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Ohmigod I need another chapter RIGHT NOW!! D: (:

Awesomly awesome. Sorry I haven't been commenting lately. I'm super busy. But I'm reading actively now!

I think they were bffs when they were realy little

its great!
I cant wait to read more! (: xxx oh and well done on getting a top quote :3 xxx

More :3

plzzzz add moreeee!!!!!!!!! r tony and ava ex- lovers or something?????????????
p.s. i get if you cant post 2morrow, its sunday.

omg i wanna know u should post the next chapter oh idk... right now :D

POST TONIGHT OR I WILL DIE.

Oooooh I like it. I can't wait to find out how they know eachother

MORE !!

i like the comment thing better ;p

Its amazing!

soo good big fan

its good. kinda confusing at first but its good.

lol and omg im dying ot know and just to make sure... alex and tony are brothers? or friends?

yes im dying! ;-p

lol loveyou4ever i did notice that she propblaby wanted to get the idea out and maybe she kinda rushed but so what it was still awesome :)

looking good, sorry, i'm so nit picky, but just make sure your proff read first you said ava looks at ava at one point. once ava and tony are really intereacting make sure you make it clear whose chapter the point of view is from. don't let all the action come to soon especially if you are unsure. your doing a great job with keeping it moving but not to fast. if you want me to shut up on these comments about all this i totally can