i like both of them! the second one sounds quite different to other writers on witty, so it might get more response:L, maybe do the second one first and the first one second (haha) ;D

FIRST!

do both, first one first, second one second. im likin the first one. reminds me of that movie that is coming out soon, Vow, with Channing Tatum

thank you so much! I'll try and write the first chapter of each and see which one comes easier to me (:

THE SECOND ONE. It's unusual to see a story on witty that isn't about teenagers going all lovey dovey in the cliches. Also, I absolutely adore stories that are out of the box (contradictory to the story much?). Well, whichever you start writing first, I'd be happy as long as you write the second one sometime. :)

I like the number one(: they are both cool!

I might write the first one first and the second one second? So by the time I've finished the first, I won't want to write anything realistic ever (:

i think you should write the second one.it will keep people wondering. its also different, i'm getting sick of all the boyfriend girlfriend and and drinking stories. soo.... THE SECOND ONE

Thanks, I'll try to work on both so I can elaborate on them? (:

i like the first one better, but theyre both reallllly good, you should do the second one after you finish the first one :)