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EllieBellyBoo 1 decade ago
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Chapter 1
I frowned at the T.V. It was same old, same old. Then I heard my younger brother screaming. He screamed all the time. I heard my mother's soft voice hushing him and then his crys slowly faded away.
I need to get out of here.
I grabbed my coat and opened the front door. I walked out of our little housing estate and into town. It wasn't any more than a 10 minute walk. I sat in my favourite cafe, called Earl's Cafe, and ordered a capichino. I still can't believe that this is going ahead. I can't believe that mum and dad agreed to send me away to a boarding school. A boarding school! Why?! I was going to miss my friends, my village,my town, but I wasn't going to miss my little brother, Harri, screaming. Not at all.
Earl came up to me then, inturrupting my thoughts.
"Are you alright, Dakota? You seem a little...sad." He asked.
"Well...I...I....I have to go to boarding school..." I admitted, feeling very sad indeed.
"Oh no! So I won't be seeing my favourite customer as much?" He seemed sad, too.
"I'll make sure I'll come and visit, Earl!" I promised.
Someone shouted Earl's name from the distance.
"I gotta go! See ya around, D!" Then he was gone.
I sipped my capichino thoughtfully. What was I going to do? I don't WANT to be sent away. Not at all. There's got to be some way that I can stop it....
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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The Day that Changed my Life :
Chapter 12

I couldn't stop panicking, me and Drake split up. I thought she might be in the bathroom, so I went looking there. In fact, she was there. Man, I was so relieved. "HANNA , where were you? You scared me to death!" I yelled. "I'm sorry, I just needed to go to the bathroom. I didn't mean to scare you" she said in a sad tone. "It's okay" I said. I went back to where we were and I found Drake sitting there, he seemed so worried. I told him what happened. We got our baggage and went looking for some place to stay. We found a motel that wasn't so far from the station. We decided to stay there until we found some place to stay. We thought we should go get know the place. First, we went to Times Square. It was beautiful and there was a parade too. We took a lot of pictures together. It was an amazing day. We went ice-skating in Rockfeller Center, The we got Starbucks. That was one of the best days of our lives. We went back to the motel. We decided that tomorrow we would go look for jobs. We got changed and went to bed. We woke up early, got dressed and went out. We had breakfast and some diner that was beside our motel. We stayed the entire day looking for jobs, We both got jobs as waiters but at a restaurant but we're gonna work there until we found a better job.
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DarrenMeAtSix 1 decade ago
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Thanks for the favourite.
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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its okk if you can't
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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that seems fine with me :)
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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Okk, so I guess I'll be writing I few chapters ;p
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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Do you mind if I write it tomorrow morning? cuz its late were I live now and I'm tired and sleepy x_x
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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you want me to write the next chapter or what ?
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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If you want me to do it I don't mind :)
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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The Day that Changed my Life:
Chapter 10

I realized that it was getting late. "Hanna, we have to go. It's getting late" I said. "Five more minutes please, I'm having so much fun!"she cried. "Hanne, if we don't go now we're gonna get in trouble and our aunt is gonna get mad at use and I don't think you like seeing her mad don't you?" I told her. The guy that was teaching Hanna some cords came up to me and said "Hi I'm Alex. I was leaving now and I was thinking if you want I can drop you home". "Thank you so much, by the way I'm Abigail and I think we should get going " I said with a smile on my face. H e dropped us home and as I was going out of the car he asked for my number so I gave it to him. Hanna and I went inside and we found our aunt sleeping on the couch and for me that was a great relief. Hanna went to play with her dolls and I went to my brother's room and told him about my plan. He told me that he heard that some restaurant downtown was looking for some waiters and he'll go check it out. I went to my room and went searching online for a good diet that wasn't that strict but that will help me loose weight fast. I stayed searching for almost two hours then I found the prefect diet and I also found this gym near by which is great and I'll be able to workout there when I have the time and I also thought to myself " New day , New me".
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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okk :)
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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I'll write it now.
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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I'll start writing the next chapter now :)
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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Do you want me to write the next chapter or you wanna write it ?
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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Yes i am
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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Yea , sure :)
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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The Day that Changed my Life
Chapter 7

As me and Hanna-lee walked up to the front door , all I could hear were my heart beats. I opened the door and I found my aunt sitting on her chair waiting for us. I told Hanna-lee to go upstairs and get changed so it would be me and aunt. She came up to me and started yelling "Where were you ?! , Do you even know what time it is ?! , Why are you so late ?! , What have I told you about being late ?". I told her about Hanna-lee getting lost and how me and Harry were searching for her, but all I could think of was "What is she gonna do to me now?". God , was I terified. She whispered in my ear "If you're ever late agai, don't expect to come in this house". As soon as she said I went running not knowing what to think, when I went to my room i found that Hanna-lee was already asleep. I lied on my bed as Drake came into the room. "What happened ?" He asked. I told him everything then he said to me "From now on , I'll go pick up Hanna-lee from school". I was relieved when I heard him say that. He went to his room and I got changed and went to sleep. This morning morning I didn't wanna go to school because I had a feeling that Gracie spread the news. I got changed and had breakfast and left to school before Drake and Hanna-lee. As I was walking up to school people were saying "ice-cream girl ........ice-cream girl". At that moment I was 100% sure that Gracie was the one that spread the word.
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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Give me half an hour and it'll be done
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natalieeeroseee 1 decade ago
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Khaoulaa_* 1 decade ago
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Bye , talk to you tomorrow :)
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