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Love Is A Stranger To Me Part 32 "For what?" I looked

Love Is A Stranger To Me
Part 32


"For what?" I looked at the ceiling, then at the floor, and at the door. "You'll see." My mother said flatly. She pulled out a hand gun from her tight, black pants. "No, no, no, nonononono! You -- you can't! People love ... me!" I screamed. "Yeah, newsflash honey. No one loves you." I looked around. I tried to move my hands and legs, but they wouldn't budge. "Love is a stranger to you, if you ask me." She whispered.

BANG!

The End.

17 Comments

pripri910 1 decade ago
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wow...that was, quite a story. very unexpected.
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justinluva 1 decade ago
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yeah now reading the new story you really really ruined it.
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justinluva 1 decade ago
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kat cant die! u so ruined it JK but still...... haha
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_elli_ 1 decade ago
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thanks daniel !!!!! ♥ but i think it was kind of rushed too .. i just wanted to get it over and done with so i can make a new story lol
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ashdan 1 decade ago
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I LIKED THE END!! ITS DIFFERENT!! <3
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_elli_ 1 decade ago
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but kat DIED. shes gone. the sequel is gonna be in lori's point of view this time
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Rhiannon2010 1 decade ago
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I think you should have Kat go in a fatal stage in the hospital, but after a lot of time she makes it. I think also when she is in the hospital, Lori breaks up with Connor and deceives Kat by going out with Eric. And then some kind of ending, like Kat gets out of the hospital and then Kat like hurts Lori or something but then in the end it all works out and Lori is back with Connor and Kat is with Eric. How about that? :)
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_elli_ 1 decade ago
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youll see in the sequel ♥
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laughitupp 1 decade ago
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nooo i dont want her to die and was her mom right about payin lori and eric to date her and b her friend and stuff or was she lyin?
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elli7777 1 decade ago
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that wouldve been a boring ending, no offense ......... :P ........... vvv
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sarahhxo13 1 decade ago
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noo you shouldnt have her die you should make someone come in before she does, kill her mom, and get her to a hospital then whatever haha
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_elli_ 1 decade ago
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yup and im going to make a sequel with lori's point of view .. any ideas of what could happen? i think that after kat dies, the police come and kill her mom, kat and eric go out .. and i cant think of anything else to happen
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shscheer2013 1 decade ago
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so the daughter is dead.
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elli7777 1 decade ago
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thanks that means alot :) read my profile and comment on my profile kthx
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lovelikewoah19 1 decade ago
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yes i did[;
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elli7777 1 decade ago
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did you like it? ;]
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lovelikewoah19 1 decade ago
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woah
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posted November 29, 2010 at 12:43pm UTC tagged with story

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