of paper, about 2 inches long.  Chelsea and Tori looked at each other and Tori picked up the piece of paper. In tiny, neat handwriting, that you could only see if you looked really closely, it said “You’re next"
 

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             Two weeks after Nicole went missing, Brittany went with her. Yes, Brittany went missing. Tori, Chelsea, and Brittany were hanging out in Tori’s backyard. This time, when Brittany went missing, it was weird, like, really weird, and it happened so fast. They were hanging out and Tori said that it was getting dark and they should go inside. Tori and Chelsea both filed inside and when they turned around, Brittany just wasn’t there. They called for her outside, but no response. They had glanced at each other and then ran outside screaming her name while crying at the same time. They knew that she was gone, but the looked for hours anyway. They looked all night, but it was no use. She was gone
Tori and Chelsea sat on Tori’s bed together and cried for hours. Two of them were gone, now they were far from complete. Nicole was gone. Brittany was gone. Who was next?
They both looked at each other when Tori said
“Chelse, what if, what if we’re next? They are probably coming to get us right now!”
“Tori, calm down. I-I don’t know what to tell you. I wish I did, I really do.” She let out a big sigh and said “I just don’t understand what happened. Were they kidnapped? Or did they just wander off?”
Tori looked at Chelsea with huge, pleading eyes. A piece of her dark brown-black messy bun fell into her face and she pushed it behind her ear. As if they read each other’s minds, they collapsed into each other’s arms, hugging each other as tight as they could.
“I love you, and I have no idea what I would do without you. Don’t you disappear on me” Tori pleaded to Chelsea
“I’m not going anywhere” She was going to say ‘I promise’ but she didn’t want to keep a promise she wasn’t sure she could keep.

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They were all at Chelsea’s house, looking at pictures again. It cheered them up; it was like Nicole was still there, with them. They could feel her practically. Yeah I know that sounds creepy, but deep down inside, they knew, they just knew that Nicole was not dead. She couldn’t be! There were so many pictures it took them hours to go through them all. Occasionally, they would glance up at each other and just fall into each other’s arms. It was like they were lost without her. They weren’t complete. There was just no explanation for why she was gone. Nothing.
 Finally Chelsea stood up.
“Guys, what the hell are we doing?”
“What do you mean?” Brittany asked
“We can’t just sit around and feel sorry for ourselves! Ok, Nicole is gone. I miss her too, but sitting here and doing nothing isn’t going to bring her back or find her, or find out what happened to her or-or-do anything! We have to get off our sorry butts and get out there and find out what the hell happened to her!”
Tori was in the corner of the room in a fetal-ish position. Brittany stood up, but then stopped, she was scared. She hates to admit that, even to herself, she’s always so fearless, but she was. Finally after looking at Tori laying on the floor, she brought herself together and said
“Tori, get up.” Brittany demanded “She’s right”
“But we could get hurt! We could be next!” She retorted
“Shut up. Stop worrying, we’ll be fine. What happened to Nicole was some freak thing. It isn’t going to happen again. Don’t you want to find out what happened to Nicole?” Brittany lectured
 
 
 
The saddest part of all was that Tori was right.
 

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             But she never did. The whole night, they waited, all too afraid to fall asleep. Days past, she never showed up. Each day, Chelsea, Tori, and Brittany grew closer and closer. Their friendship bonded over Nicole’s disappearance. Nicole’s mom had become so sad and withdrawn. She didn’t have a husband and no kids besides Nicole so she was all alone. She filed a missing persons report with the police, who weren’t much help. They questioned each of the girls. He asked them each the same stupid questions that ultimately got them nowhere. Nicole was gone. Then there was that thought that had crossed each of their minds, but each girl pushed it right out, because it was too horrible to consider. Is Nicole dead?
They felt like they were in a Pretty Little Liars book. But this was real. Nicole could be dead, and she may never come back. Just that thought made them all tense up. And someone would have to calm them down. Especially Tori, she needed to be calmed down, a lot. After a week, they’ve all cried a lot together and spent almost every second together. The only times they were separated was when they had to pee or shower. That was basically it. None of them could stand the thought that Nicole was gone. It had been a week since she was gone, there was still hope. She could be found.
            They looked through old pictures of themselves when they were little. They had been best friends since birth. All of their parent’s had worked together so, well, you know how that goes.
            To think that this was supposed to be the best summer ever. They were supposed to go to Nicole’s beach house in Miami and spend the whole summer there. But when Nicole went missing, they all had no choice but to go home. It was too weird to be there without her. Nicole Daniels was so full of life. She always knew how to cheer the girls up. They could really use her now more than ever. Their new favorite activity, instead of taking pictures of themselves, or having lame fashion shows, was now crying in their rooms together. It was sad, it really, really was. Their best friend was gone. Maybe forever
  
 

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           “Nicole!” Chelsea Heathernall cried “Where the hell did you go?” She screamed. “Guys, come on, help me find her!” She said. Tori Puerskia followed close behind, scared as hell, after came Crista McJore and lastly Brittany Mouh.
            “Where is she?” Brittany asked
            “If I knew, do you think I would be screaming her name and looking for her?” Chelsea retorted.
            “Guys, cool down. We’ve had a long day and we’re all worried. Let’s just go back inside and relax. She’ll definitely come back in. What is she going to stay out her all night?” Brittany suggested. She pushed a long caramel colored piece of hair out of her face and behind her ears.
            Tori butted in, “Yeah guys, I agree with Brittany. These woods are freakin’ scary and we should go back inside. If Nicole is sane, she’ll come back in and soon.”
They had all been playing manhunt not too long ago. Tori and Chelsea vs. Nicole and Brittany. Nicole and Brittany had been hiding. They had found Brittany, but they never found Nicole. They’d been looking for at least an hour and it was getting late and cold.
            They all piled inside, worried and frantic. They sat on Nicole’s suede couch silent. It felt weird being in Nicole’s house with, you know, no Nicole. All of them kept picturing in their minds that in any second, Nicole would burst through the door and say “Haha I got you! I win!” Knowing her, this is exactly what she would do to win. She is so competitive. Everyone was still silent, when Tori finally spoke “What if she never comes back?” She whispered, so quietly everyone else almost couldn’t hear them. Chelsea hugged her. “She will.” She add just as quietly “I promise” 

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