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IM Sorry But I Am Done With The Story UNTOUCHABLE,
If you would like me to write an epilouge I will do so.
As many of you know I write free verse.
Therefore many times I don't have an exact idea of what will happen next.
In this story I added too many characters and now everything is a mess.
I truely apologize but I can't continue writing it.
Sorry.

- uoy_evol_i

Untouchable

Ch. 13


I give a slight sigh while shoving my books into my bag.
I just finished my last class of the day,
and now I'm ready for some down time.
I begin making my way across campus,
avoiding the groups of cliques and keeping my eyes glued to the ground.
Considering the fact I'm on my period and completely overwhelmed by a boy,
I wasn't in the mood to be messed with.
"Tara!"
I spin around to see a guy sprinting at me full force.
"What Eli?" I mutter.
"What happened?" He questions, taking notice to my tone.
I roll my eyes.
"Nothing, kay. Now what do you want?"
Eli gives me a look but quickly shrugs it off.
"Everyone's going to Sweet Tina's to see Karli, I was wondering if you were still coming."
"Ughh," I grumble. "I forgot it was Karli's first day at work."
"So I'm taking that as a no." Eli responds.
I bite my lip feeling some guilt.
"I'm just not up for it today."
Eli nods and heads off towards the direction he came,
leaving me to walk back.

***

"You sure you aren't coming?" Abby questions, seeming a little concern.
I shake my head, motioning with my hands for her to leave.
"I really wound rather not." I state.
"Oh ok," she gives me a little smile.
"Well have fun here I guess."
And with that she closes the front door.
I sigh, throwing my body back onto the living rooms couch.
"16 and pregnant, pretty little liars, oh awkward! F//ck yea."
I state to myself while running through the channels.
Knock Knock
"Ughhh," I mutter, pushing myself off the couch.
"Abby I told you I don't want to come."
I ramble while opening the door.
"Oh," I exclaim a little taken back to see a guy there.
"Hey," Alex smiles while taking a step inside,
and a step closer to me.
"Hi?" I question. "Why are you here?"
"And not at Sweet Tina's" He finishes off my sentence.
I nod taking a small step back and closing the door behind him.
Alex shrugs. "I wasn't really up for it."
"Same," I mumble.
"I just wanted to stop by and." Alex stutters.
"Continue," I say while turning around and heading back down the hall.
Then I feel a pair on hands on my hips,
and my body is turned back around to face Alex.
I look up to see his eyes staring into mine.
"Do this," he breathes.
Then I felt I pair of lips against mine.
Alex's lips,
one of my best friend's lips,
someone I have never considered a boyfriend lips.
And the weirdest part.
I kissed him back.





Shorter Chapter.
But at least I got one up.
I can't notify for this one, sorry.
Please give feedback.



 

Dear Readers.,

A couple weeks ago a posted a quote saying I wouldn't be able to post a chapter for about a week,
well it turn out my summer is going to be a little more busy than that.
I'm not going to be able to post practically anything for the rest of summer.
I know I'm going to lose readers because of this which
SUCKS
but I truthfully can't do anything about it.
Since I am in the middle of a book,
I'd like for all of my readers to take a vote on what I should do.

1. Finish Untouchable and try to post chapters every now and than during the summer if possible.

or

2. Start a new book and begin it when the summer is over.


Please vote.(:
 

Dear My Lovely Readers,

I apologize for not posting a new chapter recently,
and I also apologize for the fact that I won't be able to for over a week.
I'm going to Indiana (I moved from there two years back) to see my friends.
This entire summer will be crazy, and I am extremely sorry for that.
Some weeks I'll try to post a chapter every other day,
and other weeks I won't be able to get one up.
I don't think you understand how sorry I am,
and I hope I don't lose readers.
I love you all.


- Sija.(:
uoy_evol_i 

Untouchable

Ch. 12.

I put my feet up on the dashboard and turned on my ipod, 
letting the music fill my ears.
I hummed quietly to the tune, closing my eyes.
"Tara?" 
I felt someone shake my arm, so I looked up to see Karli staring me down intensly.
"Eyes on the road!" I instructed.
Her head instaintly snapped back forward.
I figuered she was done talking to me so I slide down in my seat and shut my eyes once again.
"Tara!" 
She gave me a nudge that practically knocked me over.
"What!" I muttered, annoyed.
She furrowed her eyebrows, upset with my reaction.
"I'm sorry, and Eli is too."
"For what?" I asked, trying to play dumb.
"Knocking you and Zack into the water."
I winced at the name.
After I kissed him he stopped talking to me.

Talk about awkward.


"It's fine," I replied while turning so I could look out the window.
I placed my head on the cool glass and watched the trees pass by.
I thought about the weekend, it was completely unsuccessful.
I was planning to hook up with someone, anyone,
and the one guy I tried for practically rejected me.
Well, without meaning too.
"I really am sorry though,
like if Zack hadn't of fallen in too you could have landed on your ribs," Karli admitted,
her eyes full of apology.
"I realize," I reply, still touchy on the whole Zack subject. "Karli?"
"Yea, Tara?" She responded, her eyes glued to the road.
"I kissed Zack."
My eyes glanced up at Karli's face, truthfully I was terrified for her reaction.
She bit her lip catiously before replying.
"What happened exactly."
"Well uh," I started.
"After we were pushed in, and he practically let me land on him, I said thanks and all, and then I kissed him. Nothing huge just a kiss, but he didn't talk to me after. Just sort of smiled and swam back to the boat. But we didn't talk at all after and I think I maybe like him and-"
"Woah there, breath" Karli reasurred, cutting off my ramble of words.
I stared intensly at the dashboard where my feet were
before redirecting my eyes back up to Karli.
"I really think I might like him," I mumbled.
Karli paused for a minute, taking everything in.
"Alright then, good luck."
I felt my face go red in anger.
"Good luck! What do you mean by that?" 
Karli looked at me.
"Tara, you kissed him,
and it seems like he didn't take it very well."
"So?" I growl, still aggrivated.
"Well I mean he's the exact opposite of you to,
he doesn't drink or smoke and hasn't even hooked up with a single girl."
I turn to face the window once again, feeling defeated.
"Still," I mutter under my breath.
"Opposites attract."


Pretty Boring Chapter.
Sorry Guys.
I Love Everyone Of You!
Thanks So Much.
I Know Many People Are Doing Hints Now,
But I Cant Cuz I Write Freestyle.
Sorry.  :\


 

Untouchable

Ch. 10


I woke up to the sound of clanking.
"Rise and shine and give God your glory, glory."
I sat up and rubbed my neck from the awkward position I slept in
Alex suddenly stampeded into my room, banging a pan and wooden spoon together.
He continued belting his song before turning around
and heading off to annoy another victim.
I quickly threw my legs over the side of the bed and jumped down.
However, my body betrayed me when I landed so I ended up sprawled on the floor.
"You alright?" Zack questioned between chuckles.
"Yea," I muttered, embarressed by my clumsiness.
He catiously helped me to my feet,
and then we both left our room for breakfast.
"There's the lovebirds," I comment, noticing Karli and Eli also exiting their room.
Karli shot me daggers and I let out a laugh.

She obviously did something with that boy last night.

"Yes, I was starving," Eli exclaimed.
He quickly rushed to the buffet of food, devouring anything he got his hands on.
I rolled my eyes.
"Good manner," I laughed sarcastically.
Eli smiled at me, making sure I was able to see the food in his mouth.
"Thanks," he responded.
I saw a few other people from the party last night enter the room,
and soon everyone was surrounding the kitchen table.
"Alright, gameplan?" Karli asked, directing the question at Alex.
"Uhm," Alex began, going into intense thinking mode.
"How about we go out on the boat." Alex stated, looking at us for approval.
We all nodded.
Alex's boat had built in coolers, which ment there would be drinks,
and since it's a pontoon boat, we would be able to anchor it in the middle of the lake.
"What are we going to do on the boat?" Karli questioned.
She was obviously hopeing for one specific answer.
"Well sweet little Karli, we are going to get drunk." Alex began.
"And then play drunk games."
"Like?" Karli asked.
"Spin the bottle, truth or dare, blah blah blah." Alex  listed.
I looked over at Zack and saw him gulp.

B//tch gonna become unprude.



 

I know this chapter's boring.
Sorry guys. :\
Next Chapter will be fun though.
Trust me.(:
 

Untouchable

Ch. 9
Part. 1



I can sleep with the drunk, the rapist, or Zack.

"I choose Zack," I mumbled glumly.
Alex nodded, "Well then, get along you two."
He gave me a light push back torwards my bedroom.
I snapped my head back at him and narrowed my eyes,
giving him a death glare.
"Can I sleep on the outside?" Zack asked catiously,
uncertain if his questioned would push any of my buttons.
I forgot the kid was even next to me.
I bit my lip, not really wanting to sleep on the inside,
but since we had to share a single bed.
It would be a better idea for the larger person to be on the outside.
"Yea sure," I mumbled, crawling into the bottom bunk.
I pulled the blankets chin high and wrapped the edges around my feet.
Zack chuckled at me, and then crawled in.
I rolled my eyes annoyed, and turned to face the wall.
I layed back to back with him.
It seemed that no matter how I was laying,
we seemed to always be touching.
Which, although I don't like the kid,
he gave off body heat,
and since I was dying of frostbite,
I appreciated his warmth.

My eyes were glued on the wall in front of my face.
I tried to go to sleep,
but  almost everyone else was partying.
So the noise kept me up.
"Zack?" I finally mumbled after what seemed like an hour. "Are you awake?"
He turned and faced me. 
"I have been this whole time."
I narrowed my eyes at him in confusion.
"What?" Zack questioned,
noticing my sudden change in facial expressions.
"Why aren't you partying?" I asked.
He sat up in the bed, and I mimiced him.
"I don't drink much," he responded casually, turning his body to face mine.
"Then why are you friends with us?"
He paused for a minute to think.
"Cause you accepted me, I guess."
I cocked my head to the side.
"What do you mean by that?"
Zack glanced down at his fingers before looking back up at me.
"Look Tara, I know, I'm not like you guys.
I don't party because I was never asked to until now.
And I don't flirt with girls because I'm scared of rejection.
You see,
I've never really had any friends."
He locked his eyes with mine.
"Not until now."




I usually don't do parts however
this isn't the end of their conversation.

Please Tell Me What You Think.(:



 

Untouchable

Ch. 8.

I lifted my head off of the couch and peered around.
Everyone was still taking shots
or gulping down the rest of what was in their plastic red cups.
A few kids were begging Alex to smoke weed,
but he refused to let them since they were already drunk.
It can kill you, smoking pot and drinking at the same time.
*Welcome for the life lesson there.(:
"Hi babe," a voice slurred.
I looked up to an unreconizable face.

Damn, you my friend, are attractive.

The mystery boy took the empty seat by my feet.
"You're really cute," he laughed, placing his hand on my thigh.
I gave the boy one of my prize-winning smiles.
"You aren't so bad looking yourself," I giggled,
my words sounding more slurred then i wanted them too.
He realized I was drunk immediantly, and brought his hand up higher,
too high.
"How bout you say we go up to a room?"
At frowned at the boy, unhappy with his sudden change in character.
"How bout not," I strictly respond.
I try to push him off, but he doesn't budge.
"Griffen, doesn't take no for an answer."

Don't talk in third person, you sound gay.

"Well to bad you don't make the rules," I smirk while kneeing him in the balls.
He gives a quick groan and rolls off the couch, holding "down there."
I smile at him and walk away, steadying myself on any near by object possible.
"Dueces. I'm going to bed!" I shout into the kitchen were the crowd was.
I see Karli sudden appear from behind everyone.
"Get a good night sleep, you're going to need it."
I nod and walk off torwards a bedroom, rolling my suitcase behind me.
The room was dark, however, since the light would intensly hurt my eyes,
I didn't bother to turn them on while I changed into sweatpants.
Once I'm done getting into my comfy clothes I turned and faced the beds.
It was a bunk, and I was guessing Karli was assigned the top bunk, like I was assigned the bottom.
I climbed into the bottom bunk, pulling the covers over my body.
"Ugh," I suddenly hear a voice murmer next to me.
I let out a ear piercing scream and fell out of the bed,
the other person toppling on top of me.
I squirm around frantically but the sheet are tangled around my legs and body,
practically trapping me.
"Get off of me NOW!" I demand, my heart rate still going twice as fast as normal.
"Dude calm down!" The voice replies.
"Zack?" I question.
"Yea, it's just me," he repsonds.
I felt my heart rate slowly returning to normal and my breathing calm.
"Well Zack, your weight is starting to cause me to lose feeling so?"
"Oh, sorry," he grumbled while getting up, and climbing back into the bed.
"Woah," I sarcastically laugh while grabbing his arm.
"What do you think you doing there Mr."
His face filled with confusion.
"To sleep," he explained, pointing at the bed.
I shook my head.
"No, that my friend is where I'm sleeping, Alex assigned it to me."
He took a step closer to me, after crawling out of the bed,
and I was able to make out his figuer.
The only clothing item on the kid was boxers,
however, thank god, they weren't the short kind.
His abs were barely noticable in the light,
but trust me, they were there.
"Alex assigned me this bed," he responded shyly.
"What?" I asked irratated. "No, this is wrong."
I took a strong hold of Zack's wrist and marched out of the room,
dragging the kid behind me.
"Alex!" I screeched, pushing through the bodies.
"What?" He asked, suddenly apprearing in front of me.
"You assigned us the same bed?" I questioned, pulling Zack up to my side.
"Well yea, since you guys like-"
"We didn't!" I screamed, interupting him.
Half of the room went silent, and I felt eyes turn to me.
"Tara," Alex lowered his voice and took a step closer to me.
I could smell the alcohal from his breath.
"Everyone said you two had a thing,
so I thought assigning you guys the same bed would be a favor."
He took in a deep breath, and paused for a minute.
"The only other place you can sleep is with me or him."
Alex pointed to the kid who flirted with me earlier.
"Your choice babe."





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