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Roommates Chapter 53 I stared at the reflection one last time

 

Roommates
Chapter 53
I stared at the reflection one last time in the three sided mirror.
My hair was pinned in an elegant up do with a sparkly tiara on top.
My makeup was simple, but it still made me look flawless.
And best of all, my wedding dress.
It was wrapped near the top portion, with crystals embodied from the waist up, and it flowed and cascaded towards the bottom.

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"Carson, are you ready? The ceremony is about to start!" my mother called out.
"I'm coming." I said, smiling one last time in the mirror.
I exited out of the dressing room, and got into my position.
I held the assortment of pink and yellow bouquet of flowers in my hands firmly, as they started shaking from anxiousness.
The curtains rose in front of me, exposing a crowd of people sitting in rows, all facing me.
Instead of having a traditional wedding in a church, Brett and I both agreed on holding the ceremony at a rose garden, instead.
I smiled, as I was extremely satisfied with how the rose garden looked.
White fences surrounded the area, which were covered in red and pink roses.
The stage was decorated with a variety of bright, colorful roses.
The podium, where the priest stood waiting, was draped in fresh flowers, and yellow and pink ribbons.
The white, grand piano started playing, as I took in a deep breath.
My uncle Tom walked me down the white carpet, covered in assortments of pink and red roses.
"Ready, kid?" he whispered in my ear.
I fought the urge to bite my lip, since I have found it a habit.
"I wish my dad was here." I whispered back.
"Carson, he's looking down at you now, and he's proud." my uncle Tom assured.
I nodded as we both walked in a steady pace down the white carpet.
I smiled at Brett, as I came face to face with him.
He was wearing a classic black suit, white buttoned down shirt under, and a black bow tie.
I couldn't help but notice how amazing he looked.
To his right were his grooms men, Tyson, Craig and Riley. They were all dressed in the same outfits as Brett, except they all had matching red ties.
To the left were my bridesmaids, Kristina, Cassie, and an old friend, Lila. They all looked beautiful in matching creamy pink, knee length dresses.
"You look gorgeous, Carson." Brett whispered.
I blushed. Yes, even though I'm a grown, 23 year old woman, I still blush.
The priest began to speak.
Honestly, I would've cut him in on his very first two words, because long speeches just didn't make me awake for too long.
Brett noticed my bored expression, and lightly chuckled.
"It's going to be over soon, and we can be together, forever." he whispered.
"That sounds great." I smiled.
A good fifteen minutes later, the priest finally asked Brett the question that everyone's been waiting to hear.
Brett took in a deep breath, and let it out.
His blue eyes, which I always loved, glistened. "I do."
I felt my heart skipping a beat.
The priest then glanced over at me, and asked me the life changing question.
I looked up at Brett, who seemed so sure of this decision.
He really did love me.
"I do." I smiled.
The whole crowd stood up, as they erupted into cheers.
"You may now kiss the bride." the priest instructed Brett.
Brett, without hesitation, leaned in, and gave me a long peck on the lips.
This was it.
Brett was mine until the day I die.
And, you know what?
I'm going to love it.

The End.

 

72 Comments

ilikeicecream 1 decade ago
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I love this book, I nearly cried :')
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TreasuresFromTheHeart 1 decade ago
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I LOVED THIS it made me cry seriously <3 you are an amazing writer
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_Love_Lasts_ 1 decade ago
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I started crying at this book. You're amazing at writing.
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lianemichie 1 decade ago
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i realize im late on reading this but this is ADORABLE. You should write real books! c:
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kayleebaby1210 1 decade ago
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I just read this whole thing and it was amazing!. Also, what happened to Drake. Shouldn't he be a grooms men? Oh well idk because it was an amazing story!
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1dancer9 1 decade ago
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Amazing:)
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MissAmerica7595 1 decade ago
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I just spent 2 hours reading the story and it's amazing :D btw what happened to Angela?
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guitargirl13 1 decade ago
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I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Samluvscoobydoo 1 decade ago
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<3
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Unloved_girl 1 decade ago
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Your such an amazing writer! this made me cry c:
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carolcheer 1 decade ago
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luv it! keep writing stories cus ur an amazing writer!
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Iceskater101 1 decade ago
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That's my second book/story I've read abd I'm officially obsessed with your stories! I read one every night. Yesterday I read 3 strikes or whatever and today I read roommates. I love your writing! I started crying when he got on the plane and every other tine Carson started crying. And i ABSOLUTLY LOVED how she invited the fortune teller! Your amazing! You should get these published!:)<3
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xoxo_carly_x 1 decade ago
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I got bored and I love your writing so much I decided to read an old story. I. loved. it. I cried when he left on the plain. You're a brillliant writer. I love your stories. xoxo
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quinnyy301 1 decade ago
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i just read the whole story in an hour and i was crying, laughing, smiling, and it was one of the best stories i have ever read. really it was great thank you for writing it
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thelittlemissbigtime 1 decade ago
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i cried and i lgit have been up al night and read every sigle story of yours i loved it i cried in airport part </3 ut i love the story your working on now its soooo sweeeet <33
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danielle331 1 decade ago
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Honestly, I have spent the last 2 hours readin this entire story and it just made me cry. I feel like I have the same relationship with a friend of mine. But, you are an amazing writer and I WILL buy EVERY book you write when you become an accomplished writer. <3
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acd143 1 decade ago
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thank god i was crying when i thought they wouldn't be together again ur an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!!!!
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kittykat141 1 decade ago
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whoaaaaaaa this sucks!! THE BOOK IS OVER :(( <3<3<3 it was so cute!!! (hahaha i bet you thought i was gonna say something else when i said "it sucks") :P <3<3<3
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imayellowkangaroo 1 decade ago
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It took me an hour to read this story I just couldnt stop!!(: You are an amazing writer, dont give up, Best story on Witty!(:
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Manne2010 1 decade ago
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its amazing how words on a screen can make someone soo emotional including myself
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