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Better Together♥~One~ A friendly smile, unfamiliar face,


Better Together
~One~
 
A friendly smile, unfamiliar face, a name I didn't recognize. Leo Richardson. I knew it right then, that he was different. He was a splash of color in my world of black and white. Everything about him was unique. His name, his face, his hair, his clothes. He stood out. 
"Rebecca Valente, you're sitting in the back, with Robin Fernandez!" my new science teacher, Mr. Douglass ordered, pointing to two lab tables in the back. When I saw Robin, the first thing I noticed was his long, wild hair. Nobody in our school had long hair like that. From that day on, I always considered Robin's hair to be the thing that set him apart. His one physical feature that made him different from everyone else in this town.
Two new kids, two different backgrounds, they both stood out, they were each unique, that's what would make each of them so hard to forget. 
Robin and I talked that first day of school. He was easy to talk to, friendly, and really funny. He told me about his old town and, about how much he missed his old friends.

"It's so different here." he would say. The thing he didn't realize, was just how much this town would end up changing him...



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31 Comments

crazycat 1 decade ago
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amazing love your story it's really good can u plz comment on my page when the next chapter comes out? thxs :) <3
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icanttakeitanylonger 1 decade ago
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thats good!
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Felicity13Wallace 1 decade ago
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very good
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whitney15smhs 1 decade ago
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very good
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ashyyboo 1 decade ago
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I loved it! Maybe you should change the format though, it kinda made it look squished, but other than that it was amazing(:<3
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helms81 1 decade ago
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Very Good!(: I would LOVE to read the rest! :D
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Erinlovesyouboo 1 decade ago
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Amazing story,! Keep writing :D
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Stories_by_yours_truely 1 decade ago
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Awesome!(:
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briabot16 1 decade ago
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That's really good! But honestly,I'm not tyring to be rude at all but, you kepp posting that stuff on my quotes to read your story and stuff. Don't get me wrong thats a way to get people's attention but it's kind of kettingannoying. I'm just going to follow you thouhg becuase I love this story!! ♥
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foreverandalways41400 1 decade ago
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<3
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wooser_waycee 1 decade ago
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reaaly good :D
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gracierox 1 decade ago
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good!
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radiancewithin 1 decade ago
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It seems like a fantastic introduction to a fascinating story. Keep writing, I know it'll become a very lovely tale.

:)
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gab* 1 decade ago
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Good!
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EmilyAmber 1 decade ago
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I'd love to read more.
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Nanaa 1 decade ago
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Sounds Great! i would LOVE to read the rest when you finish?
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sticksandstones001 1 decade ago
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-its really good!(:
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Wave 1 decade ago
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Good :) You're lucky people actually like your story, I wish I had that power haha -_-
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mrsgenny62 1 decade ago
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great!! :D keep writing!!! :D
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FeralCatOwner 1 decade ago
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good job!!! keep writing!!
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posted November 23, 2011 at 10:49pm UTC tagged with story

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