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Love Never Dies, Right? Chapter 11 I can't believe my ears.

Love Never Dies, Right?

Chapter 11

I can't believe my ears. How is this possible?
She never mentioned it!
My thoughts bang against my skull, pleading for a way out.
ba bum ba ba bum
My head and heart beat together in time I can't catch my own breathe.
With everything going on in my life, I finally get some sleep.
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There she is. How perfect she looks.
In a stunning red dress. Brown curls bouncing. 
Everything is okay.
The sun suddenly fades from yellow to a crimson blood red.
Her figure turns dark, a black dress appears on her; taking the place of the red.
Dark makeup now is running down her face. All over her beautiful face.
Then, suddenly, a dark hooded creature with claws appears and approaches my beautiful Anna.
A resounding scream breaks the silence of the air.
Slowly, the claws move swiftly and she pulls the hood off, revealing a gorgeous, yet much scarier, version of Anna.
But instead of stunning brown eyes, she has red eyes.
Now the red eyed creature claws at Anna screaming
"Why did you let him take me? WHY?"
The creature was Abby.
"It should have been you!" The words repeat again and again.
What if Anna had been the one taken? Not Abby?
MY life would be different. So different.
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I awake in a cold sweat.
Concerned faces surrond me.
Andy's small arms are flung around my neck and his voice squeaks
"I'm so glad you are awake! AND okay!! I was not sure cause you was screaming!"
Sitting up even further, I look Mr. Mrs. Chant, Andy, and my mother and father in the eyes.
"Landon! I'm so sorry!" My mother coos.
"Son, I know it's hard." My father tries.
None of this takes the horrific images from my head.

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