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Summer Loving
Chapter 9

I woke up the next day with mixed feelings. I swear Andy was about to kiss me last night and I might have actually been lookin forward to it. Except I needed to get these feelings out of me because I am and always will be madly in love with Justin and now that I actually might have a chance with Justin, I don't need someone like Andy to mess things up.

I go down stairs to get a bowl of cereal to see Brittany in her nightgown. Ew, she spent the night. I quickly slip into the hallway to ease drop on her conversation on the phone. "I mean, I told my mom I didn't need to go to college." I quickly assumed she was talking to a friend or something. "He's loaded, has a huge house right on the beach, and he's totally in love with me." I heard her crackle from the other room talking about my father. I knew it. "After he proposes, which he definitely will, I'll be set for life." she added. I honestly was in shock, like I figured this was going on the whole time but hearing it from her was completely different. Footsteps started to bang down the stairs. "Got to go, talk to you later, kisses." Brittany said in the other room. She had the vocabulary of a thirteen year old girl.

"Morning, sweeite." my dad said to her, kissing her on the cheek. It was making me sick. "What are you up to today?" he asked her. "Going shopping with the girls." she said as I walked into the kitchen. "Good morning, Val." my dad said to me. "Morning." I answered back. "Val, good morning!" Brittany chimed. I ignored her and went for a box of cereal. "Well, I'm going to get ready for the day." Brittany said as she kissed my father on the cheek and waltzed upstairs.

My father and I sat there quietly for a while. He was drinking his coffee and flipping through the paper while I was inhaling some cereal. "Dad, I have to tell you something." I said nervouslly. He folded the paper up and looked at me. "Brittany, was on the phone this morning and I overheard her and she basiclly said that she's using you for your money." I managed to tell him. I mean, he should know the truth. He just stared at me for  a while. "Valire, how many times are you going to lie about these things? I know it's hard but you have to accept that I love Brittany." I stood up quickly in digust. "But, I heard it. They were her words not mine!" I stampered. "Val, honestly, you need to stop doing this. Stop making up lies, it's not going to change the way I feel about her." he said. I was on the verge of tears. "Dad, I can't believe you're starting to trust me over her? I'm your daugher!" I shouted. "And she's my girlfriend." he said back, "And you're going to have to respect her and respect our relationship." It was almost pointless to keep going, "Ahhh!" I screamed in fustration while stomping up to my room.

As soon as I got up there and slammed my door I got a text from Justin. It read, 'Sorry, can't hang out today, have to cancel. But we need to hang out tomorrow! :)' Great, I'm possibly in the worse mood ever and I thought he would be able to change it but I guess not. I then sent a text to Jasmine, 'Want to hang out today?' She quickly texted back, 'Sorry, I'm busy. Another day though.' Really? I couldn't just stay home alone today. I was a mess and needed someone to make me feel better. I scrolled through my contacts and stopped at Andy's name. No, no, no, I kept telling myself. But deep down I wanted to text him. It's not that I liked liked him, right? He was just a friend that listend to me one time. I finally decided to text him if he was free today. He responded seconds later with, 'Yeah, wanna hang out?'


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Summer Loving
Chapter 8

It has been exactly two weeks since Justin and I had first talked. Since then we've actually become really good friends. We've hung out a couple of times since the barbeque and we constantly text. It's almost a dream come. Now if only he'd dump Ella for me, but I wasn't being too greedy.

"What are you doing tonight, pumpkin?" my dad asked me on my way out. "Oh I was just going to return this shirt I bought at the mall yesterday with my new friend Justin." He got up from his comfy chair over looking the lovely ocean view our house had. "What are you up to?" I asked. "Oh well me and Brittany are just going to go out to a bar for dinner and a couple of drinks." I rolled my eyes, "Oh you mean she can drink legally? Who knew she was over 21." My dad glared at me, "Now be nice, Val. I know you're still upset about your mom leaving but it's been seven years. Brittany and I have been dating for a year and things are getting seirous, you need to learn to respect her." I was so upset I had no clue what to say, "Fine." was all I could muster out as I slammed the front door behind me as I ran to the beach.

I was too upset to return the shirt now. I just wanted to sit at my favorite spot at the beach, the same spot my mother and I used to sit all the time, and just relax. I hated Brittany so much, if only my dad could see she was only using him for his money. I knew it for a fact, why else would she be dating an old man? My thoughts were inturupted as I saw a couple making out in the distance. Oh lovely, just taunt me. I'm well aware Justin and I aren't dating because he has a girlfriend no need to remind me. The couple stopped kissing and moving closer. It was Andy. Well clearly it wasn't a couple, just a one night stand.

They both went their seprate ways and Andy walked towards me. "Hey Val!" he chimed. Why did he keep talking to me? Oh wait, because he was a complete flirt. "Was that your girlfriend?" I asked. He sat next to me in the cool sand. "Nah, just a girl." I rolled my eyes, "You don't have girlfriends, do you?" I sassed bitterly. "Well no, but if I found the right girl I would." I nodded an unconvincing nod. "What? You don't believe me?" he asked while pushing his dark brown hair away from his face. "Well, I guess so."

"What are you doing out here all alone anyways?" he asked. "I stormd out on my dad." I admited truthfully. It was odd how I was able to open up to Andy, kind of the same way I opened up to Justin. Except when I opened up to Justin it was cute because I liked him, this was just out of the ordinary. "Why?" he asked concered while wiping the strawberry lip gloss of the girl he was kissing off of his lips. "Him and his girlfriend are getting serious apparently and I hate her." I spent the next ten minutes complaining about Brittany and he listened to well. It was amazing. I never thought a flirt and player like Andy would care and listen so much. It was weird but I kind of felt some connection.

"My mom started dating this jerk not to long ago and my dad married a total witch a year ago. I know, it's hard but sometimes you just have to mind your own business." Andy suggested. It was nice having somebody to talk to that knew what you were going through. "Does your mom like this Brittany?" he asked. I shook my head, "No, she, um, left us when I was ten." I said quietly. "Oh, I'm sorry. I just assumed your parents were divorced." he said, sounding very sorry for bringing it up. "No, it's fine. Trust me, it's been seven years. I'm over it." He moved a bit closer to me, I didn't know how to react. Was he trying to make a move on me? I mean, if he did I was just another girl, probably the 5th he's seen today. Besides, I was in love with Justin. "Her loss." he said softly. It seemed as if he was moving in for a kiss, yet again I knew nothing about guys and he may have just been moving. I was probably just imagining it anyways. But before if I could find out if it was going to be a kiss or not my phone started to blar out "One Thing" by One Direction, my ringtone. Embarassing, rgiht? "Oh, I've got to take this." I told him as I looked down at the number, it was Justin. "It's fine. Nice talking to you, see you later Val.


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Summer Loving
Chapter 7

Justin and I hung out the whole barbeque, it was amazing. If I wasn't already in love with him, I'd be falling in love with him even right now.  I was relieved Ella didn't show. "Val, I'm going to get going, I'll see you tomorrow. Nice meeting you today, Justin." Jasmine said while taking off. I almost completely forgot about her with Justin and all. "Bye." Justin and I still said in unison. "Want to get an icecream?" Justin asked. I nodded, "That'd be nice." We lefte h the barbeque. I glanced back to still find Andy chatting it up with a bunch of girls. He was definitely not my type.

"How long have you and Ella been daing?" I asked curiously. "I think six months or something." he admitted. Him not knowing the exact amount of time they were dating was a good sign, for me. Right? "She seems nice. She's lucky to have you." I admitted. Oh wow, was that flirting again. "Well your boyfriend is lucky to have you." he said. I almost laughed at the fact that he tought I had a boyfriend. I was such a loser. "I don't have a boyfriend." His eyes widened as if he was surprised or something. "Really? Well any guy would be lucky to have you." Gah, why did he have to flirt with me? It just made me want him even more than I already did, if that was physically possible. Like if I can't have him, he should stop leading me on and having me fall for him more. "Thanks." I said quietly, blushing. "So no boyfriend? Any siblings? Mom? Dad?" he asked. "Well my mom, left me and my dad when I was ten. But I just live with my dad, no siblings." I couldn't believe I told him that much. It took me months to even tell Jasmine about my mom. "I'm so sorry." Justin said, sounding really sympathatic. That was the thing I loved about Justin, he was just so sweet. "It's fine. I'm over it now. Except now my dad has a girlfriend that I swear is using him for money and ugh, she just makes me mad. Sorry, I feel bad for venting like this." We finally got to the icecream place and stood in the long line. "No, it's fine. I like hearing about people's lives."

I took a good look around. It was crazy to think that I was in line with an icecream with Justin. I would have never imagined this would come true ever in my whole life. "How about your family?" I asked him. "Well, my I'm actually quite lucky in that department. My parents are both happily married. And I have an older sister who's in college. I moved here when I was ten, mostly cause of surfing." He told me, while we moved up in line a bit. "I love how dedicated and passionate you are about surfing." I told him. He smiled at me, his blue/green eyes making me weak in the knees, "See, Ella thinks I'm too obsessed owtih it." Woah, Justin just complained about Ella to me, this is big. Okay, maybe I was just looking into this too much but maybe I wasn't. "Well I think your love for the sport is very impressive!" I told him truthfully. I mean, that probablly was one of the main reasons I feel for Justin to begin with.

"How about music? What do you like?" I asked him, wanting to know more about him. He was fascinating. "Oh, anything. But lately, Ed Sheeran's been an obsession of mine." I almost chocked on my own spit out of shock, "Shut up! Me too! I hope he really catches on here in the US." He smiled, "Ella hates him, she's not into the whole singer/songwriter deal." There he goes again, complaining about Ella. Is this some kind of hint that he's having relationship issues.

Finally we were in the front of the line and ordered. "I'd like a small mint chocolate chip, please." he said using his perfect manners. No wonder why he was dating a college girl, he was so mature. "I'll take a small mint chocolate chip too." I said. He smiled at me again, "Same favorite icecream too?" I nodded, "I guess so."


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Summer Loving
Chapter 6

"So let me get this straight? Justin invited you to the beach without telling you he had a girlfriend and when his girlfriend showed up you acted like it was nothing and now he keeps inviting you to things?" Jasmine asked on our way to the barbeque. "Yeah, pretty much. I know, I'm confused too. But he's really nice and sweet and perfect and if we're just friends for now, I'll take it." I admitted. I mean, I already knew about Ella so it wasn't like I was expecting Justin to ask me out. But I was in love with him and if friends was all I was going to get now then I'd take it. (I mean like if Ella and Justin just happen to break up I might be an option, right?)

We arrived at the barbeque. All of Justin's surfing friends were there with their girlfriends or friends. Andy was there too. "Hey Val, glad you could make it." Justin said to me. I searched the area for Ella but couldn't see her. Score. "Hey. This is my friend Jasmine." He stuck his hand out and shook hers saying, "Nice to meet you." He was such a gentleman. "Well I just recognized my friend from camp, I'm going to go say hi to her." Jasmine said while trotting off towards a group of people.

"So are you sure you're fine with me having a girlfriend?" Justin asked me. I giggled, "Yes!" I exclaimed. "Okay, I'm just making sure. I feel horrible." he admitted. "You never said I was going on a date with you, it's fine. I promise. Besides, I kind of figured a guy like you would definitely have a girlfriend." I told him. Hey I was finally getting good at this flriting thing, I think. He blushed a little bit, "Okay, I just don't want to hurt you. You're really nice and sweet. You seem like you'd be a good friend." The word 'friend' almost sounded worse than nails on a chalkboard. For now I was fine with friends, I was actually over joyed with being called his friend, but at the same time I wanted to be more.

"Justin!" a friend called for him. "I'll be right back, grab some food." he told me followed by a flawless smile. "Alright." I said, smiling back. I went over and grabbed a coke and a hamburger. I peered over to the crowd and saw Andy chatting it up with a bunch of girls; he seemed like quite the player. I didn't want anything to do with him, I just needed to focus on Justin. Who knows, maybe he'll leave Ella for me. Well that's wishful thinking but still. 

"Hey Val, remember me from today?" I spun around with my mouth full of food finding Andy talking to me. "Yeah, Andy right?" He nodded. "How'd you do today?" I asked him. "I got 5th." I nodded, "Impressive, well maybe. 5th out of 5th or..?" I asked. He laughed. Oh gosh, was I flirting? And I was I finding attractive like all those girls he was talking to? No, definitely not. He wasn't my type, he was cocky and a player and not Justin who I was madly in love with and possibly the complete opposite of Andy. "Funny. No, out of 30." My eyes widened, "Wow, that's really good. Congrats." He shook his head, "Nah, not as good as Justin. He got 4th in his event and there were 80 people in his event." My eyes wandered over to Jusitn and his friend he was talking to me. "You like him, don't you?" Andy asked. I quickly shook my head, "NO! I mean, he has a girlfriend and he's cute and all but no I don't." He chucked, "Sure you don't, Val." I could feel my cheeks starting to turn bright red, "Don't worry, you're secret's safe with me."


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Summer Loving
Chapter 4


"Welcome to the 22nd Annual Malibou Beach High School Leveled John Adams Surfing Competition." the loud speaker boomed. "Are you sure I look okay?" I asked Jasmine. She giggled, "I'd say you. You only spent four hours getting ready." My hair was left naturally wavy and I was wearing some jean shorts and a cute pink tank top my dad's girlfriend, Brittany decided to buy me. (I swear the only thing that women is good for is buying me cute clothes). "Oh god, there he is. Why is he so perfect?" He started walking closer to me and Jasmine whispered "Good Luck" before running off so we could be alone.

"You made it. I was scared you weren't going to show up." he said followed by a perfect smile. "Well, I'm here." I said like an idiot. I honestly was the worst flirt in the world. "I'm glad. I'm going out in an hour, til then we could hang out!" he suggested. I took a deep breath to calm myself, "Sounds good."

We walked toward the more seculded area of the beach. "So tell me about yourself." he said, looking extremely interested. I still thought this was all some sick cruel joke or something, like it wasn't real. "Well, I'm seventeen, going to be a senior next year, I go to Linley Private Academy, I like music, I'm a total pop culture geek, I used to be a competitive swimmer but stopped a few years ago, and I love chocolate." He laughed. I honestly didn't understand what was so funny. Then I realzied guys did that when they liked a girl. "Interesting." he said as we continued to walk further down the beach. "What?" I asked confused. "You don't really strike me as the swimmer type." he admitted. "Well I was, I can prove it if you want. I have like medals and stuff at home." Oh god, that was a totally uncool thing to say. But he seemed to be fine with it cause he laughed, "You're funny. And nah, it's okay I beleive you." He thought I was funny? Okay clearly he liked me cause I wasn't funny. "Tell me about you, now." I asked. "I'm seventeen too." Knew that. "I'm home schooled." Knew that as well. "I don't have very many friends, just surfing friends." I knew that as well. "Surfing is my life and passion." And I knew that; I'm such a stalker. "And that's about it." I smiled, "I'm excited to watch you surf." I admitted, again probably a stupid thing to say. "Well I hope I don't mess up and make a fool out of myself in front of you."

We started to walk back towards the competition, since he was going to go out soon. We talked more about ourselves on the way back. He was cute, nice, funny, athletic, and just perfect in every possible way. "Justin, Justin!" a blonde girl from a far called. Justin's face suddenly had this worried expression on it. She came over and gave him a kiss on the cheek. "My job interview got canceled so I decided to pop by, hope it's not a problem. Who's this?" she asked flipping her blonde hair around. "This is Val." he said nervouslly. "Nice to meet you, I'm Ella, Justin's boyfriend." Before any explaining could be done Justin's event was called, "Event number 24, event number 24!"


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Summer Loving
Chapter 2


"Valire, can you close up? I'm going to leave five minutes early." my co-worker asked. It was almost ten at night, nobody was at the seaside diner except for us. "Yeah, sure." I told her.

I was left completely alone, at the replusive diner I worked at. Thank goodness it was only part time and I only had like two shifts a week. I went over to the window and peered at the ocean, watching a couple walk hand-in-hand near the shore. It made me sick, like do you have to flaunt around to the whole world that you're in love? I was inturupted by my venting when the bell signfying the door was opening rang. I quickly got up. What kind of idiot comes to eat at a place that's closing in five minutes?

I looked up and it was Justin. It took me a good amount of time to finally have the courage to say, "Can I help you?" He sat down at a stool near the counter and picked up a nearby menu. I couldn't help but stare at his perfect eyes and hair and just everything about him was perfect. "Um, yeah. Sorry I know you close soon but I've been surfing all afternoon and I'm starving. Can I just get a chocolate chip muffin?" he asked. Again it took me a while to answer him, I don't even think I fully believed this was happening. " Yeah, sure." I went behind the counter and gave him the last chocolate chip muffin. "Thanks." he said while I handed it to him. I could have fainted right there and then when our my finger nearly touched his hand while handing him the muffin.

"You look familar, do you hang out at the beach much?" he asked. Oh good god, he was trying to make conversation with me. "Yeah, I live like right off the beach so I'm always at the beach." I answered, proud of myslef that I was able to talk to him like a normal person and not totally freak out. "I thought I recognized you." I would have mentioned how we went to the same school and stuff but we don't. Justin was home-schooled. He moved here when he was ten and ever since then I've been in love with him. He's an intense surfer too. And yes I know all this about him because I am a complete stalker and he probably doesn't even know my name.

"So you surf?" I asked, trying to keep the conversation going. I might never have a chance like this ever again. "Yeah, I love it. It's the reason we moved here when I was little. Like I have this intesne trainer and I'm in all these competitions and it's great. Have you ever surfed before?" He asked while taking another bite of the muffin. "Yeah, except I'm not really good. Actually, I suck. But I love the sport. I love watching it and I honestly wish I could surf." He took the last bite of his muffin and I knew this whole thing was going to be over in a matter of seconds.

"Here, I'll ring you up." I told him. gave him the bill and he placed the money on the counter with a very generous tip. "Sorry I didn't catch your name." he said. "I'm Valire." He smiled. Well maybe he smiled, or I was just imagining it. "I'm Justin. Listen, Valire, this Saturday I have a serfing competition here and I'd love if you stopped by." Yeah, I was definitely dreaming. "Sure, I'd love you.. I mean I'd love to." I said, completely embarassed, feeling my face turn red. He didn't seam to notice. "See you there, then."


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Summer Loving
Chapter 1

Most teenage girls lives would be considered a romance if it was made into a movie or a tv show. Mine however would be a comedy; no not because I was funny 'cause I can barely come up with anything better than a 'knock knock joke.' No, I was funny because I was that type of girl who would trip on nothing at all and fall on her face in front of the guy she so despretely loved.

It was merely hours after my last exam, summer had finally started and I was sitting in my favorite spot at the beach. The same spot I've been sitting in since I was five. Me and my mother used to come here everyday; until she left. "Stalker much?" my friend Jasmine asked while popping a squat next to me. "What do you mean?" I asked her. "I mean that Justin comes here to serf every single day and you know it, that's why you're here." I rolled my eyes at her. "Actually, this was my spot first. Clearly he's stalking me." I joked. What a joke, Justin was way out of my league. Actually, any guy that's face wasn't full of acne and had glasses from the 90's wasn't even in my league. Guys just don't like me. "Is he still dating that college chick?" Jasmine asked while popping gummy words into her mouth. "Yeah." I said stealing a blue gummy worm. "Well you know, good luck trying to snag that when he's got a college girl. Come on, why don't you just give up? You've liked the same guy since you were ten. I think it's time to move on." I got up and dusted my butt off, making sure there was no sand on it. "Maybe. Look, I've got work. I'm working late tonight but we'll hang out tomorrow. First official day of summer." She threw another gummy worm in her mouth and gave me a snug look, "Okay, bye. See you then."

I started walking towards the local dinner, right off of the beach when a football hit me in the head. This was was actually a normal accurence for me. A bunch of guys started laughing. I picked up the ball and turned around. Oh yes, of course, Justin was part of that group of guys. Only time that kid notices me is if I make a complete fool out of myself. I was about to throw the ball back but then realzied if I did I'd make a bigger fool out of myself since I couldn't throw anything more than two feet. Justin started jogging towards me to get the ball. Oh god, I was going weak in the knees, I'd probably faint as soon as he got here out of excitement. I tossed the ball to him, "Thanks." he said to me followed by a flawless smile. Of course I was an idiot and couldn't muster out the words, "Your welcome." So he just walked away. I looked over to Jasmine, still sitting down eating gummy words and she mouted "Oh my god!" to me. I just smiled at her and decided to go off to work, still with a big smile plastered on my face.


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