Give Me Another Chance
chapter one
I was in my room painting my toenails pink when my phone vibrated.
It was a text from Raymond, but everyone calls him Ray.
He has short but kind of messy black hair. He has bright blue eyes and his skin is a nice even color. Hes tall and muscular but he isn't the most popular guy because he is a little dorky but super sweet and funny. Rays in my grade, we are both sophmores but he is 16 and i am 15 turning 16 soon.
The text said "hey beautiful;)" he would flirt with me like that.
But honestly i don't think i'm that pretty.
I am short but in shape. I also have light brown hair and blue eyes. My hair is longish and i won best hair in 8th grade and i get that i'm pretty a lot. I am pretty tan and i'm part of the popular crowd but not the most popular.
The most popular girl is Payten. She is tall, blonde, and every guys dream.
I slid my keyboard open and texted back "Hey Ray"
chapter one
I was in my room painting my toenails pink when my phone vibrated.
It was a text from Raymond, but everyone calls him Ray.
He has short but kind of messy black hair. He has bright blue eyes and his skin is a nice even color. Hes tall and muscular but he isn't the most popular guy because he is a little dorky but super sweet and funny. Rays in my grade, we are both sophmores but he is 16 and i am 15 turning 16 soon.
The text said "hey beautiful;)" he would flirt with me like that.
But honestly i don't think i'm that pretty.
I am short but in shape. I also have light brown hair and blue eyes. My hair is longish and i won best hair in 8th grade and i get that i'm pretty a lot. I am pretty tan and i'm part of the popular crowd but not the most popular.
The most popular girl is Payten. She is tall, blonde, and every guys dream.
I slid my keyboard open and texted back "Hey Ray"
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CupcakeGodess
1 decade ago
I don't really like this chapter, or the second, but I really like the third and fourth. They were good.
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GiveMeAnotherChance
1 decade ago
i just started so im sorry theres only one chapter!
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GiveMeAnotherChance
1 decade ago
thankyouu so much(: i will be putting it on very sooon<3
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ManUnitedFan94
1 decade ago
Where the rest of the damn story lol Jk !!! i love it!!
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Purple_Elephants
1 decade ago
this is amazing plz keep posting more i cant wait to read more. hay hurry with the next part i will keep checking to see if u have put it on :) x
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GiveMeAnotherChance
1 decade ago
thanks(:
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kkvpal
1 decade ago
this is so far so good. keep it upp and i like the good description(:
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GiveMeAnotherChance
1 decade ago
thanks! it get really interestingg(: we will be posting another chapter today!
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ElectricRainbow117
1 decade ago
I can't wait to read more:)
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