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Better Together♥~One~A friendly smile, unfarmiliar face,









Better Together
~One~

A friendly smile, unfarmiliar face, a name I didn't recognize. Leo Richardson. I knew it right then, that he was different. He was a splash of color in my world of black and white. Everything about him was unique. His name, his face, his hair, his clothes. He stood out. "Rebecca Valente, you're sitting in the back, with Robin Fernandez!" my new science teacher, Mr. Douglass ordered, pointing to two lab tables in the back. When I saw Robin, the first thing I noticed was his long, wild hair. Nobody in our school had long hair like that. From that day on, I always considered Robin's hair to be the thing that set him apart. His one physical feature that made him different from everyone else in this town. Two new kids, two different backrounds, they both stood out, they were each unique, that's what would make each of them so hard to forget. 
Robin and I talked that first day of school. He was easy to talk to, friendly, and really funny. He told me about his old town, & about how much he missed his old friends.
"It's so different here." he would say. The thing he didn't realize, was just how much this town would change him...


 
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30 Comments

Anthony515042 1 decade ago
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sweet
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realityalwaysreturns 1 decade ago
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Thank you so much guys ! (: , I just posted the next chapter, If you want to check it out (:
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lgw29 1 decade ago
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this is great keep writing <3
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fallouttgirllD 1 decade ago
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thx for reading my story, and lemme just tell u that i cant wait for the next chapter in urs!!
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BabyGirl005 1 decade ago
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Keep going!(: I think it's really good so far, If you wanna be a write though it shouldnt matter what people say, write because you like too, not because you wann impress people!(:
-Katelyn-
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fallouttgirllD 1 decade ago
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i think its really good. never give up ur dream to b a writer cuz i know im never givin up
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XxcourtneydexxX 1 decade ago
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definatly keep writing!
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Amanda721 1 decade ago
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its a little difficult to read but its good :) you should keep writing
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secretsunspoken 1 decade ago
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Its really good! Just change the format. Its hard to read! Keep writing and let me know when you write the new chapter (: Im going to follow right now
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Zaaraa225 1 decade ago
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love it! :)
just make the font bigger so its easier to read :)
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xoxotheonethatgotawayxoxo 1 decade ago
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keep writing! <3
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ShyBear 1 decade ago
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im a writer, and this is very good, keep at it. maybe use a clearer font. kinda hard to read. good job.
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wittysisterstories 1 decade ago
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keep writing! Will you check out my story? & maybe tell people bout it? thanks!!
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cuttiepie_14 1 decade ago
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keep writing <3
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Siya8 1 decade ago
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I really like it, it is a very touching story I think you should carry on writing more stories.
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hockeychick15 1 decade ago
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Love itt, keep writing :)
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sammie_stories 1 decade ago
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keep writing, this is a great base for a great story!
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kto_123 1 decade ago
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Keep writing ! Love it(:
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Mollyyy 1 decade ago
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it's good! you might want to use a better, easier to read format though. follow for follow?
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MusicIsLifexoxo 1 decade ago
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its really goood
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realityalwaysreturns

posted November 22, 2011 at 6:08pm UTC tagged with story

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