Hello Beautiful (:
My name is Danielle.
I'm starting my first story & I'm hoping it goes well. I'd appreciate the advice because I want to get better with my writing. I won't be offended, but please don't come on here telling me I suck or something lol. I just want to improve as a writer.
Just Another Love Story
Introduction
Every
person will always come across a certain point in their life.
It's almost unexplainable, but everyone will go through the
same feeling. It might be when your thirteen years old, or
maybe it's when your thirty years old. Your heart starts
beating really fast, and your whole body starts to tingle. Your
stomach starts to feel like its floating. Your pupils start to
dilate, and your eyes start to glow. Your smile then gets
really big. Your heart beats even faster. The moment you
realize you fell in love will change your life
forever.
Day 30: A
Letter To A Friend
Dear Dayna,
I love you so much. You really are my best friend for
life. I can tell you absolutely anything and everything. You
won't judge me but you'll give me your honest
opinion. You care about me and what I do. You always check up
on me and make sure I'm alright. I've never had a
friend like you before. I still find it hilarious how we used
to hate eachother. I miss you so much... Please come back and
visit me sometime? I'll try my best to go visit you. My
life isn't the same without you. Especially during times
like this when I just need someone who understands me to be
here and talk to me while I'm crying... its starting to
get cold. Im gonna miss our days sitting in the back porch in
our pajamas drinking hot chocolate. Those were the
days. I haven't walked to Walgreenz in forever. I
remember the first time we did. Everytime we're together
we have an amazing time. You always keep me laughing and
smiling. Your always smiling yourself, too. There's only
been a couple times when I've seen you break... but hey,
everyone does. You always get back up again and show them
your beautiful smile. You make me feel better. There's
never going to come a time when I'm not your best friend.
Im always going to be here if you need to talk. I know what
you go through and I know its not easy. I can't relate
that much because I haven't gone through any of it. Im
not going to say I understand because I don't. But
you'll always have my shouler to cry on and my ears to
listen up. I won't judge you and I'll make sure your
okay. I love you so much. I can't wait to see you
again...
Love Always,
-Danielle
Day 29: A
Letter To Someone In My Family
Dear Dad,
You and I have been through everything together.
I remember we used to be best friends. I used to tell you
everything and you were there for me. We were exactly alike
and you were my number one guy. I always said it would stay
like that. Your drinking got out of control and you became a
jerk. Our relationship was over. We stopped talking and when
we did talk we just argued. I wanted you out of my life.
Honestly, that was stupid of me to say. Then, I felt it
was right, but now I realize your my only dad. I miss our
relationship but you've changed. You take everything so
seriously and your so stubborn! You won't change your
mind no matter what circumstance. I wish our relationship
would go back to the way it used to be, but I don't know
if that's possible anymore. just remember that I
don't hate you. I never have and never will. Just because
I'm distant doesn't mean I hate you. Im growing up
and there's more going on in my life than just a scrape
on my knee. Don't take it personally... Sometimes I
don't like talking to anyone. I'll always love you
and you'll always be my best friend. I'm sorry I
don't give you the respect you earn, but I need a break
from my fake smile and it comes off when I get home. I'm
sorry that I made you think I hate you... I really am. I love
you, Dad.
Your Daughter,
-Danielle