I want to go
back;
go back to the time
when everything was right
where we were still friends
and the things i said today
would be still unspoken
we would smile for hours
just looking into eachothers eyes
holding hands kept us warm
hours flew by but the memories still last
I wish I could turn back time;
I turned you down,
without even realizing what I have done.
If I did it all right,
I wouldn't be crying here
I wouldn't be cold
I wouldn't be alone
I would be with you
If only I could turn back
time...
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I worked really hard on it and i would appreciate your
adjustments. =)