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PAGE #13 (Chapter; 6) It's been 3 weeks since Jordan told me

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  It's been 3 weeks since Jordan told me had cancer. Luke & I still talked, & texted everyday. I still hung out with Jordan everyday. Sometimes Luke would even hang out with us. One Saturday night, while me & Jordan was sitting on my front porch, Luke walked up. He started talking to Jordan like they were long lost best friends. I thought it was kind of nice. I told them to hang on while i went and got us some tea to drink. As i walked inside, i heard my name. And of course.  When you hear someones talking about you. You have to listen. I could barley hear anything through the door. So i went ahead and got the tea. When i came back out. They were laughing and smilein. I kind of felt left out. But i wasnt worrying about it. They were talking about football (something i hated more then anything). I sat there acting like i knew what they were talking about. "I never asked you this, whos your favorite football player Maddie?" Jordan asked. I had to think of someone fast. I never told them i didnt like football. "Lebran James" i said. They started laughing. I didn't know what was so funny. So i started laughing as well. "You dont know much about football do you?" Jordan smiled. They started laughing again. "Lebran James is a Basketball player" Luke laughed. I officially felt dumb. "Oh well i still love you" Luke & Jordan both said at the exact same time. After that there was an akward silence. Finally Luke said "Well, i better get going". I stood up to give him a hug. It felt like he was holding on to me, like it was the last time he was ever going to see me again. After he let go. He walked off. "See ya man" Jordan called after him. "You too dude" Luke called back. I watched him as he got into his car. Turning his car on. Looking back at me. He looked me in the eyes. And waved. I watched him drive down the road until he was out of sight. I turned back to the porch. Jordan was staring at me. "So where were we" i teased. "Well, i dont know about WE but YOU were about to go kiss Luke" he teased back. 




  The past month. Luke & Jordan became really close. Like brothers, they were always hanging out. And they were always asking me if i wanted to go with them. But i hardley ever did. I wanted to pay more attention to my school work. But lately Jordan started going to chemo. He started loosing his hair more & more. He finally just cut his hair (ALMOST) completly off. He still had a little bit at the top. I asked them if they wanted to go to the movies one friday night. Luke was up for it. But Jordan said he had to do something. It was weird because he never turned down a movie. Me & Luke went ahead and went to the movie though. We had a great time. I tried texting Jordan but he never answered. I tried calling him when i got home. Still no answer. I didnt really think nothing of it. So i went upstairs to my room. I fell asleep thinking how amazing having the two most important boys of my life. Actually likeing each other. I NEVER once heard them fight. Luke was so amazing. But Jordan? He was so incredibly strong. Never bringing up his cancer. But he knew it made me sad. I fell asleep. When i woke up, i had four text messages. The first one was from Luke. "Goodnight Babe" he had sent. The other three were from Jordan. "Call me when you wake up!" "Wake up!" && "Are u ever going to wake up?". As soon as i got those messages. I called Jordan. He told me he was in the hospital. His cancer was so bad he couldnt even leave. He said that he'd like if it i could come by and see him as soon as possible. I couldnt even believe what he told me. I cried my eyes out as i was getting dressed. I called Jordan back & asked him if it was okay if i brought Luke with me. Jordan told me that Luke was already there with him. I took my moms car & drove to the hospital. It seemed like everyone was in a happy mood. I had no idea why. My face was probably more red then elmo. But i didnt care. I walked into Jordans room. Seeing him in that bed. Iv's in his arm. Cords running from machines. I started crying. Luke walked over by me and held me. Jordan hated it when i cried. He couldnt help but start crying hisself. I walked over to the bed. And threw my arms around Jordan. "This cant be happeneing" i whispered. He didnt say a word. No one this young should have to go through this. "I love you Maddie" he said. I looked up at him, with my red puffy face. "I love you too Jordan" i said. Luke sat over  there in the corner. Quietly, not saying a word. Jordan looked down at me. "I had Luke come here because i knew you'd need someone" Jordan said. Luke brought a chair over & put it next to Jordans bed. I sat down. "Jordan you know, you've always been one of my best friends, even when you left. When i forgot about you. Somehow id always see that picture of me & you together. And it'd be a flashback." i said. Jordan smiled at me. "Just please dont be sad. It's just my time to go" Jordan said. I just couldnt hold it in. I cried even harder. He turned to a dresser & opened the first drawer. "Remember when we were in the tree house & i put something behind my back.?" He said. I nooded my head. "Well this is what it was"  he said. He pulled out a painting it was a boy & a girl laying on a porch. I couldnt talk, i couldnt even breathe. It was Luke & i. "I saw you guys that one night. Laying there so perfect by eachother. & that's when i knew you two were ment to me." he said. I looked over at Luke, & i saw a single tear excape from his eyes. Jordan had a tear too. But he smiled at me. "So please, spend the rest of your life with him" (He pointed towards Luke). He's an amazing guy. And he also makes you happy. I saw the way you looked holding onto him that night. I know he's sorry for everything he's done. He loves you Maddie, He honestly does" he finished. Luke got up & walked out of the room. "This drawing is for you" he said as he handed it to me".  "I love you Jordan" i said. "I love you too Maddie" he smiled.  That night was the last night i talked to that amazing boy! He died in his sleep with me holding his hand. I know he's in a better place. And i know he knows i love him. I'll never forget him.

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kimxlolzx39 1 decade ago
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omg me too..ahh i just almost cried. GOOD STORY.
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