Quotes added on Tuesday, July 5 2011

Mistakes...
CHAPTER ONE

This is what we've been waiting for. As we file into the car i re-check

my purse for the concert tickets, exactly four... front row. Tonight was

going to be amazing and we all knew it. Once we all sat down Kate

looked at me and squeeled. "Oh my gosh Tina! I can not believe your

dad got us tickets! I love your...forever!" I giggled at Kate's excitement.

of course we were all excited, this was The Forever Four. My heart melted

just thinking of the lead singer Jordan. Eep! For the rest of the ride we all

rocked out to our Ready Set album eager to get to the concert... not

knowing the fate awaiting us there.

When we finally arrived at the concert it was dark... and the exterior of

the hall smelt like cigarettes. But, we ignored that fact and strode inside,

feeling important with our front row tickets in hand. Our seats were to

die for. They were right in the front, right in the center. Perfect to try and

get the band mates attentions. Sadly though, when we sat down, in all

her excitement Meghan spilt her Coke all over me. Disgusted at the smell

i frantically wiped napkins on the spot it hit. But i wasn't even close to

washing it off before the lights shut off and the bands started to play.

I was totally pumped at the thought of Jordan seeing me... but when he

started playing it wasn't me he had his eyes on, it was Kate. With her

glossy red hair and big green eyes she was gorgeous. But her looks made

her look older than she really was... and i'm almost positive Jordan wasn't

aware of the fact that she was fifteen.

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As she sits there;
With tears in her eyes, tissues by her side, and her best friend on the phone,
she's finally realizing what he's done to her. She finally realized that;
she's broken.