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Whatever It Ta kes Leave some FEEDBACK :D Attention readers of

WhateveITa kes

Leave some FEEDBACK :D
Attention readers of Whatever It Takes!
Please leave comments with feedback about the story.
How was it?
What could I do/have done better with writing?
Do you want a sequel? (Sophomore year)
Did you like the ending?
Did you like the story overall?
Did you wish something could have been different?
I'm looking for constructive criticism & feedback since this was my first story - please help me out! (: Thanks!

 

11 Comments

xolivix16 1 decade ago
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sequel please!!!!!!=)
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rasgirlx018 1 decade ago
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sequellll!
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jetadorex3 1 decade ago
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seequell
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annabananaaa11 1 decade ago
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SEQUE defintly(:
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xolivix16 1 decade ago
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love it!!! Do a sequel that would be so good!!!!:)
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i_was_enchanted_to_meet_you 1 decade ago
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a SEQUEL would be sick, and i think the story was done greaat :)
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aj_stories 1 decade ago
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deffff sequel ! (:
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jstories 1 decade ago
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SEQUELL!:D
The only thing was maybe a conversation between The couple but other that it was truly amazing!(: keep writing!
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beautifulliarxox 1 decade ago
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sequal!!!!!!!!!
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gopatandal 1 decade ago
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SEQUELLLLLLLLLL!
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BieberBaby_2181997 1 decade ago
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I Definetly Think You should do a sequel!:D Your Story Was Amazing, & Honestly their wasn't really anything wrong with your writing! It sounded good. So Keep Writing Girl, because for that Being Your First Story It Was Fantastic!(:
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posted July 22, 2011 at 12:49pm UTC tagged with story

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