I Will Always Love You
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Introduction:
"Jade! run, i could
see the cops coming!" Joey screamed. I panickley dropped
all the spray cans and left running, as im running im searching
for joey and the other gang but they are no where to be found. I
should've known they would leave me by the fact that i just
met them hours ago, but why would joey leave me? i mean yea i
barley met him but he kept telling me how much he liked me
while we were making out . I guess i should stop trusting people
i barley meet but i guess i try finding love in anything i could
find since my dad is dead and my mother is an alcoholic who
barley knows i exist. This all started once my dad died, i guess
he was the glue to our family but once he was gone everything
started to change. My mom found drinking alcohol was the only way
to cure her pain. I stopped caring about everything and started
to lose all my friends, and let my grades drop . If my dad was
here right now this would all be different, i would be a normal
sixteen year old instead of this lowlife getting into trouble
every possible minute ....
I stop running thinking i outrunned the cop but as soon as i turn
to the next corner, I find my self lying on the ground with
handcuffs placed on my wrist.
"Let me go!" i panickley screamed twisting and turning
hoping he would let go for i could start running but he just hold
on tighter. he pulls me up and takes me to the police car.
"watch your head" he says. Yea after you slamed it to
the floor i say to myself. We stop right in front of the police
station where they made me fill out some papers with my
information.They told me i get one phone call and im going to
spend the night here until they figure out what they are going to
do with me tommorow in court. I have no one to except for my mom
but i really don't want to deal with her . I call anyways and
the phone is ringing until i hear someone half drunk answer the
phone, "Hello". I'm disgusted by the fact she's
drunk , "Mom i'm at the police station they arrested me
for tagging and possesion of drugs." the drugs weren't
mine in fact i never drink or do drugs, they were joey's who
told me to hold them for him. "What! are you serious,
you're so stupid how could you do this ,what would your dad
say if he was here?" she yelled histerically. "Well
he's not okay !, and trust me if he was here i would be
calling him instead of you but unfortunatley your the only family
i have, you know what forget about it bye". i hang up and
start crying.They take me to the room im going to stay for the
night, i stayed awake the whole night thinking about the
miserable life i have, i wished i had a blade that night for i
could cut but unfortunatley i didnt.The police take me to the
court room i sit waiting what is going to happen to me. The judge
enters and we all rise, once he sits down we all sit down too.
After a long discussion the judge finally says
" Jade Anne Marquez, i hereby sentence you
to...
What do you think should i
continue???