An
Unknown World
CHAPTER 1
an original
story.
Cold. That’s the
first thing that came to me. As I squinted through a
blinding light, I could barely make out a single light bulb
swinging from the ceiling. My hands were tied behind my
back by rope that dug into my skin. “Where am
I?” I thought. It was dark, damp, and deadly
quiet. I struggled with the knots behind my back without
any success. I tried calling for help only to realize
that my mouth was duct taped shut. “Struggling will
do nothing,” a voice said behind me. I jerked my
head to the right making out a dark figure in the back corner
by an ascending staircase. The figure stepped into the
light clearly showing the pistol hoisted by their side.
It was a man, short brown hair, green eyes, and maybe...six
feet tall?” I thought. If I ever got out of here,
the police would need a description. The man approached,
and in one swift motion, ripped the tape of my mouth. I
let out staggered breaths and felt light headed
immediately. “Where am I!?” I said, my voice
coming out in a croak. “That isn’t important,
what is, is that you will do whatever I tell you,” the
man said expressionless. “F*ck. you,” I said
in a whisper. The man smiled, almost amused with my
resistance. He bent over smiling flawless teeth back out
me. His face was two inches from mine, and he smelled of
cigarettes and alcohol. “You will do whatever I
say, if you want to stay alive,” and with that he gently
took his hand and brushed a hair away from my face. I was
disgusted. “Who did this man think he was?”
With all the energy I had, I spit straight into his face.
His smiled vanished, and was replaced by the same emotionless
face. He slowly stood up, and went into the corner once
again, returning with a bottle of wine. He popped open
the cork, and shoved the bottle into my mouth pouring the
sickly liquid into my mouth. It burned as it went down my
already parched throat. He smiled with satisfaction, and
took a swish of his own. I gasped for my breath,
squeezing my eyes, as a wave as sweat washed over me. I
was exhausted; I wanted to go home to my bed, where I knew it
was safe. In one fluid motion, I jerked one of my legs up
sending a roundhouse kick straight to the man’s
nose. As it made contact, I heard a sickening crunch, and
blood started gushing out. He tried to say something, but
I couldn’t make it out as he was gagging over his own
blood. He raised his fist, and whipped it against my
cheek sending me once again into the
darkness.
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