Story Quote #1601823
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We met in kindergarten. We were best friends. She always told


We met in kindergarten. We were best friends.

She always told me she loved my eyes. I didn't quite know why.

I was in love with her, so of course my face lit up immensely whenever she said it.

She was beautiful, kind, and extremely funny.

We'd be talking about nothing, and she'd turn to me and whisper,

"I like your eyes."

One day, I was playing basketball,

waiting for her to drive over to my house to have a game with me.

Suddenly, I got a phone call.

It was her mom. She was in a panic.

I couldn't quite understand what she was saying. It sounded like,

"Aaron, come quick! Kelsey, accident, Main Street! Blood. Come now!"

I had no clue what happened,

so I ran to Main Street with my basketball shorts and a tee shirt on.

I saw Kelsey's mom helplessly crying, waiting for the ambulance to arrive.

I saw a totaled car, blood everywhere.


Then I saw her, Kelsey.


My heart stopped as I frantically ran over to her.

"Kelsey? Kelsey!" She was unconscious. I started crying.

I know it isn't very manly, but I couldn't help it.

Before I could say anymore, the medics took her away,

the main source of blood coming from her head.

I went to the hospital that night,


I went every night.


in fact, the only time I left was to go out to eat, but that's it.

The doctors tried getting me to leave, but I refused.

It was all my fault.

If it wasn't for me, wanting to play basketball with her,

she wouldn't be going through this.

It was already four days, and she hasn't woken up.

On the fifth day, I saw her eyes gently open.

"Kelsey?" I called.

She wasn't quite awake yet.

Suddenly, doctors came rushing in, telling me I had to wait outside.

I did, for a few hours.

One of the doctors finally came out saying,

"I understand that you're Kelsey's friend, Aaron?"

"Yes," I whispered.

He bit his lip.

"She woke up, she's fine,

but I'm afraid she has long term memory loss."


"Are you serious?" I almost shouted.

"I'm afraid so."

I didn't meet his gaze. I couldn't.

I wasn't going to say anything, so he spoke again.

"You can go see her if you want,

but she doesn't remember anything, not even her mom."


I walked in, trembling in horror.

I saw her. She looked helpless as she slept.

I waited a few hours, until I saw her eyes opening gently again.

I expected doctors to run in, rushing me out.

Instead, she looked me straight in the eyes, and whispered,


"I don't know you, but I like your eyes."


1255 Comments

unicorn104149BFFmusicallychannel 1 month ago
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Upsetting made me cry again
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unicorn104149BFFmusicallychannel 1 month ago
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Makes me cry over and over again
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unicorn104149musically 1 month ago
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This made me cry 😭 so hard
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unicorn104149musically 1 month ago
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That made me cry 😭
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*mysterious.mah* 1 year ago
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6 years and still the best story i have ever read <3
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grownsimba 1 year ago
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I've probably commented on this one loads before. But this is still grand. ♥
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Radioactive 2 years ago
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I cant believe its been this long I remember reading this :)
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Iceyy 2 years ago
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Such a cute story! <3 <3
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Wanderess* 2 years ago
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I'm not crying but. OH MY GOD, THIS IS SO CUTE, THIS IS THE TRUTH LOVE MAN. Your eyes should be very cute. This is so sweet♥♥♥ upload a photo of your eyes ! owww this is os cute and smoochy♥
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100 3 years ago
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I remember this x
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Last Serenade* 3 years ago
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i can't believe it's been that long wow
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TrustMeImLying 3 years ago
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much emotion very story such eyes wow
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*I.Love.Unicorns** 3 years ago
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I love this quote.. it's so cute!!!! I'm crying
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Deep breaths, my love* 3 years ago
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im crying
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barrina41 3 years ago
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awww, his eyes must be AMAZING huh?
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myname123 3 years ago
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soo nice
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myname123 3 years ago
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sooo heart warming
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hamster_maria 3 years ago
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i almost cry!! what a beautiful quote :'
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moll :)* 3 years ago
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oh how I wish witty was still full of quotes like this
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zeldachick♥♪★♀†(^-^)* 3 years ago
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i was tearing up :') that was beautiful!
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