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laceyAnn 8 years ago
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This is really good so far(: It got my attention! I will deffiently be reading more(:
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SayingsForGirls 8 years ago
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i think this is a great storyline so far & you should definantly continue your writing(: its soo good & ill try to follow up as much as possible!
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Gummy_Bears_x3 8 years ago
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I loves it :)
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fatme32 8 years ago
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is this a true story or something u made up?
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aesalvucci 8 years ago
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love loVE LOVE the story!!
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holy-gaskarth* 8 years ago
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The story's awesome, you should definatly write more.
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RedRose 8 years ago
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I really love this!Please continue:)
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SmallvilleLover23 8 years ago
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if this is your own personal story why don't you make a FictionPress and post it there.
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Drakealicious 8 years ago
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this is good :D
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youaremyworld 8 years ago
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i love it, you should continue writing! It's very realistic and i bet a lot of girls could relate to it in different ways. good job girl
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beingstronggx3 8 years ago
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your a really good writer(: i will try to read the chapters when i can, im reading lollipopx3's && neonpanda's stories, so i will try to keep up with yours too. hah. and this girl...sounds alot like me. the loner.
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alex* 8 years ago
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Continue please(:
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rebecca* 8 years ago
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I really like this...even though it IS a slow start.(: Thanks for showing me this story it's really interesting, please continue?
PS- is this a true story?(:
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sophsunflower12 8 years ago
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this was really good! totally continue!
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tanyapumpkin 8 years ago
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really interesting, just waiting for something really major to happen like she gets bullied or falls in love :)
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WATERROCKS 8 years ago
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love it!! You should continue it!!
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xoxkay98 8 years ago
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this is great! you should deff continue!
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mybeautifulsong 8 years ago
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Very good!
may i be constructive in my criticism?
this topic happens to be repeated in books/movies often. I'm not saying it's boring, but if you want this story to be published, you may want to make it different than common stories. Add a major twist.
I know you're just starting out with this story, but you have a wonderful topic and it will be the best it can be for a publisher!
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TuckersGirl 8 years ago
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Love it!plz continue
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