trishafaye819

that's the poem i entered

The
Girl

at the end of the day

who actually cares about the quiet girl

whose parents fight constantly

even after the divorce

who actually cares about the hungry girl

who goes home everyday not knowing whether or not she’s
going to have a meal

even with the food stamps

who actually cares about the caring girl

who’s trying her hardest and best to keep her young
siblings away from reality

even though she grew up too fast

who actually cares about the pretty girl

whose own mother calls her ugly, fat, a waste

even though she’s everything her mother wishes to
be

who actually cares about the smart girl

who doesn’t have the motivation do her
homework

even though she knows it all

who actually cares about the kind girl

who is afraid to go to school because she gets
bullied

even though she’d rather not be home either


because at the end of the day

who actually cares about the quite, hungry, caring, pretty,
smart, kind girl

dealing with

depression and anxiety

sleep paralysis and lucid dreams

with scars dancing across every inch of her skin
at
the end of the day who gives a d@mn about the girl

A magical age.

I personally like the second one better, my senior quote, if I had got it in on time, was " you can't pick who comes into your life, but you can pick the window you throw them out of.

That is awesome :D

I know! Thanks!

No problem,I wish I could do that but I have stage fright so :P

Oh I do too. From the way it sounds I won't have to talk in front of everyone there..so I should be alright, hopefully. lmao.

How did it go?

It's not until February i think lol.

Witty did this to my poem... I didn't look like this when I previewed it before publishing.

It* not I.

Looking at the code, I see extra stuff your other posts don't have. Did you paste it from Word or something? Maybe that's it. I've learned not to trust the preview in the editor. As soon as I submit it, I check all three widths: 1) 420 px wide on http://www.wittyprofiles.com/homeroom, 2) 602 px wide on the single-quote display (like when you click the comments button to open a quote), and 3) 682 px wide on any multiple-quote list (like new quotes or my quotes). If I don't like how it wraps, I immediately delete it and go back to the editor. I click the "load into editor" button for the most recent version and inspect the code. It's safe because it remembers your last 10 previews, so you won't lose your work when you delete your post.

Thank you!! That helps a lot.

I didn't write it from a movie I saw I just kinda wrote in study hall cuz I got bored

I would fave this except I'm scared of your little sister now. hehehe

Hahahaha. XD She wrote it off of a movie she saw or something I think, she's not homicidal. XD

Happened to me today.

Ha ha ha--so simple, so funny. Did you make that up?

Thank you, for giving me an opportunity to read your work. How would you prefer me send you my feedback via wittyprofiles?

and thank you for reading it :)

if you'd like, I left the option open to leave comments on the doc.

Ahh, it now needs permission.)

You should be able to view it now.

Ok, All worked out. Reading your work now)

I think it needs an e-mail to log in

Yeah, it does. I'll say you need to ask for permission to view it too, and it'll send me an email. I don't really know how to change it from that either, sorry. ):

Love to. But where can I find it?

here's the link:: https://docs.google.com/document/d/10QEMnXwzvV_pEBN6kHo_8X6AuV8Rpmx55eXNX-ml3Vo/edit

It wouldn't let me but an email was sent. I'm jordan.*****@gmail.com

it should let you now.

It's amazing!

Yeah? Thank you. Did it make sense? Were you confused at all?

Nope

Sweet, thank you!

Would love to)

here's the link : https://docs.google.com/document/d/10QEMnXwzvV_pEBN6kHo_8X6AuV8Rpmx55eXNX-ml3Vo/edit

The most number of computers I.have used at once is 128, its not a million but it's more than one.

I do all my math on a computer. Its amazing what you can do with zeros and ones.

I have a friend a bestie just like this. Oh my. ...