swimmergirl3796

I love your new story!(love at first sight) You should continue writing :]

thanks you too!

Sorry for the spam, but I'm looking for a witty friend! :)

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Honesty Hour Round 2! Ask me questions you didn't get too the first time and I will answer it 100% honest no matter how personal or strange it is on my latest quote!

I am so sorry about that :( You can read chapter 19 on my website but yeah. Anyway, Mr Parker & Logan date, then she breaks up with him, sends the money she wins to her mum and then Courtney sent a picture to the principle of Mr Parker & Logan when they were dating. So Mr Parker and Logan have to speak again and she tells him about the game & he gets piissed at her but after a while he forgives her, they say that the picture in the photo was of mr parker and his ex-girlfriend (the principle believes it) and when she graduates, they tell everyone they're dating and live happily ever after...
I hadn't really planned it, it just comes to me, I had the main plot nothing more so yeah..

I really liked it! but I'm sure your new one will be great too(:

Hey, so you can see all the chapters on my website: sugarfreakstories.weebly.com under the 'chapters' tab. I'll be uploading on both witty and my website for the rest of UMP, so if a chapter goes to *pending moderation* you can check my website c:

thank you! i absolutely love the story!

Before I even begin, children please wear sunscreen at all times!
You guys don't understand how much my face hurts and I look like a tomato -.- I went in my friends pool yesterday and didn't put sunscreen on all day so now I'm burnt. Like what the actual ? Why do people get burnt? Is it necessary? No.
Alright, a new chapters up. Its chapter 17 & its in two parts, the first part went to *pending moderation* so I re-posted it after part 2 and hopefully it doesn't go back to *pending moderation* So please don't get confused and read part 2 before part 1.
Speaking of all this *pending moderation* shebang, my chapters just keep going to *pending moderation* and I really don't get why. Its piissing me off but hopefully, soon this will all be over and everything will be back to normal. For now, if you don't get to see the chapters on witty, you can go to my website: sugarfreakstories.weebly.com and go to the chapters tab and find all the chapters of UMP. As I upload on Witty, I'll put in on my website so if its pending moderation, you can just go to there. You can still comment on quotes which say *pending moderation* and I'll remind you when the next chapters up. If you have any questions, just ask (:

I loe your story!! So amazing! You're very talented!

thank you so muich!

Hit me with your best shot is amazzing!

aw, thank you so much!(:

awwh thanks! c: so are you! I love love love Hit Me With Your Best Shot by the way!

awwww thank you! it means so much to me that people like my writing(:

im really bad at this whole quote reply thing so i think i replyed to the wrong thing but oh well! Haha I just wrote a prologue but i dont know if i want to post it yet, like idk if its good! haha

haha i was looking for the comment and i was confused, like what? I'm sure it will be good! I'll give you a shoutout if you do decide to post it(:

haha :) i could post it in a comment and you could read it and tell me if you like it if you'd like! It's kind of long. haha :)

sure!(: anything to stop me from starting my homework.

oh homework sucks! haha okay here it goes. Prologue I remember the worst night of my life so clear. The smell of the smoke, the screams of the people that were once happy, now scared out of their minds. My best friend Payton threw a ‘welcome to summer’ party to get the summer fun started. I remember getting ready for the party with her, her long brown hair curled perfectly, my long blonde hair straightened beautifully. People came right as soon as the party started, but then these rival kids from another school showed up. Our school, Hilton High has always had a rivalry in sports with The Grayson Hawks. A fight started in Payton’s living room, punches were thrown and of course our school won. That’s when the Grayson Hawks freaks decided to leave. We turned the music back up and laughed about how pathetic they were at fighting against Payton and mine’s boyfriends, the leaders of the football team, plus the hottest guys in the whole school. I held Dylan’s hand tight, dating now for 3 months, it was perfect. The music was loud, “Teenage Dream” by Katy Perry was playing and everyone was dancing. That’s the exact moment when everything went wrong. The Grayson Hawks kids were so upset that they lost the fight, they got out of control. They broke Payton’s windows and busted into the main room of the party where everyone was at. People screamed around us and when I turned around all I saw was guns in the air and those guys screaming. I never thought the school rivalry would go this far. They shot at the ceiling to scare us, to show they really did have bullets. “SIT DOWN AND NOBODY MOVE OR I WILL SHOOT ALL OF YOU.” Screamed the ‘leader’ anger and evil in his voice, his evil appearance scaring the crap out of everyone around us. We all sat down and then they took a lighter and started to set Payton’s curtains on fire, quickly spreading. Then he set part of the floor on fire, spreading again towards us and they jumped out the window. It all happened so fast, people were screaming trying to find a way out. People were crying frantically looking for a way out. That’s when Payton, Dylan and I all got separated. I was all alone in the corner of the house, frantically looking for a way out where there was no fire. I saw a way and followed many people out hoping that Payton and Dylan had made it out already. I covered my mouth and nose with my blue crop top that I had on, coughing trying to catch my breath without smoke getting in my mouth. Once I made it outside, the police and fire fighters were already there trying to help people out and get the fire put out. Everything went in slow motion from then on. I looked through all the people trying to find Dylan and Payton but couldn’t find them. I called them multiple times but they wouldn’t answer. The fire fighters were pulling people out of the house as the house slowly burned. That’s when I heard Payton’s scream, her plead for help. I ran to the side of the house and I could still hear her and Dylan screaming. I ran through the side door, the temperature at least a million degrees and the smoke making it hard to see and breathe. “Payton! Dylan! Where are you guys?” I scream almost choking. I hear them cough and they were lying in a corner, almost unable to move. Payton was crying next to Dylan who was passed out. “Payton come on we have to carry him out.” I say and she grabs him with me and we drag him out, the house is crackling, the ceiling falling in and it is surely destroyed. We get out and lay on the ground, catching our breath. I made sure Dylan and Payton got help before me, although I had multiple burns on my arms and legs. My mom picked me and Payton up after. Dylan went home with his Dad. We told my parents what happened as we cried into pillows all night. We lost at least 5 people from our school to the fire. I am filled with anger at those other kids. They pushed the rivalry too far. It was just a sports rivalry but they didn’t have to actually kill us. I decided right then that I was ready for my revenge on the Grayson Hawks, and I knew exactly how I was going to do it.

yeah, i like it!!!

thanks, its so long i didnt realize i typed that much!:/

i have tried to write stories before but i always forget to update or don't know where im going with the story. lol i love writing but i never finish anything. :( ugh i really just would like to finish one book.

if you start one, I'll definitely help get the word out! I bet you could do it!

Thanks :) i wrote one on my old account and i actually finished it! But it wasn't that great.. I might post one soon, we'll see how it goes.

you definitely should! I would read it(:

Hey! It would mean sooo much if you could check out the story I'm starting....it's my first story and I was hoping to get feedback...I'd love you forever!! Haha btw I really like your story:)

I will think about it. I am still seeing if anyone will go and like my quote so i CAN make my story.

I love your story, please could you notify me?! Cause i'll probs forget to check otherwise but i have followed:]

Hey my names Tarrynn. i've recently started writing stories, theyre called enchanted and my beautiful little angel. if you could please check them out and tell me what you think it would mean a lot. Thank you!.x

I just love your story so much that I think I'm gonna faint

oh no, don't faint! haha, but thank you, that means so much(:

Sure! could you write like a summary of the story or something so i can post it for people to want to read it? ill help in any way i can! Its a great story! (:

aw, thank you! so Avery and Troy are enemies, obvi. it's their senior year, so they're taking this rivalry to the next level. neither of them are backing down, and they are both willing to do anything to win. somewhere along the way things change along with someone's feelings. that's all I can give away for right now(:

okay (: ill start spreading the word!

thank you so much!(:

no problem! I love the story its so good! (:

Hey I Will,Continue The Story,But,I'm Going To Change It
Don't Worry Love !

Thanks cant wait to read it! (:

hay I'm reading your story? Are you from NH? cause the school I go to is the LHS Lancers and idk I just thought it was really cool that the school team was Lancers in story cause well... no one knows where I live even exists. Unless your into band...

no, I live in CT. i got the name from the old show in the CW hellcats(: haha

ohhh haha that makes more sense

haha(: