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Young Love Murder
that is what this must
be......♥
Chapter 2
I walked
down the hall for a brand new year. I looked around,
recognizing some faces easily, and pinpointing the panicked
freshman. The hardest thing to miss in the hallway was
definitely Luke, however. He stood at his locker, sunglasses
on. A swarm of girls surrounded him. They giggled at his
every word. As I passed, he pulled down his shades to get a
better look. He winked, and put his sunglasses back on. I
rolled my eyes. A wink wasn't going to win me over. I
kept on walking.
"Hey
Linds!" Jack smiled as he caught up with me. "How
was your summer?"
"It was good. And
yours?" Jack was one of my guy friends, but not one that
I hung out with. It was good to see him again.
"Pretty good. Let
me see your schedule, maybe we have some classes." He
said. I handed him the white sheet of paper. He compared his
to mine.
"Biology and
geometry," he smiled.
"Great!
I'll see you then I guess."
"Okay.
Bye Linds!" Jack left with a smile.
As I went through
the day, my binders filled up with papers I needed to get
signed. At the end of the day, I tried to organize them and
my locker, but I ended up with a pile of papers shoved into a
folder and a locker that didn't look much better. I
sighed and shut the locker, slinging my backpack onto my
back.
"Hey there," a
voice said beside me. I turned and found myself face to face
with Luke.
"Hi." I said
stubbornly.
"And what's
your name?" He smiled.
"Lindsey."
"I'm-"
I cut him off mid-sentence.
"Luke I know. Are
we done talking now?" I snapped at him.
"Woah there. Kitty
got claws. I like. You're different from the rest of the
girls here. I'll keep that in mind." He winked and
walked away. I groaned. He was just the same as any other
popular boy. He thought every girl was in love with
him.
Young Love Murder
that is what this must
be......♥
Prologue
"No. Never. I won't do it." Jack protested.
"You only have one goal. To protect her. This is the
only way you can. It's either you, or her. Take your
pick." Luke grinned deviously.
"Fine. Take me. Just please don't hurt her,"
Jack looked crushed with worry.
"Ah. I knew you'd give me what I wanted."
I wanted to scream out, to tell them both to stop. That this
didn't need to happen. But I had no voice, I couldn't
move, I was frozen.
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Chapter 1
"LINDSAY! YOU AREN'T HELPING AT ALL!" My
bestfriend, Chelsea, shouted at me from her
closet.
"Sorry?" I threw back at her. She stormed out of
her closet, and stared right at me. I was lounging on her
bed, a Teen Vogue open in front of me, not paying the
slightest bit of attention to her.
"I have a date with the hottest boy in school, and you
won't even help me pick out an outfit! Please help
me!" She whined. I smirked and slowly lifted myself up
off of her bed, and walked into her closet. I pulled out a
pair of skinny jeans and a white top.
"Try these," I said as I threw them at her. She
approached a few seconds later. The skinny jeans made her
legs look long and slim. The white top was a three quarter
sleeve, and was a little loose. I went back into her closet,
and returned with a patterned scarf and belt. The scarf was
all shades of pinks, and had a floral print. The belt was
brown. When I stepped back to admire my work, Chelsea looked
awesome.
"Voila,"
I said, laughing. She took a look at herself in the
mirror.
"Wow. I look great. Thank you thank you thank you!"
She exclaimed.
"My work here is done," I laughed, and left to walk
home.
It was a brand new year at Hempfield High. I would now be a
sophomore. Finally! No more dirty looks from seniors. No more
being a hopeless freshman. I was moving up in the world. Word
about the new kid had spread quick. His name was Luke.
Apparently, to all other boy-crazy girls in my grade, he had
"the warmest brown eyes and most adorable smile and was
absolutely gorgeous!" I wasn't like that. Every boy
that tried to get my heart, I shooed away. I was untouchable.
No boy could win me over. Somehow, that made boys more
interested in me. I had shot down most of the boys in my
grade.
The time has come for me to write a new
story!
I have 2 ideas, but I want you to help me pick
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Comment on this quote with one of the stories.
I'll start writing it tomorrow. :) Thank you so so
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Peaches &
Love
The Georgia
heat is new to Savannah. She just moved to
Georgia from Wisconsin. She thinks she hates it there,
until she meets the one person who changes everything.
Irresistable
The new
girl at school, Mariah, is obviously beautiful. All of the guys
notice it.
They all want her. But, Mariah isn't an easy catch. So, who
can get her?
"Oh! You're up!" My mom exclaimed. "Oh sweetie, I'm so glad you're okay!" She kissed me on the forehead. "How do you feel?"
"Weird..." I laughed.
"Oh let me go get Drew!" She said.
"Drew's here?" I asked.
"Of course. He went to go get some food."
I couldn't help but smile. Until I remembered why I was here. What exactly had happened to me. My mom left the room, and I was alone with my thoughts. Drew walked in.
"Acelynn!" He ran over and kissed me.
"Hi." I smiled. "Why am I alive?" I suddenly asked.
"Well, you picked up the phone and I heard Matt. I got there just in time... but if I had known that this was going to happen. you wouldn't have had to be hurt. I could've protected you." He looked sad and he clenched his fist. "This is my fault, Acelynn. And I am so so so sorry."
"Drew, don't be ridiculous. How could this be your fault?" I pulled him closer to me and kissed him.
"Right now, this is all that matters. You and me. The past doesn't matter anymore. It's all over, let's just be happy. Can we?" I begged.
"Yes. Of course we can." He smiled. He stayed with me all night, and all the nights for the rest of the time I had to stay in the hospital. Matt had been arrested, and put in a mental hospital. I eventually healed, but I would always have the scar.
--4 years later--
I crossed the stage to get my diploma. The principal shook my hand, and I quickly exited the stage. I didn't like all of the attention. After everyone had recieved their diploma, we were allowed to go see our family. The first person I hugged was my mom, then my dad, and finally Drew. He had already graduated.
"Congratulations beautiful." He whispered into my ear.
That fall, I would be going to the same college with as Drew, and that would begin the rest of our lives together.
THE END :)
author's note: what did you guys think? did you like the end? i'll post the options for my next story tomorrow, and you guys can pick which story you want me to write! this one will definitely be longer and more planned out. thank you to ALL of my readers, you guys are the best<3
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"Ah. Acelynn." He said, playing his words. He took a step toward me.
"H-how did you get in here?" I stammered.
"Nevermind that. I'd rather answer the 'why' part." He grinned. He had his hands folded behind his back, and my mind started to jump to conclusions.
"I told you you'd be sorry. For doing that to me."
"I didn't do anything!"
"But you did. And so, I have to get revenge." He started to walk towards me again. "What a shame, you could've been something great. You will be missed, Acelynn." I saw a glimmer in his hand as it dropped to his side. A knife. He had a knife.
"No!" I screamed. I backed up towards the wall as he came toward me. I tried to run out the door, but with a crushing blow to my back, I was on the ground.
"Silly little Acelynn. Running won't do much." He smiled. His face was inches from mine. I felt the cool knife against my skin, he was resting it against my arm, but not cutting me. I could feel myself trembling. I gathered up my strength to push him off of me. I got up as quickly as I could, but he slammed me against the wall. A tear escaped my eye.
"I'm sorry." He said. He kissed me, but I held my lips tight, refusing to move them at all. Then, all I felt was pain. I saw the red gushing out of my side, and fell to the ground. Then everything went black.
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I met Drew after my last class at his car, and he drove me home. He came to a stop at my house, and walked me to the front door. We stood there for a moment as I fumbled with my key trying to open the door. I slid it open, but he wasn't going to go in.
"I'll see you tomorrow?" He said.
"Yeah. You will." I smiled. He leaned in for a kiss, and I wrapped my arms around him.
"I love you." He whispered, looking into my eyes.
"I love you too." I said. We let go and I went inside, shutting the door as he walked back to his car. How was I so lucky to deserve this? To get this perfect guy? This perfect life? I didn't know, but I wasn't going to take it for granted.
I went upstairs, and threw down my backpack. My parents weren't home from work, so I was alone. I turned up my music and started my homework. My music was loud enough that I didn't hear the footsteps slowly coming up to stairs and my door slowly creaking open until it was too late.
Author's Note: oooh creepy :) this story is getting near the end...once i finish it i'm going to post a few story ideas on my profile, and i want you guys to choose which one you want me to write :)
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"Drew..." I said.
"You don't have to say anything about what happened. Ever again." He said. I was planning on thanking him for saving me.
"Well thank you anyway." I whispered.
"Acelynn... I know you probably don't feel the same. But I just want you to know. I don't want to be friends. I like you more than that... and I promise, I will never do anything that Matt would do to you, and I-" I cut him off with a kiss. This time, it was a good kiss. A kiss that I was ready for. A kiss that I wanted. And at that exact moment, I knew. This was the best kind of love. Although I knew I wasn't completely clear yet. I still had to face Matt. I would have to face Matt every day in biology for the rest of the year.
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On Monday
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I walked into biology smiling. Drew had walked me there and left with a hug. I still had the scent of his cologne on my shirt when I sat down.
Matt was there of course.
"I won't forget." Matt said angrily.
"I will." I calmly said.
"Don't think this is over. Because it's not. No one does that to me. You and your little boyfriend aren't safe. You just wait." I heard him grind his teeth.
"F*ck you Matt." I said, and it felt good too. He got up and went to go talk to the teacher, probably requesting a seat change. That was fine with me. I didn't want to be near Matt.
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"What the hell are you doing?!" Drew yelled. He pulled Matt off of me. "What the f*ck man!" Matt said, and he ran in for a punch. Drew caught his fist and threw him on the ground. I sat crying in the corner. Drew came over to me and knelt down, holding my face in his hands. "Come with me." he said. He helped me up and held my hand, walking me out of the room, leaving Matt on the floor, wondering what exactly had just happened. He took me outside, and we sat on the grass.
"How'd you know?" I whispered. "Well, I knew something was wrong when I saw your face in art class, so I tried to follow you. I kind of lost you, but I heard you trying to scream."
"Oh." That was all I could say.
"Do you want me to take you home?" He asked.
"I don't want to go anywhere." I said. He hugged me, and I laid against his chest. ---- I woke up in my bed, and instantly remembered what happened. But exactly how did I get in my bed? I sat up, and Drew was there. He smiled.
"Sleep good?" He asked. I nodded and smiled. The warm sun was beating through my window. I closed my eyes, and when I opened them again the moment was still there. It wasn't a dream. It was real.
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"Hello gorgeous." He said. I smiled. This was the side of Matt that I wanted. He kissed me, and I tried to pretend like it didn't bother me.
"Are you ready?" He asked. I nodded, not looking him in the eye.
"Let's go." He added. He pulled me along next to him and we walked to the photo developing dark room, because it was always empty.
He started to kiss me. He pulled off his shirt. Abs. Of course.I started to have second thoughts, but it was impossible to pull away from him. He pulled off my top shirt, but I still had a cami on underneath. I closed my eyes, trying to forget what I was doing, but I couldn't. I pulled away.
"No."
"No what?"
"I can't do this."
"It's too late now." He kept kissing me and wouldn't let me up.
"NO! MATT! I CAN'T!" My screams were muffled. He tried to take my pants off, and all I could do was kick and scream.
"Kicking won't do much." He whispered in my ear.
Suddenly, the door flew open.
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I hesitated to walk into biology. I was thinking about skipping. I knew that that would only prolong what would happen. I walked in, and tried to keep myself together. Matt was already there, but he wasn't alone. Daisy Lombardo was there next to him, laughing, gently hitting his shoulder. Flirting. Stealing my Matt. Was he even mine? I didn't know. I sat down and tried to ignore them, but the situation was still awkward.
Daisy left, and Matt turned to look at me.
"You're making a mistake." He said. "I could easily be the best thing that's ever happened to you."
"I know." I whispered.
"I want you Acelynn." He whispered in my ear.
I closed my eyes, and fought back the tears.
Was it wrong to want him too? To want this monster?
"I want you too." I whispered.
I knew I was being foolish. I knew I wasn't ready. But he was all I wanted.
"Good. Then I'll meet you after school." He whispered.
I couldn't focus in class. All I wanted to do was scream. My brain told me no. My heart told me yes. I just wanted to cry, and scream, and throw a tantrum like a little 3 year old. But tantrums wouldn't save me now. I had already put myself in this situation, and I had no way out.
*In Art*
"I can see it in your face. What's wrong?" Drew asked out of the blue.
"Nothing." I whispered.
"Is it that boy?"
"No."
He sighed. "I can't make you feel better if you don't tell me whats wrong, and I hate to see you like this."
"I'm fine." I said stubbornly.
His eyes pleaded me to tell him, but I couldn't get the words out. I didn't want to say what I was going to do out loud, that would make it seem more real.
Author's Note:
Sorry it seemed to turn a little...depressing? I guess you could say. Let me know if it's too much, or if it's perfect I love feedback:)
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